Sondance Posted October 31, 2010 Report Share Posted October 31, 2010 [img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/6929/297589m.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted October 31, 2010 Report Share Posted October 31, 2010 Well, as you already know it isn't the best. First off it is way UP'd (underpowered) for a level 7 monster, the ATK should be something like 2600 and the DEF should be something like 1900. Also, you need a better description, the one you have is unfinished. For example, here's one I can think of: An intergalactic bounty hunter known far and wide for her ruthlessness and prowess. That's pretty short, but it works. Anyway, most people hate Vanillas (Normal Cards without effects) because without support they are pretty much worthless. Also, even though I'm not entirely familiar with how AoC works, instead of calling it Human call it Warrior. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted October 31, 2010 Report Share Posted October 31, 2010 Well... it made me smile. few things... Why 800 attack and 1100 defense?... especially as a level 7?... Normal type... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sondance Posted October 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2010 Okay..... thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scooterulez Posted October 31, 2010 Report Share Posted October 31, 2010 *snicker* I mean, it's good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PandoraMaster Posted October 31, 2010 Report Share Posted October 31, 2010 I guess its one of those cards that you just dont wont to have. I think in yugioh there are a few cards like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sondance Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 yeah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serenity the Candyman Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 For a first card, great try, but itis underpowered. Go Sondance! you get candy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 The description is fine, despite being rather short. The picture could be a bit better, but it suits the description fine. The name could be expanded a bit, it would be better if it was called "Sondance - The Bounty Hunter" as it flows with the pic and description. The stats are weird but in a way they're unique. It's a nice change in comparison to all the LV 7 2500 ATK monsters, but having low ATK does make it not worth the Tributes required to summon it, unless there is decent support around it. Other than this I do wish that you wouldn't think your cards are lame, be neutral about your cards when you post them that way you won't feel so down when it receives harsh criticism and you'll be surprised when people love your card(s). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sondance Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 Okay thank you very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tee-Jaie Posted November 11, 2010 Report Share Posted November 11, 2010 [quote name='techi' timestamp='1288561754' post='4753295'] Well... it made me smile. few things... Why 800 attack and 1100 defense?... especially as a level 7?... Normal type... [/quote] LOLING to Epic Move! Sondance, cool card as a member card of course! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 [quote name='Davisiti1' timestamp='1289781346' post='4785651'] What the heck? 800 / 1100 No effect? Hahahahahahahhahahahahaha... 800 ATK 1100 DEF no effect, human, chick bountry hunter... Hahahahaha [/quote] 1. We all start somewhere 2. Don't be so quick to laugh, that is really bad on your part. What if we laughed at your cards? 3. Sondance is a close friend of mine on here. Please refrain from making fun of her. We call that "flaming". Flames make me become a troll, and I don't want to troll you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 Very nice picture. However, Normal monsters are usually frowned upon on YCM unless there's a reason they're Normal or if they have a good backstory to them. Other than what everyone else has been saying, try not to make up your own Type of Monster unless there's a reason for it. This card would be more suited as a Warrior, Fiend, or Fairy than its own Type. Still, for one of your first cards this is good. I hope you'll have fun making more in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3DTerror Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 I think it was a good first attempt! At least it's not like a certain someones Level 1 5200 ATK/5000 DEF Monster (Davisiti1)! Yes, that was the guy bashing you! What a Hypocrit! I hate Hypocrits! (Yes, I have no idea how to spell "hypocrit") Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowyash Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 [quote name='slayer_supreme' timestamp='1289786150' post='4785884'] Very nice picture. However, Normal monsters are usually frowned upon on YCM unless there's a reason they're Normal or if they have a good backstory to them. Other than what everyone else has been saying, try not to make up your own Type of Monster unless there's a reason for it. This card would be more suited as a Warrior, Fiend, or Fairy than its own Type.Still, for one of your first cards this is good. I hope you'll have fun making more in the future. [/quote] It's AoC, nothing wrong with fake types. A decent backstory would be good though. [quote name='3DTerror' timestamp='1289786566' post='4785904'] I think it was a good first attempt!At least it's not like a certain someones Level 1 5200 ATK/5000 DEF Monster (Davisiti1)!Yes, that was the guy bashing you! What a Hypocrit! I hate Hypocrits! (Yes, I have no idea how to spell "hypocrit") [/quote] It's hypocrite. Drop it to a Lv 3, add a nice story and it'll be perfect. It most certainly isn't lame. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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