Ace9Brine Posted October 2, 2010 Report Share Posted October 2, 2010 [img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/7629/276551.jpg[/img] 'Imprisoner' + 'Angel of truth' When this card is destroyed by battle you may choose 2 monsters on your ooponent's side of the field and destroy them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 1. Never use fake Sub-Types. "Angel=Fairy" 2.Do not use more ATK than the "Blue Eyes White Dragon"! 3.You have some OCG errors (Official Card Grammar).."may=can" "choose=select". I can't see any other errors. all at all 5/10 try harder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoneycombTroy Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 Yoy put an extra o in oponent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 post the fusion material monsters, all the OCG errors and other things have been made, so i give it a 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheComposer Posted October 3, 2010 Report Share Posted October 3, 2010 Like Jad said, make the fusion material monsters as well and post them. Don't make their names out of thin air. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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