Gravity Distortions

[Mr Dr Professor Spaz]

I have made my third set.
They are the Gravity set
Gravity monsters are a series of Wind monsters with varying types that focus on returning cards to their owner's hand.
It's small because I could not come up with a lot of ideas.
Chances are that I will add more cards, but who knows.
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Image Credit to Jazin Kay

[Mr Dr Professor Spaz]

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[Mr Dr Professor Spaz]

BUMP

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

OCG is bad. If you want me to fix it, post all of their effects.

Card 1 cant even be summoned. Like. Literally. No such thing as Gravity monsters. Also It's last effect...What? Add it from where?
Card 2 is totally unplayable. Low chance of it being destroyed by a monster w/ 3000 ATK.
Card 3 is meh. Nothing wrong but nothing great.
Card 4 is the same as Card 3.
Card 5 is OP. Add into Mist Valley and it cranks. It can attack 3 times. And it has 3000 ATK? Um no. RDA isn't even that powerful.
Card 6 is good.
Card 7 same as Card 3.
Card 8 is terrible. Not playable. It should be level 5.
Card 9 isnt very playable. Greatly overshadowed by Dandylion.
Card 10 is the same as Card 3.
Card 11 not very playable. The last effect is a dud. Not needed. UPs it.
Card 12 is OP. Place a restriction on the card SS. You could summon a BEWD by returning SoRL then replay SoRL.
Card 13 is not very playable. Why would I wait 10 turns to return only 2 cards? Makes no sense. There are better cards. I can return all S/T cards w/ Giant Trunade. I can return monsters w/ Compulsary Evacuation Device.
Card 14 is ok.
Card 15 meh. Not sure why it should be returned.
Card 16 so UP it's become less playable. No need to keep it from being special summoned and no need to return it.

Overall it's not a playable set. Archetypes have the same base theme but your archetype is to closely related. All their effects are so close it's redundant. You're almost literally running teh same card 16 times. Ice Barriers and Mist Valley achieves this better than these and their much more playable.

[inquistidor]

i like the idea of bouncing stuff, cuz that just pisses the opponent off, but the pictures dont really follow a theme. and some of the cards just arent very good.

and theres a pattern i see with card makers is they usually make like 10 monsters. if your having fun making cards thats good! but i think its a better idea just to run 3 to 2 copies of like, 5-7 monsters.

nice concept

7/10

[mythcaptor]

ocg is off, and I dont see what they have to do with gravity. Also, some of the high levels are a little underpowered

[Ozuma_lord_of_the_fire]

Pictures: Excelent! I love them! But change the picture of the last card you published 9.5/10 (Almost there...)
Effects: The effects are good, but some monsters are almost impossible to summon, the OCG it is not bad, maybe 1 or 2 errors but not bad 7.5/10 (Impressionive )
Power: A little more 8/10 (very good, but you may do better)
Total: 25/30 (Wel done, work a little more).
Improviments: Upgtade the ATK and DEF of some monsters, change the picture of your last Synchro monster, and put your monsters more playable.