Ovedrive Posted October 27, 2010 Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 [center][img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/4831/239164.jpg[/img] [quote] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card battles, it gains 500 ATK during the Damage Step only. When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict damage to your Life Points equal to halve the ATK of the destroyed monster. Each time a Plant-Type monster is Summoned, put 1 Fleur Counter on this card. For each Fleur Counter on this card, all monster you control gain 100 ATK, except this card. When this card is destroyed, you can remove this card from play and discard 1 card to draw 1 card. [/quote] A little bit French in this card's name. "Ange Déchu" should mean "Fallen Angel" (If I'm wrong, tell me how it's supposed to say). "Fleuranoire" is made up word. I made it from words "Fleur" (Flower) and "Noir" (Black). Just a quicke card. Simple, tho. CnC please Pic by HP Doom, btw =D. - Fixed OCG and added another effect with "Fleur Counters". [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted October 27, 2010 Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 OCG Fix: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card battles, it gains 500 ATK during the Damage Step only. When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to halve the ATK of the destroyed monster. I like French in card names - it's pretty awesome. The name, even in English is great too and very fitting. The pic fits with the name and the card itself well. I actually used the same pic in my most recent single, you'll see the thread. I must say though, the effect is very bland and unoriginal and you didn't think about the metagame at all when designing this card. 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ovedrive Posted October 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 In 2nd effect of your OCG fix: It says that it inflicts damage to opponent's LP. It's supposed to say to your own LPs. But anyway thank you for your fix. I might add another effect to make it more interesting. Thank you for your comment, Alf =D. [b]EDIT[/b] OCG fixed and added another effect with "Fluer Counters". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted October 27, 2010 Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 French <3 I recently made a French named card~ Also, Fleuranoir looks a BIT too close to Fleur a Nori, which would roughly mean "Flower to Black" ._. Anyways, Did you mean when this card ATTACKS it gains attack? Otherwise, the effect is kind of pointless, except in the face of Skill Drain. I like the effect, but it's also too... plain, and won't see much use. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ovedrive Posted October 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 This is probably the plainest card I've ever made =D. I agree that it's pretty useless. Thank you for your comment, Black =D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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