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I made this card about a month ago and justdecided to post it to see what eveyone thinks.
please only creative critismum and help, oh and please rate.

[spoiler=Demon King - lusifer]
[img]http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/5355/198311u.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore] "1 Tuner" + "1 or more non-Tuner monster(s)"
When this card is Successfully Synchro Summoned remove from play all Spell, Trap, and motster with a high attack power then this card. When this card battles, remove from play your opponent's monster before the damage step.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Dark Soul Knight]
[img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/7312/198311i.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore] "1 Tuner" + "1 or more non-Tuner monster(s)"
This cards ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x600. When this card is in face up attack postion on the field there is no hand limit.[/spoiler][/spoiler]
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[quote name='King Mew' timestamp='1288092931' post='4738622']
I made this card about a month ago and justdecided to post it to see what eveyone thinks.
please only creative critismum and help, oh and please rate.

[spoiler=Demon King - lusifer]
[img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/782/198311x.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore] "1 Tuner" + "1 or more Non Tuner Monster(s)"
When this card is synchro summoned remove from play all cards on the field except this card. When this card does battle with an opponents monster the monster is remover from play. (with out damage calculation)[/spoiler][/spoiler]
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it should be worded so

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
When this card is Successfully Synchro Summoned remove from play all other cards. When this card battles, remove from play your opponent's monster before the damage step.

Does that help clean up the wording?

Otherwise it looks good, but I would probably put that it needed a Fiend type tuner or DARK-attribute monsters for the Synchro summon
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Could use a Synchro restriction. It's also a little too potent since it cleans the field up for a OTK if the controller Special Summons a few more monsters. Furthermore, unlike Judgment Dragon, this removes cards without destroying them, which surpasses the other field-nukes we have. Sure, it's thwarted by Imperial Iron Wall, but anti-RFG is otherwise hard to come by.
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1 DARK Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner DARK monster(s)
When this card is successfully Synchro Summoned destroy all Spell, Trap and Monster Cards with a higher ATK then this card. When this card battles, remove from play your opponent's monster before the damage step.

I did a lil edit myself hope thats ok :)
I think these additions make it more restricted on how it is summoned and also gives your opponent chance to get back some of the cards you destroy when you Synchro Summon equals out its remove from play second ability. Nice idea, pics a lil blurry but looks cool 8/10

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[center][u][b]Lusifer[/b][/u]
OCG fix: [s]"[/s]1 Tuner[s]"[/s] + [s]"[/s]1 or more non-Tuner monster[s]([/s]s[s])"[/s]
When this card is [s]Successfully [/s]Synchro Summoned[b],[/b] remove from play all Spell, Trap[s],[/s] [b]Cards [/b]and all [b]Monsters[/b] with a[b]n[/b] higher ATK [s]high attack power [/s]then this card. When this card battles, remove from play your opponent's monster [b]with this card's effect without applying damage calculation.[/b]

Tbh, I hope it's name is a poor attempt in avoiding religions. Becouse Lusifer = Lucifer, if you're talking about the Biblical one.
Also it's img isjust horrible, I'm pretty shure you can find better pics of Lucifer/Demons.

Also this card is as broken as they come. First you whipe your opp's field empty of any threads then you RFP everything else. There's just no ballance in it.

A 4/10, sorry.

[u][b]Dark Soul Knight[/b][/u]
OCG fix: [s]"[/s]1 Tuner[s]"[/s] + [s]"[/s]1 or more non-Tuner monster[s]([/s]s[s])"[/s]
This cards ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x600. As long as this card remains face-up Attack Position, [b]there is no limit to the number of cards in both players' hands.[/b]

Well it's name is ok, and so is its pic.

This card is actually quite ballanced, seeing as in a normal duel, your hand ussually has somewhere around 3 cards. Seartenly when you manage to summon it. And though to the lack of good drawing cards.

A 8.2/10
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