Master of The Dark Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 [img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/8854/198311.jpg[/img][center]Lore:[/center] This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card can only be Sepical Summoned by Removing From Play "Five Headed Dragon" from your side of the field. This card agains 500 ATK and DEF for each "Dragon" type monster on the feild. This card is uneffected by spell and trap card effects. Controler of this card take no Battle Damage from battles involeving this card. This card cannot be destroyed by battle with an EARTH, WATER, WIND, FIRE, or DARK monster. Yes it's a supped up version of Five headed dragon so what just tell me what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 First off it's "Souped up" Now, for the card itself... Very, Very UP. It's hard to get out, and it gains no real advantage over FGD. FGD has protection, this has a bad Attack boost. Oh, and removing 4 cards from play? No. FGD is DARK not FIRE. Oh, and a few OCG Errors. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 Name:Pretty bland name 7/10 Pic:Its okay but it looks blurry @_@ mabey its just me 7.5/10 Its from Jazin Kay isnt it? OCG:First off, put lore down please. Looks fine Effect:Its okay.... Balance: I dont think its worth the trouble to bring out a 5000+ attack dragon beatstick when a much easier to summon Beatsticks are at your disposal... The little extras:Edition is done Not creator name and the set id is kinda odd.... Overall a [size="4"][color="#FF8C00"]C[/color][/size] Very average for YCM. Nothing special and could use a little work..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of The Dark Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 @Fading Black: sorry and im not a master at spelling in fact I hate spelling i wish I could type one thing into a computer and have 20 different things come up that are spelled the same as what i typed now I'll work on the card some more I just made this one in like two minutes so I knew it would suck so just give me some time to fix it. Thank you Archwingthere fixed and this one is a fire type dragon so deal with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 Everything I said still applies, save the part about no protection. You can't just change its Attribute. Look at Blue Eyes, Red Eyes, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of The Dark Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 fine what ever im just locking the thread it was a bad idea to tryin bring back the strongest card in the game and make it better some how. Hey how abpout this since your so smart buddy why dont you take the pic and make the card "THE RIGHT WAY". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 I could. This thing is not meant to be something that is harder to use than Blue Eyes Shining Dragon. I'm not trying to upset you, just make it better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 [quote name='King Mew' timestamp='1288737272' post='4757818'] fine what ever im just locking the thread it was a bad idea to tryin bring back the strongest card in the game and make it better some how. Hey how abpout this since your so smart buddy why dont you take the pic and make the card "THE RIGHT WAY". [/quote] I absolutely hate when members do this. Black gave you critisism. The critisism will help your poor card become better. If you disregard his critisism, your cards will stay bad. This card is very UP'd. Think of how hard it is to Summon FGD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of The Dark Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 see now u all call it what ever i call it bashing a card some either tried to have fun making or tried their best on and all you do is call it crap and then say your trying to help when really your bashing someones blood sweat and treas. but for this card i was trying to have fun and bring back one of my favorite card as a better monster but I like it the way it is it can use some changes yes like i'll cut out the three other dragon type monster needed to summon it. and I'll change the atrubbute but thats all I really thing it needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lewis atherton Posted November 3, 2010 Report Share Posted November 3, 2010 Honestly not perfect under powered but it could be worse 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jenofresh Posted November 3, 2010 Report Share Posted November 3, 2010 It has too many immunities for a Beatstick. It's immune to destruction and LP damage and combined with DNA Transplant and DNA Surgery, it can become invincible Imperial Custom + DNA Surgery(Water) + DNA Transplant(Dragon). All you need is to give it a piercing equip like FMC and it can easily be an invincible 8000+ ATK Beatstick. Or, Give it SSBC and it becomes an OTK/2TK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of The Dark Posted November 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2010 well how should I make it an in destructable monster through its own effect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jenofresh Posted November 3, 2010 Report Share Posted November 3, 2010 [quote name='King Mew' timestamp='1288744764' post='4758139'] well how should I make it an in destructable monster through its own effect? [/quote] Either make it destructible or not damage immune. You have a card that can't be destroyed by effects and battle and takes no LP damage if it does damage to get overpowered along with it having Dpala's effect. You literally could OTK with this in a variety of ways just by itself(Megamorph+SSBC, Twin Swords+SSBC+AoD, DNA Surgery(Machine) + Limiter Removal + SSBC, Full field Monsters + DNA Transplant(Dragon) + SSBC, Lineage of Destruction + SSBC) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of The Dark Posted November 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2010 well it can be destroyed in battle by light monsters and it can be destroyed by monster card effects and it's use doesn't take damage to their lp for battles involving this card. not every card on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jenofresh Posted November 3, 2010 Report Share Posted November 3, 2010 [quote name='King Mew' timestamp='1288746497' post='4758213'] well it can be destroyed in battle by light monsters and it can be destroyed by monster card effects and it's use doesn't take damage to their lp for battles involving this card. not every card on the field. [/quote] DNA Surgery makes it invincible however. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of The Dark Posted November 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2010 so i have to choise on the the deffence effects to make it just right if it is over powered? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of The Dark Posted November 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2010 bump? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of The Dark Posted November 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Jay~ Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 Five-Headed Dragon is easy to Summon I have two in my Hopeless Dragon I summoned them all the time. Everyone else already gave you the criticism you need, so I'll provide you with the OCG correction :3 This card cannot be Normal Summon or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play "Five Headed Dragon" from your side of the field. This card gains 500 ATK and DEF for each Dragon-Type monster on the field. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards. The controller of this card takes no Battle Damage from battles involving this card. This card cannot be destroyed by battle with an EARTH, WATER, WIND, FIRE, or DARK monster. I think that takes care of it, you had a lot of Spelling errors mostly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of The Dark Posted November 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2010 I'm not good at spelling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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