Ok, I have NO idea how this will turn out...

[Makο]

[img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/6107/258841v.jpg[/img]
My Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Summoned if your opponent declares a Direct Attack to your Life Points. Negate the attack, and Summon to the field. This card cannot be returned to your hand.

J-Max's OCG fixed Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand in response to a direct attack to your Life Points by a monster your opponent controls. Negate the direct attack used to Special Summon this card.




Idk about the OCG, whether I used the term Direct Attack properly, or anything, really. But more importantly...is it Op'd?


Criticism and Comments accepted.

[Edit] OCG fix by J-Max. Too bad my skill with OCG isn't enough for it NOT to be fixed.

[J-Max]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand in response to a direct attack to your Life Points by a monster your opponent controls. Negate the direct attack used to Special Summon this card.

Best I could do mate

[Makο]

Thanks for the fix. I'll do it. Now, what about the card itself? I prefer a detailed analysis.

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

Instead of Warrior/Spell Caster (should be Spellcaster)/Effect, keep it Warrior/Effect and then do this in the effect: As long as this card is face-up on the field, it is also treated as a Spellcaster-Type monster.

Also, other than negating an attack and Special Summoning a LV4 Beatstick, what is the purpose of this card? Why do you want it also treated as a Spellcaster (You don't have an effect to support Warriors or Spellcasters)? Other than that, it is a little powerful, it has a good effect and high ATK...maybe lower the ATK to 1900 and the DEF to 1800. Sounds more balanced IMO. Pic is good, idea seems fine so far, not bad.

[Makο]

Thanks. I might do the fix, but then, it stops being my card XD


I a still awaiting the day that I create a card with perfect OCG, Balance, and Awesomeness. More practice, and it will come....

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

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Thanks. I might do the fix, but then, it stops being my card XD


I a still awaiting the day that I create a card with perfect OCG, Balance, and Awesomeness. More practice, and it will come....
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I'm still waiting for that day too, so don't feel alone there XD Anyway, the best way to do it is look up real cards for OCG, add a suitable cost for Balance and make something that is unique for Awesomeness.