Nightmares and Dreams

[MortalKombatSmoke]

[center]This is my first complete deck! 60 cards in the normal deck and 4 in the extra!
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[BT]

OCG can use work... (alot of work!)

pics are AWESOME...

soo *mumbles....* carry the one *mumbles* and divide by that *mumbles*

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[logant455]

Where did you get the nightmare serpent pic?

[MortalKombatSmoke]

@.:☆BT☆:.: thanks!

@logan: Photobucket

[BT]

Cards can only have 1 type not 2..... unless added in an effect.

and all numbers are expressed in number version:

[s]one[/s] [u]1[/u]

[MortalKombatSmoke]

Did not know that... I have a lot of editing to do... TT_TT

[BT]

lol

you dont need to. just for future notice...

check out my new card:
http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/222400-king-of-destruction/page__view__findpost__p__4637018__fromsearch__1

[Nammac1993]

Dang this deck is one bad mother-SHUT YO MOUTH!!!! I didn't take the time to read all the lores, but anytime you say , "must sacrifice one monster" something like that. Type in 1 instead of the word. Also if anybody likes playing Yugioh with dice then sure make the effect say roll a die, but if a majority thinks that is lame, then don't put in the word Die or Dice. I think playing with dice would be cool. It enhances the gameplay, which this site lets anybody do just that, which is super special awesome.

[CDude]

8/10

[DMZ]

I see I set a trend here at YCM
I don't see that much which is genuinely connected with dreams, apart from names. Care to explain?

You have OCg errors as noted, I would like to add a few:
"Pay XXX Life Points", not tribute or sacrifice
Graveyard instead of graveyard
I know what 'immune" should mean, but that is not OCG. Immune from what?
.and many more, mostly your grammar. Try to improve on that.

The cards seem to have VERY little connection to dreams and nightmares, after having read them all. This is a waste of the name, to be honest.

I am however, pleased to see creativity in the cards and effects have been thought over. If you want, PM me and we can may work together on a new set or new cards.

7/10 (Almost purely for Grammar errors)