Archwing Posted September 17, 2010 Report Share Posted September 17, 2010 Well this is a set of monsters but my sets dont work out well so im going to post these as singles or sets of 2-4. These are the first 2 cards, more well come soon in diffrent posts. The idea is they work with White Magician Pikeru and Ebon Magician Curran, They also well work with Princess Pikeru and Princess Curran. If you dont get the effect go look Curran and Pikeru up and it should make sense [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/531/121928k.jpg[/img][img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/2256/121928t.jpg[/img] ~Lore~[color="#808080"]:Purri Ebbun:When this card is summoned place 3 "Black Purri Tokens" on your opponents side of the field (Beast-Type/DARK/1 star/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position. During your Standby Phase inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent for each "Black Purri Token" on your opponents side of the field.. During your Main Phase if you control 1 or more "Ebon Magician Curran" you can send this Face-up Card to the bottom of your deck to Special Summon 1 monster with "Purri" in its name from your Deck (Other than Purri Ebbuny).[/color]~Lore~[color="#C0C0C0"]:Purri Ashen: When this card is summoned place 3 "White Purri Tokens" on your side of the field (Beast-Type/LIGHT/1 star/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position. The tokens cannot be used as a tribute. During your Standby Phase increase your Life points by 400 for each "White Purri Token" on your side of the field. During your Main Phase if you control 1 or more "White Magician Pikeru" you can send this Face-up Card to the bottom of your deck to Special Summon 1 monster with "Purri" in its name from your Deck (Other than Purri Ashen).[/color] If your haveing problems readng the lore just highlight it you lazy bum [size="4"][color="#0000FF"]Rate/Hate/Comment/Kwai!!![/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SP0RE Posted September 17, 2010 Report Share Posted September 17, 2010 I would use them... Then again I like the Ebon/Pikeru archetype... 9/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 Thanks~! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeDeFiA Posted September 18, 2010 Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 I like the fact you use tokens. I was always fond of using tokens when I made cards. The pictures are a bit.. dull.. but fit the names perfectly. As for the effects, I don't do OCG errors, but I could understand the pretty well, so, 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 [quote]The pictures are a bit.. dull[/quote] I know.... Ive been trying to find someone who can do backgrounds for pics but i havent had much luck so far '~' Thanks for the rate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheMan Posted September 18, 2010 Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 Wow, 2 sweet beaters . Like them. Maybe,you could mention those tokens Summoned by Purri Ebunny cannot be used as Tributes for Tribute Summon, cuz Ebon Magician Curran inflicts damage when your opponent has monsters right? So, this could be "OMG NO" from your opponent when you play the card and activate its effect . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 [quote] Maybe,you could mention those tokens Summoned by Purri Ebunny cannot be used as Tributes for Tribute Summon[/quote]O>O if forgot about that! Thanks for the comment Ill fix that if i can before i leave.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bronzegoldquake Posted September 18, 2010 Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 I like the effects and their names, but the images are pretty boring(not terrible though) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Engetsu Posted September 18, 2010 Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 I'll make my review simple, but meaningful (hopefully). Names: I like them. Suits them well. Pics: A bit bland, but fits their names. OCG: I see no errors, so it's good. Effects: Pretty useful. I would use these cards if they were real. Both of them are balanced as well. Just one thing. Wouldn't it make more sense for them to be Spellcasters? They don't seem Warrior like to me.. 8.5 out of 10 Also 5 star rate and 1+ Rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted September 18, 2010 Report Share Posted September 18, 2010 pics really do need better backgrounds the cards work well with curran and pikeru. but ebbuny's effect isn't that great When this card destroys a "Black Purri Token" Inflict 300 points of damage to your opponents Life Points. [color="#000000"]for a number of reasons: 1. the tokens can be tributed 2. it requires ebunny to attack and destroy the tokens, which will then limit its ss effect. it might be better to just stick with the damage per Standby Phase effect. overall: 8/10 [/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2010 [quote]I'll make my review simple, but meaningful (hopefully). Names: I like them. Suits them well. Pics: A bit bland, but fits their names. OCG: I see no errors, so it's good. Effects: Pretty useful. I would use these cards if they were real. Both of them are balanced as well. Just one thing. Wouldn't it make more sense for them to be Spellcasters? They don't seem Warrior like to me.. 8.5 out of 10 Also 5 star rate and 1+ Rep. [/quote] Thanks! Thats actuall feedback Hurray! Yah, like i said about the pics, im looking for someone who can do backgrounds O>O mabey i should try requests? [quote]pics really do need better backgrounds the cards work well with curran and pikeru. but ebbuny's effect isn't that great When this card destroys a "Black Purri Token" Inflict 300 points of damage to your opponents Life Points. for a number of reasons: 1. the tokens can be tributed 2. it requires ebunny to attack and destroy the tokens, which will then limit its ss effect. it might be better to just stick with the damage per Standby Phase effect. overall: 8/10 [/quote] Ditto with the pic thing... [s]Ill go fix the effect on Ebunny ASAP~[/s](After i make my pirate card :3) A rep for both of your help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2010 fix'd and bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2010 Buhdump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted September 21, 2010 Report Share Posted September 21, 2010 Purri Ashen is brooooooooooooooooooooooken. 3 tokens from just summoning it? Are you crazy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2010 yesh.... >_> they dont have any ATK of DEF, mabey i should add that when shes removed they get removed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted September 21, 2010 Report Share Posted September 21, 2010 [quote name='Archwing' timestamp='1285108836' post='4644657'] yesh.... >_> they dont have any ATK of DEF, mabey i should add that when shes removed they get removed? [/quote] It doesn't matter if they don't have any ATK or DEF. The fact is that once you summon Purri Ashen, you have 3 Tokens waiting to be used for Synchro/Tribute fodder. Even if you change the effect to what you just suggested, it doesn't make the card any less broken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted September 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2010 fine, ill add that they can be tributed in any way. Better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted September 22, 2010 Report Share Posted September 22, 2010 Not being picky here or anything like that Archwing, but your attempts are futile. Purri Ashen is too broken. Even if they cannot be Tributed, it still leaves the fact that they're free stall/synchro fodder. 3 Tokens just for summoning it is too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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