[J-Max] Project Fruit Salad

[J-Max]

[center][b]From the name alone you may be wondering. "What on earth is Project Fruit Salad?" Well it's actually a codename for a new project that I have been working on. I've made a couple of cards to show the potential and I was wondering if you peeps could give me some advice. Unions are weak in the fact that only 1 can be equipped to a monster at a time. My new "Fruity Maidens" will change that. when equipped to a monster, they are actually classes as TWO UNIONS. Let me show you what I have so far

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Add 1 "Fruity Maiden" monster from your Deck to your hand. If you control a face-up Union monster you can return it to your hand & Special Summon the added monster from your hand. The Special Summoned monster is treated as 2 Union monsters and it's original ATK & DEF is 0.

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If this card was Special Summoned by the effect of a "Fruity Maiden" monster you control, you can treat this card as 2 Union monsters when equipped to a monster you control. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to a face-up monster you control as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. Increase the Level of the equipped monster by 1 and increase its ATK by 500. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.) When this card is removed from the field, you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon 1 "Fruity Maiden" from your Deck to your Spell & Trap Zone. The Special Summoned monster is treated as a Union monster but it Union effect is negated.[/b][/center]

[J-Max]

Need advice

[Jord200]

I see no errors anywhere, except mabye in the 1st card you might need to spell out "and". great work J-max. 10/10

I love this idea.

[► ®Ćŕý® ◄]

I'm not 100 Percent sure, about these types of Union monsters, I'm more of a like old fashion, type yu-gi-oh player but uh.

I like the cards, I could see these being very useful in some ones deck. :}

[Phantom M.C.]

[b](1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.)

don't get it, how can you equip 2 unions to 1 monster if you already stated that
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[J-Max]

I copypastaed the Union ocg lol will change.

[Shizuku Oikawa]

lol, its kinda hard for me to rate these two cards, since in fact that there is only two, lol
Fruity Extravaganza is lol for the name, its effect is useful in bringin' in useful Fruity Maidens, lol
Somehow, 2 Union monsters is getting me to think that the effect is applied twice. So is Orange Olivia doubling her own Union effect?
Well she looks like she can go well with that Quick-Play Spell, so when she is returned to your hand to Special Summon the added monster, you can use her effect to discard a card and Special Summon another Fuity Maiden person, lol
This Set is pretty interesting and looks like it should continue
Pics are cool, lol, Yuri Lowell is catching Apples