Bad Dog!!!

[Tee-Jaie]

Check this out, i made this card while changing a thing or two to my profile: SHADOW CERBERUS[img]http://img574.imageshack.us/img574/9379/224490p.jpg[/img]
LORE: By paying Life points equal to half this card ATK points, this card can attack all monsters on your opponents side of the field. If you do, destroy this card during your Standby Phase. During battle between this attacking monster and a DEF position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of the attacking monster, inflict the difference as battle damage to your opponents Life points.

CYBER SHADOW CERBERUS
[img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/5313/224490c.jpg[/img]
LORE: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Shadow Cerberus" from your hand or field. This card can attack your opponent directly. If you do, this card's ATK points are halved for the rest of the duel. If this card is in the graveyard, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special summon 1 "Shadow Cerberus" that was used for the Special Summon of this card that was removed from play.

I kinda like the cerberus idea, but now you tell me what you think. Rate please.

[Ярополк Пономарёв]

8/10

[Tee-Jaie]

You mean like this: http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTeaZUDmvDxdi4J6cvmpWs5dTkQO7XTqAwdPBpTxtEnHNyEenc&t=1&usg=__Qtu236dMG27JUaCdCgZ7QaFxbm4=

IDK, depends on whether the duelist has it played or not.

[Tee-Jaie]

Thanks.

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

A more accurate OCG would be:
"By paying Life points equal to half this card ATK during [the Battle Phase/your Main Phase], this card can attack all monsters on your opponents side of the field once each. If you do, destroy this card during your next Standby Phase. During battle between this attacking monster and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this cardr, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent."

Sounds like an interesting card, though overpowered considering it's only a 1-tribute.

[Tee-Jaie]

Thanks for the comment/suggestions.

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[1SDAN]

good, 8/10

[Tee-Jaie]

Nice, thnks!

[jacy]

8/10

[Tee-Jaie]

Wow, people just get strait to the rating, cool! Best cards ever!

[Skirts]

Hm .. The picture on the first card is bad quality. I like cards .. But ... I see that they could use some fixing. Inbox me if you would like to see and have some tips/ examples of cards that might better improve your card making skills. ; D

6/10

[Tee-Jaie]

O.K, thnks for the rating.

[lewis atherton]

I like shadow Cerberus, I feel the effect may be a little over powered perhaps if you make it a level 6 monster. Also I think the picture is good however it may be better if you get a black cerberus. The atc and def are good and balanced.

this is how i would write the effect.
This card cannot be equip with any Equip Spell Cards. By paying Life points equal to half this card ATK points, this card can attack all monsters on your opponents side of the field once. If you do, destroy this card during your Standby Phase. During battle between this attacking monster and a DEF position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of the attacking monster, inflict half the difference as battle damage to your opponents Life points. If this card is destroyed by Its own effect, then any damage you would take during your next turn becomes 0.

[Tee-Jaie]

Cool effect. It would go well with the card. Thnks.