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New "Watt" Synchro: Wattraijin; comments appreciated.


Dandelo

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Named after [i]Raijin[/i], the Japanese god of thunder. Kept the card's effect in the spirit of existing "Watt" Synchros: attacking directly, etc.

[center][img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/5373/212065f.jpg[/img]

1 "Watt" Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner Thunder-Type monsters
This card can attack your opponent directly. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent by a direct attack, you can return 1 other Thunder-Type monster you control to your Deck. If you do, select a number of cards your opponent controls equal to the number of Thunder-Type monsters you control. The selected card's effects are negated until your opponent's End Phase. [/center]
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OCG + confusion edits
[quote]1 "Watt" Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner Thunder-Type monsters[/quote]
Good
[quote]This card can attack your opponent directly.[/quote]
Good, to the point
[quote]When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent by a direct attack, you can return 1 other Thunder-Type monster you control to your Deck. If you do, select a number of cards your opponent controls equal to the number of Thunder-Type monsters you control.[/quote]
Good, simple
[quote]The selected card's effects are negated until your opponent's End Phase. [/quote]
Specify, is it their next turn, the one after that, etc.
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[quote name='Mr Spaz' timestamp='1289868646' post='4788046']
Specify, is it their next turn, the one after that, etc.
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It's automatically implied and understood that it's is the next, upcoming End Phase.

Now, the effect of your card keeps in tune with the Archetype, along with the stats, but the name and image don't really fit. See:

[quote name='Yu-Gi-Oh! Wikia']
Visually, the basic members are colorful, electrically-themed animals while the Synchro Monsters are based on mythical creatures. Each one's name starts with "Watt", and the Japanese name is a portmanteau of "Eleki" with the animal's name. For example, "Wattfox"'s Japanese name is "Elekitsune", and "kitsune" is the Japanese word for "fox".
[/quote]

Other than that, nice card. Since aesthetics and such are included in my ratings, you get a 9/10.
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[quote name='SleepingKirby' timestamp='1289869452' post='4788091']

Now, the effect of your card keeps in tune with the Archetype, along with the stats, but the name and image don't really fit.[/quote]

I understand. Sadly, it's not an easy task to find the perfect picture. I found a Japanese mythical being for a Synchro Monster, so at least that sticks.
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[quote name='waters27' timestamp='1289869665' post='4788108']
I understand. Sadly, it's not an easy task to find the perfect picture.
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Well, when making cards, I just look through images until I find one that looks good, and I'll base the card off of the image. Sometimes, I'll have entire sets started by finding a single image. And, if I can't find a suitable image, or one that's really close, but not right, I can edit them with [url="http://www.gimp.org/"]GIMP.[/url]
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