Experimenting with Unique effects.

[Makο]

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Lore: Select and activate 1 of these effects:
- Increase the ATK of all Beast-Type monsters you control by 100 for every Beast-Type monster your opponent controls. Then decrease the DEF of all Beast-Type monsters you control by 300.
-Tribute 1 Beast-Type monster you control and pay Life Points equal to its Level x 100 to send 1 card your opponent controls to the Graveyard.

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Lore: Once Summoned, place 1 (max.1)Shell Counter on this card. Place 1 more Shell Counter on this every turn there after. Once per turn, you may take off 1 Shell Counter on a Card of your choice. Every Card aside from The Shell Collector with a Shell Counter on it loses 100 ATK, 300 DEF, becomes a Water Attribute and is treated as a Beast-Type Monster.

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Lore: Once Summoned, this card gains 300 DEF for every Dark Attribute sent to the Graveyard thereafter. Once Summoned, you may send this card to your Opponents Spell and Trap card area, and keep it there as long a desired. As long as it is there, all Spells and Traps are negated.




Criticism accepted. Rate on OCG, Originality, usefulness, and Pic.

[Tourmaline]

Once this card is activated, you may give it one of these effects:

•You can increase the ATK of all Beast-type monsters on you control by 100 for every Beast-type monster your opponent controls. All Beast-type monsters you control lose 300 DEF for each Beast-type monserrat you control.

•Tribute 1 Beast-type monster you control to send 1 card on your opponent's side of the field to the Graveyard. You lose 100x the level of the Tributed

[Phantom M.C.]

terrible ocg mako, here's a fix:

[b]Select and activate 1 of these effects:[/b]
-[b] I[/b]ncrease the ATK of all Beast-Type [b]monsters[/b] you control by 100 for every Beast-Type [b]monster your opponent controls[/b]. [b]Then decrease the DEF of all Beast-Type monsters you control by 300.[/b]
-Tribute 1 Beast-Type monster [b]you control[/b] [b]and pay Life Points equal to its Level x 100 [/b]to send 1 [b]card your opponent controls[/b] to the Graveyard. [b]

overall, its an ok card. keep trying 7/10
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[Makο]

Thanks guys, but which OCG fix should I use???

[edit] decided to make a pole on which one.

[Tourmaline]

[i]Once this card is activated, you may give it one of these effects:

•You can increase the ATK of all Beast-type monsters on you control by 100 for every Beast-type monster your opponent controls. All Beast-type monsters you control lose 300 DEF for each Beast-type monserrat you control.

•Tribute 1 Beast-type monster you control to send 1 card on your opponent's side of the field to the Graveyard. You lose 100 Life Points times the level of the Tributed monster.

[/i]

Try that, for OCG. Anyways, I find this card is underpowered. It's first effect is a -1. It's second effect is a -2 for you, and you lose Life Points. While Life Points are only important once you have under 1500 (My Bosy as a Shield then becomes obsolete), it's better to preserve them, unless you'll gain much more from losing some.

[b]OCG: 9.5/10 [/b]Your main problem is with the "under your control" thing. You should be saying "you control", instead. Other than that, it's nigh perfect, I find.

[b]Originality: 9/10[/b] The second effect is a bad version of Tribute to the Doom, I think that's the name. The first effect is VERY situational. In how many official duels out of one-hundred will you actually both specialize in beasts? If you don't, then it's automatically zero percent. If you do, you'll probably duel seven or eight people who specialize in beasts, alone. Overall, the effect is pretty original, though.

[b]Usefulness: 3/10[/b] I'm being nice, though. I've explained this, already. Both the effects result only in you losing, and that's BEST case scenario. Actually, best case scenario is somebody at full life points using Solemn Judgment to negate this. I'm sorry, I just find very little use in this.

[b]Picture: 8/10[/b] The artwork is much better than those people who post images of anime characters. The dragons in here actually have a slight resemblance to the ones in Yu-Gi-Oh!. I couldn't see this on a real card, but I could see it being slightly edited and THEN put on a card. Y'know? To match the art style.

[b]Overall: 7.375/10 or 29.5/40[/b]

Sorry, ignore my first post. I posted that by mistake. My second post is my real OCG.

[Makο]

Thanks for the very complete review^^I'll be posting more cards here soon.

New card added. I need a vote or two!

[Makο]

Glirko Rider added. I'm gonna use Gala's fix. Plus, para voted for himself >.>