The Final Ancient Gear - The Relic

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

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[b]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand or your Deck by Tributing 1 "Ancient Gear Golem" on your side of the field when you succeed in the effect of "Time Wizard". As long as this card remains face up on the field your opponent cannot activated Spell or Trap Cards during the Battle Phase. Once per turn you can add 1 "Ancient Gear" card from your Graveyard to your hand. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.[/b]
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[eldest]

[b][size="2"]Nice image and great idea. Try to fix the Ocg: [/size][font="Arial"][size="2"][b]"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand or your Deck by Tributing 1 "Ancient Gear Golem" on your side of the field [i]after you succefully activated the effect of 1 "Time Wizard" you controll[/i]. As long as this card remains face up on the field your opponent cannot activated Spell or Trap Cards during the Battle Phase. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.[/b][/size][/font][/b]

[Squirrel Girl]

The ocg is good. The card itself is not that good since it's harder to Summon than Ancient Gear Golem and you basically used the same effect, you just added the Spell effect. Cause Ancient Gear cannot be targeted by Traps you know. You should add an effect like:

"Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Ancient Gear Golem from your Graveyard to your side of the field, ignoring the Summoning Condition. The Special Summoned monsters effect is negated." or something like that to make it not become UPed

now a 2/10

If you change, I give 4/10

[Darj]

[quote name='^_^AxManBoy^_^' timestamp='1289677512' post='4781923']
You should add an effect like:

"Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Ancient Gear Golem from your Graveyard to your side of the field, ignoring the Summoning Condition. The Special Summoned monsters effect is negated." or something like that to make it not become UPed
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Wouldn't that be overpowered? Just think about this:
You destroyed all your opponent's monsters with "Time Wizard" and got a 3500-ATK monster that can attack directly without fear, and now you suggest to add 3000 more direct damage in the form of a monster? Summoning it without effect is pointless, because the Relic prevents your opponent from activating Spell/Traps any Time during the Battle Phase, not only when the Relic attacks. Because if this, "Time Wizard" and the effect-less Golem can attack without fear too, so you would inflict 3500+500+3000=7000; almost an OTK.
So, I don't think you should add the above effect.

The card is good: Great effect, but harsh summoning conditions, yet it's still somewhat viable to Summon it.

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

[quote name='eldest' timestamp='1289676246' post='4781870']
[b][size="2"]Nice image and great idea. Try to fix the Ocg: [/size][font="Arial"][size="2"][b]"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand or your Deck by Tributing 1 "Ancient Gear Golem" on your side of the field [i]after you succefully activated the effect of 1 "Time Wizard" you controll[/i]. As long as this card remains face up on the field your opponent cannot activated Spell or Trap Cards during the Battle Phase. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.[/b][/size][/font][/b]
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Well I compared with Dark Sage, and it said the same as mine, so I dont know...

[quote name='^_^AxManBoy^_^' timestamp='1289677512' post='4781923']
The ocg is good. The card itself is not that good since it's harder to Summon than Ancient Gear Golem and you basically used the same effect, you just added the Spell effect. Cause Ancient Gear cannot be targeted by Traps you know. You should add an effect like:

"Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Ancient Gear Golem from your Graveyard to your side of the field, ignoring the Summoning Condition. The Special Summoned monsters effect is negated." or something like that to make it not become UPed

now a 2/10

If you change, I give 4/10
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Frex is absolutely right, that's the reason why I was cautious when it came to a summoning effect, but I did add a new one, so check it out

[quote name='Frex' timestamp='1289678819' post='4781960']
Wouldn't that be overpowered? Just think about this:
You destroyed all your opponent's monsters with "Time Wizard" and got a 3500-ATK monster that can attack directly without fear, and now you suggest to add 3000 more direct damage in the form of a monster? Summoning it without effect is pointless, because the Relic prevents your opponent from activating Spell/Traps any Time during the Battle Phase, not only when the Relic attacks. Because if this, "Time Wizard" and the effect-less Golem can attack without fear too, so you would inflict 3500+500+3000=7000; almost an OTK.
So, I don't think you should add the above effect.

The card is good: Great effect, but harsh summoning conditions, yet it's still somewhat viable to Summon it.
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Thanks, I added an effect due to the harsh summoning conditions

[Darj]

The second effect is a nice addition: perfect for recycling "Ancient Gear Beast", which can be Normal Summoned the turn you add it to your hand if "Geartown" is active. Or you could retrieve a Golem or Dragon and discard it for Summoning a "Machina Fortress" you may have in the Graveyard. Either way, this effect will most of the Time guarantee you a victory, because if your opponent received 4000 damage and couldn't get rid of the Relic during his/her turn, chances are that he/she won't be able to stop a second attack from the Relic plus the attack from "Ancient Gear Beast"/"Machina Fortress".

By, the way, you can shorten that second effect by changing it to:
[b]Once per turn, you can add 1 "Ancient Gear" card from your Graveyard to your hand.[/b]

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

[quote name='Frex' timestamp='1289682173' post='4782075']
The second effect is a nice addition: perfect for recycling "Ancient Gear Beast", which can be Normal Summoned the turn you add it to your hand if "Geartown" is active. Or you could retrieve a Golem or Dragon and discard it for Summoning a "Machina Fortress" you may have in the Graveyard. Either way, this effect will most of the Time guarantee you a victory, because if your opponent received 4000 damage and couldn't get rid of the Relic during his/her turn, chances are that he/she won't be able to stop a second attack from the Relic plus the attack from "Ancient Gear Beast"/"Machina Fortress".

By, the way, you can shorten that second effect by changing it to:
[b]Once per turn, you can add 1 "Ancient Gear" card from your Graveyard to your hand.[/b]
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Alright I will, Thanks for you opinions^^

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

bump

[Squirrel Girl]

The new effect is really good. You get a monster from your Graveyard to your hand, then you summon that monster net turn, and then you do it again and get mass production of robots. Though it is good now, except the pic, but this will get a 5/10

[Max West]

I give it a 4/10, it's basically a modified Golem.

OOC: Wouldn't the oldest be the first, not the final/last?

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

[quote name='Max West' timestamp='1289735862' post='4783599']
I give it a 4/10, it's basically a modified Golem.

OOC: Wouldn't the oldest be the first, not the final/last?
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Oh....I never thought of that^^
pls explain "basically a modified Golem"

[Max West]

You've made it use piercing damage, it is unaffected by Spells/Traps during the battle phase. Maybe not for you, but IMO it's a more powerful Golem, with an extra 500 ATK and harder summon.

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

[quote name='Max West' timestamp='1289738098' post='4783657']
You've made it use piercing damage, it is unaffected by Spells/Traps during the battle phase. Maybe not for you, but IMO it's a more powerful Golem, with an extra 500 ATK and harder summon.
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So whats your point

[Master of The Dark]

love the card everything looks perfect on it. mind if i use it in a deck? 9.99/10 the reason for the rate this way is because i didn't think of it lol jk. real rate 10/10

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

[quote name='King Mew' timestamp='1289753256' post='4784148']
love the card everything looks perfect on it. mind if i use it in a deck? 9.99/10 the reason for the rate this way is because i didn't think of it lol jk. real rate 10/10
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Seriously thanks dude! Glad you liked it, and no, I don't mind at all

[Master of The Dark]

sweet now I just need to find my gear deck.

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

^.^ I'm flattered

[TheFantasy]

Good card but the pic is confusing me xD

9/10

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

[quote name='TheFantasy' timestamp='1289762731' post='4784703']
Good card but the pic is confusing me xD

9/10
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Why? It's just a [b]really old[/b] ancient gear golem, a [b]relic[/b] ^.^

[Max West]

I'm just saying, sorry if I got the wrong message out.

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

[quote name='Max West' timestamp='1289769142' post='4785046']
I'm just saying, sorry if I got the wrong message out.
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No, I just got a little worked up that's all^^ Sry, thanks for your opinion

[~Shadow of Alpha~]

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