JDFighterwing Posted November 6, 2010 Report Share Posted November 6, 2010 [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/1237/180276f.jpg[/img] This card cannot be special summoned or set. This card can only be summoned if it is the only card on your sided of the field. This card can attack twice during your battle phase. When another card is played, this card is destroyed. If this card is destroyed in battle do 500 damage to your opponents life points. (I know this technically doesn't belong here... but if anyone knows where i can get a picture to go with this that would be awesome.) Thank you! Link to comment
Azra The Soulslayer Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 EDIT on your OCG. This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. When this card is Tribute Summoned, destroy it if you control another card(s). This card can attack twice during the Battle Phase. As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, you cannot Summon, activate, or Set cards. If this card is destroyed by battle inflict 500 damage to your opponents Life Points. I feel it would be a little better this way, seeing as how it would be impossible to summon a monster that needs Tribute Fodder if you cannot control a card(s) when you attempt to Summon it. Also, i tweaked the effect to make it so you CAN'T play cards while its on the field, cause this can cause some unnecessary timing errors. If you don't want my advice, fine, but your OCG does need some fixing. Sorry, btw, but i don't think i can find a good pic for this card...btw his name is awfully close to yours truly... Link to comment
Bringerofcake Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 a) NO IMAGES EVER. b) The card has potential as a Warrior Trade-In target, but other than that, it's pretty awful. c) Use [s]wiithepeople's[/s] Azra the Soulslayer's fixes. Link to comment
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