Bartimaeus Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 Let's start with the central card of this set... [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/3938/293720j.jpg[/img] Support... [img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/8605/293720v.jpg[/img] [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/3677/293720k.jpg[/img] And, of course, no set would be complete without a boss monster... [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/6418/293720.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Dr Professor Spaz Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 using those cards, you cannot Synchro Summon "Task Master Doom Lord" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bartimaeus Posted October 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 Thanks. It's fixed now, just like that small typo in Doom Runner's effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jehy Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 First off, your images have no relation to each other, and each of them have shabby quality. Secondly, your OCG is off a lot. Allow me to help. [b]Doom Runner: If this card is Special Summoned, inflict 800 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. Clear the Way!: Special Summon 1 "Doom Runner" from your Graveyard. The Special Summoned "Doom Runner" can attack directly this turn. Doomed Synchron: If this card is used as Synchro material, inflict 800 points of damage to each players Life Points. Task Master Doom Lord: 1 Tuner-Type monster + 1 "Doom Runner" If this card is Synchro Summoned successfully, you can Special Summon up to 3 "Doom Runner" from your Hand, Deck, or Graveyard.[/b] I hope I helped. Doom Synchron needs to be changed to a Tuner sub-type and not effect. P.S. > Don't use Google for images, use Photobucket or DeviantArt websites. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bartimaeus Posted October 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 lol You hit the nail right on the head. I have been using google images to get my stuff. It kind of worked for my Verna set, but I wasn't able to find a real good picture for "Doomed Synchron." I'm quite fond of the pic I found for "CLEAR THE WAY!" though. Do you think "Doom Runner" and "Task Master" fit together? I just thought Synchron was off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jehy Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 They have some relations, but not very noticeable. I can tell if they're Google because, nearly all Google images have those blurs near or around the focal point of the images. They need a better Image browser. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 ...In that fix above me. Have you ever taken a look at an actual Synchro monster, you should notice you do not say Tuner-Type. Just Tuner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 1st Card: A lot of OCG errors, it can confuse the mind "deal 800 damage to your opponent" what are you dealing damage on your opponents on? Life Points, Monsters ATK or DEF? It is also over powered for a Lv. 3 monster. Not that it matters but the Image is 9-Tailed Fox Naruto 2nd Card: OCG errors, Overpowered because there is no dealing damage on your self. Because if you summon a Lv. 8 monster with 2800 attack that deals 2800 damage to your opponents Life Points and there's no setbacks to this. 3rd Card: OCG errors, Synchro Summon should be capitalized like so. Should be a Tuner monster and it is a tad OPed 4th Card: Overpowered and not playable, if there is already 6 monsters on the field then the card effect is completely useless. Again OCG errors you have to capitalize things Overall I give you a 2/10 this should not discourage you but only teach you. You need to study other Card Makers who know how to make cards. EDIT: Jehy you in my opinion, your not a very good critic because you seem to be very Anal over Images. Like they care.. Do they contribute to the duel what so ever? No.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 Sorrow, in the new OCG, 'deal x damage' always means it is damage to the Life Points. I just wanted to make that clear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bartimaeus Posted October 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 [quote name='Cpt. Sorrow' timestamp='1286154121' post='4677775'] 1st Card: A lot of OCG errors, it can confuse the mind "deal 800 damage to your opponent" what are you dealing damage on your opponents on? Life Points, Monsters ATK or DEF? It is also over powered for a Lv. 3 monster. Not that it matters but the Image is 9-Tailed Fox Naruto 2nd Card: OCG errors, Overpowered because there is no dealing damage on your self. Because if you summon a Lv. 8 monster with 2800 attack that deals 2800 damage to your opponents Life Points and there's no setbacks to this. 3rd Card: OCG errors, Synchro Summon should be capitalized like so. Should be a Tuner monster and it is a tad OPed 4th Card: Overpowered and not playable, if there is already 6 monsters on the field then the card effect is completely useless. Again OCG errors you have to capitalize things Overall I give you a 2/10 this should not discourage you but only teach you. You need to study other Card Makers who know how to make cards. EDIT: Jehy you in my opinion, your not a very good critic because you seem to be very Anal over Images. Like they care.. Do they contribute to the duel what so ever? No.. [/quote] Thanks for the input, but I'm having trouble understanding your criticism of "CLEAR THE WAY!" It only works for Doom Runner, and could only result in your opponent being dealt 1600 damage. I didn't figure that to be OP because you leave yourself wide open with a weak 800 monster on the field. Also, in regard to Task Master, if you used a Doomed Synchron and a Doom Runner to Synch, you couldn't have a full field when summoning. (On a side note, the field limit is five, not six.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorrow. Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 [quote name='Bartimaeus' timestamp='1286155281' post='4677837'] Thanks for the input, but I'm having trouble understanding your criticism of "CLEAR THE WAY!" It only works for Doom Runner, and could only result in your opponent being dealt 1600 damage. I didn't figure that to be OP because you leave yourself wide open with a weak 800 monster on the field. Also, in regard to Task Master, if you used a Doomed Synchron and a Doom Runner to Synch, you couldn't have a full field when summoning. (On a side note, the field limit is five, not six.) [/quote] I was writing my Post before you made the big changes, and I did not see that but that is still OPED.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bartimaeus Posted October 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 Well, I've made some more changes...hopefully for the better. Doom Runner is no longer nine-tails, but a chick setting stuff on fire. I was hoping that would put it more in sync with the rest of the set. I think I might be looking to change up task master soon...perhaps he should be a chick too. Anime chicks are so easy to find on photobucket. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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