Fader Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/2966/79912.jpg[/img] enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y.M.R.creator Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 Your image is bad and i've spotted some OCG error.Effect doesn't seem handy.I think this is a fail. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 [quote name='Y.M.R.creator' timestamp='1285444225' post='4653953'] Your image is bad and i've spotted some OCG error.Effect doesn't seem handy.I think this is a fail. 3/10 [/quote] Ok. Can you please state those errors and use kinder words please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fader Posted September 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 [quote name='Y.M.R.creator' timestamp='1285444225' post='4653953'] Your image is bad and i've spotted some OCG error.Effect doesn't seem handy.I think this is a fail. 3/10 [/quote] If you want to talk about nonrealistic fail cards look at your sig...now i will be nice i just needed revenge Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 [quote name='Adament Howls' timestamp='1285444570' post='4653978'] If you want to talk about nonrealistic fail cards look at your sig...now i will be nice i just needed revenge [/quote] Don't forget the OCG errors in it. Card needs a better effect (2nd part or a revamp), maybe a mini-set to support it (fusions, spells). Image needs some work, I really don't know what it is :/ make sure to put a monster's name in " " 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y.M.R.creator Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 You cannot see how the monster looks like very well. OCG has to be: When this card destroys a monster your opponent controls by battle. And if think that the effect can be far more intresting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 [s]that was my idea [/s] lolz i kinda agree with Y.C.M Creator though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 Alright, I believe this is the correct OCG: When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "Nitrogeddon" from your hand or Deck. [font="sans-serif"][size="3"][size=2][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="3"][size=3] [/size][/size][/font][/size][/size][/font] [font="sans-serif"][size="3"][size=2][font="arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif"][size="3"][size=3]Also IMO this card is OP'd, this card is obviously meant to be similar to Hydrogeddon, but you could easily get 3 out on the field with 1900 ATK each making 5700 ATK total. Also the pic needs improved, it is blurry and hard to make out. I would recommend changing it to just the hand, that would be better. It's nice to see some support for Geddon monsters.[/size][/size][/font][/size][/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SP0RE Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 I think you should change the effect to, When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, you pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "geddon" monster from your hand or Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 This really isn't good. Sorry. Anyways, on to the *official* rate. Pros- +Decent idea. Cons- -Horrid OCG. -Horrid everyday grammar. -Horrid Picture. -Could become OP'd with a 1900 ATK beatstick AND the ability to summon more. Neutrals- o I'm pretty sure "nitro" has to do with freezing stuff. Hence, liquid nitrogen, which is a chemical that freezes stuff. Like I said, this is pretty bad. It needs a ton of work. 4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SP0RE Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 [quote name='Mecha Pedobear' timestamp='1285445473' post='4654039'] Neutrals- o I'm pretty sure "nitro" has to do with freezing stuff. Hence, liquid nitrogen, which is a chemical that freezes stuff. Like I said, this is pretty bad. It needs a ton of work. 4/10. [/quote] Also Nitrogen isn't flammable... If it was, 90% of the Earth's atmosphere would be up in flames! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fader Posted September 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 KK i like spores idea and this is an old card I made as a 2 star that a posted...Just changed the name and posted it but i will do OCG fixes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SP0RE Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 [quote name='Adament Howls' timestamp='1285446229' post='4654090'] KK i like spores idea and this is an old card I made as a 2 star that a posted...Just changed the name and posted it but i will do OCG fixes [/quote] Spore? I presume you mean me.... I wonder if I can change my name to spore... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fader Posted September 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 Hmph I mustve read the member title instead of the name and called you spore...lol is this better and sorry bout the fire I was out of Ideas and didnt want to make some radioactive things like Uranigeddon or Thorigeddon [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/4987/79912u.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Jay~ Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 It's not original. The "geddons" are dinosaur for one and the effect is the same as Hydrogeddon, but he has a purpose for doing that, so you could make Water Dragon. I suggest giving it a different effect to support Hydrogeddon and Oxygeddon or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 [quote name='Adament Howls' timestamp='1285446719' post='4654123'] Hmph I mustve read the member title instead of the name and called you spore...lol is this better and sorry bout the fire I was out of Ideas and didnt want to make some radioactive things like Uranigeddon or Thorigeddon [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/4987/79912u.jpg[/img] [/quote] The OCG is very good until the last sentence. It should be "When this card is sent to the Graveyard remove from play all Monsters Special Summoned by this card's effect." Just some small mistakes. Yeah, this is a better effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SP0RE Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 What about Phosphorgeddon? Phosphorus is really flammable! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted September 25, 2010 Report Share Posted September 25, 2010 lower case opponent's monster, and capitalize deck. Effect isnt new but balanced. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DLÂ Posted September 26, 2010 Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 The pic is not bad...it's just blurry. The effect is better now, altho there's still an OCG error FTW pointed out. Kinda useful, though not really original. Quite balanced, however. Congratz, it's pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted September 26, 2010 Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 now that i really look at the pic... ...is that your desktop background? i think i can see the icons Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DLÂ Posted September 26, 2010 Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 .......... Can you believe I just noticed that? Wow, that's............new. Never seen someone use their desktop for a card.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted September 26, 2010 Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 [quote name='iRiolu!' timestamp='1285470782' post='4655728'] now that i really look at the pic... ...is that your desktop background? i think i can see the icons [/quote] lol your right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Welche the crab Posted September 26, 2010 Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 I love how its exactly like Hydrogeddon. Your a genius for not thinking up anything yourself. Bravo good sir. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted September 26, 2010 Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 [quote name='Dark Link 401' timestamp='1285470878' post='4655732'] .......... Can you believe I just noticed that? Wow, that's............new. Never seen someone use their desktop for a card.... [/quote] I can believe it because I just noticed it too... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fader Posted September 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2010 No, but holy crap I thought those were heiroglyphs when i saw them... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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