Ren✧ Posted October 17, 2010 Report Share Posted October 17, 2010 Here are 4 cards in celebration of me becoming a 4 star member. Finally. [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/2451/266107t.jpg[/img] Once per turn you can discard 1 monster card to inflict damage to your opponent equal to half of the discarded monster's ATK. If you discarded a level 4 monster with this cards effect you can half this cards ATK points until the End Phase to Special Summon the discarded monster in Attack Position. All monsters Special Summoned by this card cannot attack the turn they are Summoned. [img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/8818/266107.jpg[/img] This monster cannot be destroyed by level 5 or higher monsters. When this card destroys an opponent's monster you can put 1 Egg Counter on this card. This card gains 100 ATK points for each Egg Counter on it. You can remove 4 Egg Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 level 4 monster from your Hand. [img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/5613/266107il.jpg[/img] During your Standby Phase you can put 1 Carrot Counter on this card. You can remove 2 Carrot Counters from this card to have this card attack twice this turn. If this card destroys a level 4 or higher monster on its second attack you can Special Summon 1 level 4 monster from your Hand. You can tribute 1 level 4 or lower monster to have this card be counted as a Tuner monster. [img]http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/8818/266107.jpg[/img] Once you can Tribute 1 monster to Special Summon any number of monsters from your Graveyard as long as the total level of monsters Special Summoned does not go higher than 4. If this card destroys a level 5 or higher monster you can decrease the level of 1 monster in your Graveyard by 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted October 18, 2010 Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 1st card: epic. 10/10 2nd card: cute, not overly bad, good in a harpie deck, 8/10 3rd card: great. perfectly balanced, if a [i]little[/i] up in atk. id bump it up to 1800 personally. 7/10 4th card: brillant. i want that pic for a set im making. can i have the link? great effect, totally origional and i love that. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted October 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 Doom Shaman i think i found the pic in this website it is from JazinKay [url="http://s825.photobucket.com/home/JazinKay/allalbums"]http://s825.photobucket.com/home/JazinKay/allalbums[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted October 18, 2010 Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 Hey Dhole, congrats on reaching 4 stars. ^^ Btw, the Winged Beasts don't have a hyphin in their Type. Just saying. You must've took alot of time making these, and for that. I +Rep you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted October 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 Thanks Grand Hokage Tsunade, and i wasnt sure about the hyphen but i decided to put it i will change it in a little while thanks for the tip and the rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black W Mage Posted October 18, 2010 Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 the first is fine. The second should be a tuner. The third is outclassed by [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Wattwoodpecker"]this[/url] and [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Morphtronic_Boomboxen"]that[/url]. The last should be a tuner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted October 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 @Red W Mage: Okay...um...so wouldn't some of these cards be to powerful for tuners and i mean by outclassed what do you me it is card by its self a new card so what if there is a card better than it. I mean please give me more detail into how i can make them better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRuler Posted October 18, 2010 Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 Nice cards, the 2nd and 3rd cards seems like parts of an archetype. And congrats for reaching the 4 stars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black W Mage Posted October 18, 2010 Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 [quote name='Dhole' timestamp='1287365110' post='4713954'] @Red W Mage: Okay...um...so wouldn't some of these cards be to powerful for tuners and i mean by outclassed what do you me it is card by its self a new card so what if there is a card better than it. I mean please give me more detail into how i can make them better. [/quote] the 2nd one would be perfectly fine as a tuner, as the speed it will special summon is pretty slow and the non-destruction effect is pretty typical of tuners, sort of like [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/XX-Saber_Fulhelmknight"]this guy[/url].the third one takes too long to have it's double attacking effect kick in, so it should be only 1 counter. last might be a bit broken as a tuner, so it should have a tributing cost rather than life point cost (card advantage counts more than life points) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted October 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 Alright i will change them tomorrow right now i dont feel like it right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted October 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 I just updated the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venom Posted October 18, 2010 Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 Celestal Wolf is pretty, well... UNIQUE! I never saw that effect, never. True original idea, buddy! Perfect balance and OCG as usual =D (at least what I consider to be good OCG). 10/10 and +1 Rep! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted October 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 thanks Venom. i really appreciate it. It looks like these 4 cards are really attracting some attention. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buttercup Posted October 18, 2010 Report Share Posted October 18, 2010 1) GO BAD MARAUDING CAPTAIN 4/10 2) Can't see stats, effect looks terrible. 4/10 3) Better options exist for a bad idea. 4/10 4) First effect is terrible, second effect is really situational and would be annoying to remember. 3/10 Suggestions: 1) Decrease ATK to 1500, make SS if Level 4 or lower, SS monster can attack. 2) Make the effect SS from the Deck, reduce counter requirements to 2. 3) idk 4) idk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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