First Card in AOC section in a while

[Home Slice]

Well its really my second card in 3 months

So I would like to say my card will not be perfect nor will I probably ever be since nobodies perfect.

For a fact I know that my card has ocg errors.

I would like you if you be so generous to help me with my ocg and give me helpful suggestions on the card.

Thankyou for your helpfulness if you do help of course,you don't have to of course that will be fine too.

[spoiler=Hex Gentleman][img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/186/187977.jpg[/img]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Removing From Play 1 LIGHT monster and 1 DARK monster. When this card is in face-up Attack Mode on your side of the field no Field Spell cards cannot be played. When this card is selected as an Attack Target inflict 500 direct damage to your Life Ponts to negate the attack. Once per turn select 1 card from your opponents hand and discard it.[/spoiler]

[Blace]

Nice card, also awesome effect, a way to destroy earthbound immortals without even touching them. 9.8/10

[Kuri]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Removing From Play 1 LIGHT monster and 1 DARK monster. When this card is in face-up [b]ATK [/b]on your side of the field [s]no[/s] Field Spell cards can[s]not [/s]be played. When this card is selected as an Attack Target inflict 500 direct damage to your Life Po[b]i[/b]nts to negate the attack. [s]Once per turn select 1 card from your opponents hand and discard it.[/s] Killed the effect due to randomness.
those are the ocg errors I can find...8/10

[Home Slice]

Thanks for your help guys I might fix this card later.

Though kuri for the field spell card fix you did you changed it into the exact opposite of what I intended to have it be.

But anyways thanks for the comments

[Agaming]

nice card but like the others you fix it it'll be even better