¡Abyssal Vindicator!

[Smesh]

[center]Eh.

[img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/1036/221030m.jpg[/img]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, except by it's own effect. You can Normal Summon this monster from your hand by removing 4 DARK monsters in your Graveyard from play. As long as this card is on your field, monsters you control, except this one, have their ATK decreased by half. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the total combined ATK and DEF of all monsters your opponent controls. If your opponent controls only 1 monster, increase this card's ATK by 100.[/center]

[moppmoppmopp]

Take the "can't be Special Summoned exept by its own effect" and change it to "This card cannot be Special Summoned exept by [Summoning option(s) here]."
OP'd! 6/10

[Smesh]

Explain how it's OP'd. Have you ever seen the Wicked Dreadroot?

And no, my OCG is right.

[moppmoppmopp]

Decrase your opponents monsters ATK with half, increase thos monsters ATK with the sum of your opponents monsters combined ATK. Imagine 3 Blue-eyes on your opponents side of the field. Then this monsters ATK is 4500. Add 2 level stars and it is more balanced. If you took this from dreadroot, dreadroot is also op'd.

[Smesh]

Dreadroot is not OP'd. At all.

And you decrease [i]your[/i] monster's ATK by half, not your opponents. >_>

Adding Level stars wouldn't do squat.

[moppmoppmopp]

Aah. Your monsters. Saw wrong
Seems balanced
8/10

[Blake]

loldreadrootisopd

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, except by it's own effect. You can Normal Summon this monster from your hand by removing 4 DARK monsters in your Graveyard from play. As long as this card is on your field, monsters you control, except [b]for[/b] this [s]one[/s] [b]card[/b], have their ATK decreased by half. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the total combined ATK and DEF of all monsters your opponent controls. If your opponent controls only 1 monster, increase this card's ATK by 100.

I like it.... it's like... Smashin' all 3 Wicked Gods into one~ And it has to be NORMAL Summoned.

9/10

[Smesh]

Inorite

Too lazy to fix OCG.

And I aimed for a Wicked spinoff thing, so yeah.

[~{Rochster}~]

Hey, do you notice anything [u][i]familiar[/i][/u] about that pic? Anyways, that is a really good card. I would DEFINITELY use that in my DARK deck, if I had one! 9/10

[Smesh]

Thanks.

What's the name of that big black ball card that's ATK is 100 more than the strongest monster your opponent controls?

This card reminds me of it.

[Blake]

The Wicked Avatar? XD

You took elements from all 3.

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

Yay, another card with what is fast becoming the most over-used picture in YCM history.

So it has to be Normal Summoned, by doing things that aren't normal...? Also what happens if you Special Summon it, does it's effect not take place at all? Would probably be easier go along the 'Lava Golem' lines of: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 4 DARK monsters in your Graveyard from play. You cannot conduct a Normal Summon in the turn you summoned this card.

So baisically, in terms of a 1on1 fight, this card will overpower anything, except for odd wierd effect like 'Mirage Knight' or whatever, correct? Yes it's still vulnerable to Traps and Spells and stuff, but I'm still not convinced about this one.

[Smesh]

[quote name='Tainted Black' timestamp='1287946166' post='4732660']
The Wicked Avatar? XD

You took elements from all 3.
[/quote]

Yes!

[quote name='Matt Bahamut' timestamp='1287946225' post='4732664']
Yay, another card with what is fast becoming the most over-used picture in YCM history.

So it has to be Normal Summoned, by doing things that aren't normal...? Also what happens if you Special Summon it, does it's effect not take place at all? Would probably be easier go along the 'Lava Golem' lines of: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 4 DARK monsters in your Graveyard from play. You cannot conduct a Normal Summon in the turn you summoned this card.

So baisically, in terms of a 1on1 fight, this card will overpower anything, except for odd wierd effect like 'Mirage Knight' or whatever, correct? Yes it's still vulnerable to Traps and Spells and stuff, but I'm still not convinced about this one.
[/quote]

Screw the Special Summoning thing, I use it too much.

[Ozuma_lord_of_the_fire]

Picture: Excelent, do not change it! 10/10 (Brilitant!!! I love it!)
Effect: Almost there, I have maded some new to put on your card 8/10 (Very good, but you can make better)
"This card cannot be normal summon or set. This card can only be Normal summoned by removing from play 4 DARK monsters from your Graveyard. As long this card remains face-up on the field halfe the ATK of all monsters in the field except this card. This card original ATK and DEF becomes the combinated ATK and DEF of all monsters your oponent controls. If your oponent only controls 1 monster, increage the ATK of this card by 1000." (I have maded some alterations).
Power: Put 0 ATK and 0 DEF (It's better) 9/10 (Almost there...)
Total: 27/30
Put the changes that I have maded and you have 30/30

[Blake]

No, your OCG, and plain Grammar, on the changes you made is bad. And the changes you made make this card's rating go DOWN on the brokeness scale. Down is bad.
0/0 is not better, because it is truly ?/?. Look at cards like the Wicked Avatar and the Wixked eraser. ?/? is correct, 0/0 is wrong.

[Smesh]

Black is right. *brofist*

[Smesh]

Bumped because I can.