I need some OCG help...

[Stan Alda]

I'm trying to design a spell card based on 2 Samuel 24 (in the Bible), and it's not going well. My main problem is finding the correct OCG for my intended effects. Would someone be so kind as to provide help?

OCG so far:
[i][b]Look at your deck, then select one Warrior-type Monster in your Deck and Special Summon it to the field in face-up Attack Position. Select and activate 1 of the following effects:

-[I want to put something that prevents you from setting or activating Spell or Trap cards on your side of the field for 3 turns; essentially, producing a 3-turn Spell/Trap lockdown on yourself]

-Skip your next 3 Battle Phases.

-Pay 500 Life Points every turn for the next three turns.[/b][/i]

I can guarantee I've made some sort of OCG errors, so would you, the reader, provide help?

[LiAM]

[u]This is the best I can do, the OCG is fine with this fix, but I'm not sure if the effect is what you originally planned:[/u]

Select 1 Warrior-Type monster from your Deck and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. Then, select and activate 1 of the following effects:
●Until your 3rd Standby Phase after activation, you cannot Set or activate Spell and Trap Cards.
●Skip your next 3 Battle Phases.
●Pay 500 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases until your 3rd Standby Phase after activation.

[i]**Fix'd last bullet.[/i]

[Anbu-of-Sand]

[quote]
Special Summon one Warrior-Type monster from your Deck in face-up Attack Position. Then, activate 1 of the following effects:

- You cannot activate and / or Set Spell and / or Trap Cards for the next 3 turns.
- Skip your next 3 Battle Phases.
- Pay 500 Life Points during every turns ____ Phase for the next 3 turns.
[/quote]
Ninja'd once again by Liam. But replace my -'s with the circles, only reason I couldn't do the circles is I don't know how to make them on the Keyboard.

[LiAM]

[quote]Special Summon[b] one[/b] Warrior-Type monster from your Deck in face-up Attack Position[b] on your side of the field[/b]. Then, activate[b] one [/b]of the following effects:

- You cannot activate [b]and / or Set Spell and / or Trap Cards [/b]for the next 3 turns.
- Skip your next 3 Battle Phases.
- Pay 500 Life Points during every turns ____ Phase for the next 3 turns.[/quote]

You have OCG errors in that fix, plus I'm not sure you got the first Bullet effect rightly worded. :/

[i]*Errors are in bold, no changes were made.[/i]

[Stan Alda]

Thanks a million, lads/lasses!

[LiAM]

[quote name='Jaeger' timestamp='1288052742' post='4737316']
Thanks a million, lads/lasses!
[/quote]

Happy to help to be honest. I scout this section.

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[Anbu-of-Sand]

[quote name='LiAM' timestamp='1288052711' post='4737315']
You have OCG errors in that fix, plus I'm not sure you got the first Bullet effect rightly worded. :/

[i]*Errors are in bold, no changes were made.[/i]
[/quote]
Yeah, wasn't really thinking about all the and / or's + wasn't entirely sure if the 1 should've stayed as it is or not, it like skipped my mind.

[LiAM]

Everyone makes mistakes, and OCG is forever changing, I'm sure there's something wrong with my fix.

Whether it's one word/ punctuation (like normal ) or whether I worded it completely wrong! D:
As long as I can understand the effect, I don't care about OCG, I tend to ignore errors if they're only minor, it's the effect that matters.

Like a cake. You like cake, you want to eat the cake, it tastes nice, you don't care what it looks like, as long as it tastes like cake.

^I bet some one quotes that cake analogy.

[TheComposer]

[quote name='LiAM' timestamp='1288053598' post='4737393']
Everyone makes mistakes, and OCG is forever changing, I'm sure there's something wrong with my fix.

Whether it's one word/ punctuation (like normal ) or whether I worded it completely wrong! D:
As long as I can understand the effect, I don't care about OCG, I tend to ignore errors if they're only minor, it's the effect that matters.

Like a cake. You like cake, you want to eat the cake, it tastes nice, you don't care what it looks like, as long as it tastes like cake.

^I bet some one quotes that cake analogy.
[/quote]
But the cake is a lie D: And you were right. Now if only I were here to help before LiAM was >.> oh well.