[♥] E.T. Exterminator

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

[center][color="#FF0000"][b]Holo done by me. I know it may suck but I'm proud of what I did since its my first time in a LOOOOOONG time doing one and I'm out of practice.[/b][/color]
[img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/6365/142021k.jpg[/img][IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/qs00no.jpg[/IMG]
[i]While this card is face-up on the field, neither player can Special Summon monsters that are Banished. Negate the effects of cards that would Banish a card. This card cannot be destroyed by battle.[/i]
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[Zeaux]

The last part just made it OP IMO. D:

Maybe make it with less ATK and DEF? Or just remove the last part.

Anyway, I liked it a lot.

[Archwing]

~Desu~
Name: Its okay....
Pic: Pretty good
Effect: Short but good
OCG looks good
Balanced
I dont use stuff from out of play much so id use it
8.5/10

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

^^ thanks Kan! (Srry can translate atm cause I'm checking from mu phone
D: I should posted the effect in translate ><

But ok how does 1500 atk sound?

[Zeaux]

No problem, I can understand it. 

Cards that cannot be destroyed by battle usually have lower ATK, like Spirit Repaer, and have a draw back too. This one don't have. D:

IDK, it is your choice now.

[moppmoppmopp]

What holo? It only look more "unattractive" and old.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

Lol mopp is a fail. Do not post in my threads if all your going to do is be spiteful. My comment on your card was serious and justified where as yours is obviously just to show how annoyed you are with me and to be spiteful which I suppose could be treated as flaming although its very poor flaming.

This is also spam. This isn't showcase where you can just comment on the look and leave it at that. This is realistic cards. Post about the look AND about the card. But even if you do post about my card, justify your reasoning or it'll just be worthless and spammy.

And to wrap things up. If you can't take a critique then don't post your cards.

[moppmoppmopp]

[quote name='♥Łövëły Ċ.Ċ♥' timestamp='' post='']
And to wrap things up. If you can't take a critique then don't post your cards.
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My card had acctually à cool template with took over an hour to make, and all others who have seen it think it is cool. And then, you say it looks "unattractive". Of course I am pissed off. I can take critique but I didnt like your attitude, the "I know more than you and thats why I give you critique" attitude. And you said you where gonna report me, you could have thought it over. I hadnt been informed by that rule. And if there is one that cannot take critique its you, you acctually made à angry reply to My comment. Even if you didnt mean it, you are now on My hate list. That was revenge. My Long Comment Revenge.

[BT]

While this card is face-up on the field, neither player can Special Summon monsters that are [b]destroyed or removed from play[/b]. Negate the effects of cards that would [b]destroy[/b] a card. This card cannot be destroyed by battle.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

[quote name='.:☆BT☆:.' timestamp='1284826858' post='4637072']
While this card is face-up on the field, neither player can Special Summon monsters that are [b]destroyed or removed from play[/b]. Negate the effects of cards that would [b]destroy[/b] a card. This card cannot be destroyed by battle.
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Your OCG correction changes the effect completely.

Cant use it.

Banish isnt OCG its just a new CG made by Liam to mean remove from play so i use it now :3

[quote name='moppmoppmopp' timestamp='1284826107' post='4637028']
My card had acctually à cool template with took over an hour to make, and all others who have seen it think it is cool. And then, you say it looks "unattractive".
[b]We are all entitled to our opinion. You card look as if it had been through a washing machine, then buried in sand, then finally tenderized by a meat tenderizer. I would ask for a card that looked like that even if it was the only edition of that card. Totally unattractive[/b]
Of course I am pissed off.
[b]Then you should have argued your case within your own thread instead of bringing it here. That was poor choice on your part and do it again, I'll have to find a way to make you stop/[/b]
I can take critique but I didnt like your attitude
[b]Attitude? I had no attitude in that post. It was a critique that had an opinion that you didn't like so you decided to go balistic and throw a tantrum in [b]MY[/b] thread.[/b]
the "I know more than you and thats why I give you critique" attitude.
[b]Lol fail. I had no attitude. Its called a critique. All critiques sound somewhat mean. It was you who misinterpreted.[/b]
And you said you where gonna report me, you could have thought it over.
[b]This tells me you did not read my post. I told you I'd report you for your flagrent misuse of the bumping system. 24 hour period between bumpin. You bumped 3 times within the space of 10 hours. Anyone has the right to report that since it's against the rules. But I didn't. I gave you the heads up that it was possible. It's past, stop complaining about it.[/b]
I hadnt been informed by that rule.
[b]Which is why next time...Read the rules.
But yes I figured so, that is why I didnt report you.[/b]
And if there is one that cannot take critique its you, you acctually made à angry reply to My comment.
[b]1) it was not angry it was quite calm and peaceful.
2) it was the farthest thing from a critique.
3) ir was unjustified and crap so it doesnt even count as a comment.[/b]
Even if you didnt mean it, you are now on My hate list. That was revenge. My Long Comment Revenge.
[b]You make it sound as if I care. I don't exactly make it my life goal to be friends with an over emotional person.[/b]
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Now, dont comment back unless it's about the card or else i [b]Will[/b] report you for spam.

[crossader]

[color="#800080"][size="3"][font="Comic Sans MS"][b]I think changing the OCG like that makes the effect confusing, like... maybe you use that CG 'cuz you saw Liam using it, but only you and a few knows about it. I suggest, just a maybe, to say that Banish means Remove from play. Just a suggestion.

About the effect, the last line makes him terribly OP'd. Like some1 said b4, monsters that cannot be destroyed in battle are usualy low-ATK monsters o extremely hard-to-summon monsters.

8/10[/b][/font][/size][/color]

[moppmoppmopp]

Can Liam MAKE CG's?

And, anyway, im sorry for that comment. And i forgive you for that comment you made on My Mutated Demon. I have tried being pissed off and just want to be friends. OK?

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

[quote name='crossader' timestamp='1284827784' post='4637130']
[color="#800080"][size="3"][font="Comic Sans MS"][b]I think changing the OCG like that makes the effect confusing, like... maybe you use that CG 'cuz you saw Liam using it, but only you and a few knows about it.
[b]Actually Liam just suggested it. I'm the only one who actually uses it :3. But in every thread I've used it I've added the meaning of the word at the top (not in this thread though. I thought by now people would get it );[/b] I suggest, just a maybe, to say that Banish means Remove from play. Just a suggestion.

About the effect, the last line makes him terribly OP'd. Like some1 said b4, monsters that cannot be destroyed in battle are usualy low-ATK monsters o extremely hard-to-summon monsters.

8/10[/b][/font][/size][/color]
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Im making his ATK 1500

>> Although I'm just gonna do the YCM one and not the holoed one @.@ cause then I'd have to re-holo and yea..aint doin the same card over again @.@

[BT]

whats CG?

[moppmoppmopp]

[quote name='.:☆BT☆:.' timestamp='' post='']
whats CG?
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I don't know. Must ve something.

[crossader]

[color="#800080"][size="3"][font="Comic Sans MS"][b]CG means Card Grammar: the rule to write the card.[/b][/font][/size][/color]

[BT]

you said LiAM makes CG's

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

[quote name='moppmoppmopp' timestamp='1284827898' post='4637137']
Can Liam MAKE CG's?

And, anyway, im sorry for that comment. And i forgive you for that comment you made on My Mutated Demon. I have tried being pissed off and just want to be friends. OK?
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Well then I apologize for being so rude.

Yea he can. Its just a suggestion, I chose to follow through cause it was much more convenient

[moppmoppmopp]

[quote name='♥Łövëły Ċ.Ċ♥' timestamp='' post='']
Well then I apologize for being so rude.

Yea he can. Its just a suggestion, I chose to follow through cause it was much more convenient
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Wut? He can? Can he make OCG?

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

[quote name='.:☆BT☆:.' timestamp='1284828359' post='4637167']
you said LiAM makes CG's
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TCG = Trading Card Game (The worldwide format of Yu-Gi-Oh)
OCG = Original Card Game (The Japanese/Asia format for Yu-Gi-Oh; Some cards are specific to OCG and have not been released into TCG)
OCG (here) = Official Card Grammar (The writing format for a Yu-Gi-Oh card)

[BT]

so... he told yugioh and they agreed -[sub]o[/sub]-

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

[quote name='moppmoppmopp' timestamp='1284828480' post='4637178']
Wut? He can? Can he make OCG?
[/quote]
Not raelly, but I just decided to go ahead and use it rather than writing out remove from play.

[quote name='.:☆BT☆:.' timestamp='1284828554' post='4637187']
so... he told yugioh and they agreed -[sub]o[/sub]-
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No o.O

[Limited Edition KING]

[center][i]While this card is face-up on the field, neither player can Special Summon monsters that are Banished.[/i]
[b][i]What cards do SS cards that are removed from play? I know there's that Equip Spell one but are there any others?[/i][/b]

[i]Negate the effects of cards that would Banish a card.[/i]

[b][i]Good counter for cards like Ciaus, Bottomless, Allure of Darkness, DAD, Cards for Black Feathers etc it stops them dead in their tracks, bad for me though because I use these cards. [/i][/b]

[i]This card cannot be destroyed by battle.[/i]
[b][i]This seems out of place, your focusing on removing from play I would replace this with another effect like "if this card would be destroyed by battle, you can Banish this card instead." then Special Summon it when you see fit.[/b][/i]
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And the image does suit the name, but it's just too low quality I suggest trying another image.

[Phantom M.C.]

the card's quite op, mainly cause of the last effect. i guess the rest is fine 8/10

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

[quote name='King.' timestamp='1284829759' post='4637268']
[center][i]While this card is face-up on the field, neither player can Special Summon monsters that are Banished.[/i]
[b][i]What cards do SS cards that are removed from play? I know there's that Equip Spell one but are there any others?[/i][/b]

[i]Negate the effects of cards that would Banish a card.[/i]

[b][i]Good counter for cards like Ciaus, Bottomless, Allure of Darkness, DAD, Cards for Black Feathers etc it stops them dead in their tracks, bad for me though because I use these cards. [/i][/b]

[i]This card cannot be destroyed by battle.[/i]
[b][i]This seems out of place, your focusing on removing from play I would replace this with another effect like "if this card would be destroyed by battle, you can Banish this card instead." then Special Summon it when you see fit.[/b][/i]
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And the image does suit the name, but it's just too low quality I suggest trying another image.
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Well DDR can, Nihilistic Summoning Technique, return from the different dimension, Return from the Dark Dimension,

theres more but cant remember them @.@