E-Hero Kyle Posted November 13, 2010 Report Share Posted November 13, 2010 [img]http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/6783/socgduelistpack3.png[/img] Still in private WIP so no releases yet Anyway, CnC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted November 13, 2010 Report Share Posted November 13, 2010 The white tech in the background clashes with the tech circle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E-Hero Kyle Posted November 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2010 Should I lower the brightness? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted November 13, 2010 Report Share Posted November 13, 2010 Yeah.. Or maybe darken the Duelist Circle. (New dub ;D) I'm guessing this is based off Yusei 3? [But it says 5, =/] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E-Hero Kyle Posted November 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2010 5, my style, as I've said... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted November 13, 2010 Report Share Posted November 13, 2010 Colossal's hand shouldn't be there down the bottom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E-Hero Kyle Posted November 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 Hehe, shouldn't it? well, I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted November 14, 2010 Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 Well, there's generally nothing down the bottom. Maybe Erase Yusei's arm and make it look like Colossal has it's arm around him? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted November 14, 2010 Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 Colossals render just looks... Wrong, as if a pixel or 2 around the border is cut off. Also, you should make the glow for both a bit bigger. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr420QuickScopes Posted November 14, 2010 Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 Nice, I like the font, yet the colossal looks like the glow needs to be a bit bigger, what is the font? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max West Posted November 14, 2010 Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 I quite like this, though the circle and bg blend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted November 14, 2010 Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 - Last time. Get rid of the red outline on the logo. Even if they do actually have one, your red outline is far too noticible. Right back to the booster. - Your one monster short. Try to go for associated monsters, if you'd waited I could give you Junk Destroyer. - Yusei doesn't take up enough of the booster, it should be a full body shot with his feet at the bottom. With no monster parts past the DP logo. - Yusei has no glow. - Hole is too high up, it should be with the bottom level to the 150 logo's bottom. It's also too fat. - 150 logo is too small. Its even smaller than the small scan I'm comparing this too. - 96 logo shouldn't be present. Logo next to it is incorrect in both colour and text amount. If you look its a gradient. - TM logo is missing. - Tech circle is far too solid. Other background work is too dominating. - Duelist Pack logo doesn't extend far enough it should be very close to touching the sides. Glow is also too loose, it should be more like a stroke. - 5Ds, DP and Pack Name need to be bunched up more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E-Hero Kyle Posted November 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 Thanks for the tip Yin! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted November 14, 2010 Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 Glad to help, I know how hard it is to get these right from one and only attempt at making one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E-Hero Kyle Posted November 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 Well, for me, since its my own style, it is good. If there are no real Duelist Packs, what can you say in my pack? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted November 15, 2010 Report Share Posted November 15, 2010 I'm comparing with the 2 Series 7 Duelist Packs, Crow and Yusei. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E-Hero Kyle Posted November 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2010 If there are no real duelist packs, what can you say? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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