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A Few of My Dragonball Z Cards *EDIT* -Goku based cards will be here-

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I decided to start off with Goku and his super forms since it only seemed natural, plus some spells and a trap card for the lol. I don't think I'll be doing any GT cards since I'm not a big fan of that series, except for the SSJ4 concept. I'll more than likely just do the Z series. Tell me what you think. Thanks to the awesome people that critiqued my first cards, I decided to take some of their advice and do some editing to some of them. The pictures of Goku's base form and his SSJ2 form were provided by SnaKou from deviantART. Please, check out his other work! http://snakou.deviantart.com/



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The picture for this card was removed, so I can't edit its effect. Instead, it's here: This card can only be Special summoned by tributing 1 "Son Goku- Super Saiyan 2" on the field and two other monsters. This card cannot be destroyed by battle and can negate monster flip effects (Damage calculation is applied normally). This card is returned to the owner's hand after 3 of your opponents turns.

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[center][IMG]http://i592.photobucket.com/albums/tt2/BlaxxShade/Chi-Chitrapcard.jpg?t=1288682064[/IMG][/center]
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Ieyasu Tokugawa Newbie

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Can't really critique a vanilla, so all I can say about Goku is that the pic is a little squashed, so you might want to try cropping it a little to fix it.

I don't really like the idea of having to get another monster destroyed to bring out Super Saiyan Goku, since later he can actually do it without Krilin getting hurt. I'd make them sort of like Level Monsters, where during your next Standby Phase you can tribute 1 to bring the next out. Other than that, he looks quite good.

For Super Saiyan 2, I think that's actually Gogeta, because he has those fusion earings. Haven't seen the show in a while, so correct me if I'm wrong. Either way, try to avoid pics with no backgrounds, they look better. Like the upgraded effect, and I think you can get by with increasing his def a little more.

Can't find anything wrong with Super Saiyan 3.

Kamehameha might be a little OP'd, since there's not much of a restriction on it.

Time to get serious is really bad wording, if you made them like Level monsters like I said earlier it would be much easier to word is. I know what it's supposed to do, but you can't just say something with a "similar name", otherwise there can be many misunderstandings.

For ChiChi's support, you can say "While you control a "Goku", "Gohan" or "Goten" monster, increase the ATK of all monsters you control by 300 during your Battle Phase." Reason is when you say "Goku", the monster's name has to be exactly "Goku", it can't have any of the other stuff you have.

I laughed at your trap, but it looks fine.
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[quote name='Metagross386' timestamp='1288828793' post='4760045']
Can't really critique a vanilla, so all I can say about Goku is that the pic is a little squashed, so you might want to try cropping it a little to fix it.

I don't really like the idea of having to get another monster destroyed to bring out Super Saiyan Goku, since later he can actually do it without Krilin getting hurt. I'd make them sort of like Level Monsters, where during your next Standby Phase you can tribute 1 to bring the next out. Other than that, he looks quite good.

For Super Saiyan 2, I think that's actually Gogeta, because he has those fusion earings. Haven't seen the show in a while, so correct me if I'm wrong. Either way, try to avoid pics with no backgrounds, they look better. Like the upgraded effect, and I think you can get by with increasing his def a little more.

Can't find anything wrong with Super Saiyan 3.

Kamehameha might be a little OP'd, since there's not much of a restriction on it.

Time to get serious is really bad wording, if you made them like Level monsters like I said earlier it would be much easier to word is. I know what it's supposed to do, but you can't just say something with a "similar name", otherwise there can be many misunderstandings.

For ChiChi's support, you can say "While you control a "Goku", "Gohan" or "Goten" monster, increase the ATK of all monsters you control by 300 during your Battle Phase." Reason is when you say "Goku", the monster's name has to be exactly "Goku", it can't have any of the other stuff you have.

I laughed at your trap, but it looks fine.
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Thank you!! An actual critique! The Super Saiyan 2 is Goku, but that was the only pic I could find that someone else hadn't already used. :(

Kamehemeha I based off of "Dark Magic Attack" which destroys all magic and trap cards on your opponents side of the field if you have a Dark Magician on your side. But you do have a strong point on it being OP'd.

Thanxx for all your point outs. Definitely gonna try this again. Oh, and the trap card was meant for lol's. :lol:

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Hey pretty good wording for a first timer :) Just remember to capitalize words like Normal and Special Summon and that attack (as in the [i]stat[/i]) is ATK same thing goes for DEF.

Im not really good at critiquing effects but it's apparent that you actually spent time and effort on your cards unlike some other first timers in this forum. I applaud you for that! Keep up the good work!

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