.Starrk Posted November 14, 2010 Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 [center] [img]http://img574.imageshack.us/img574/6734/271435.jpg[/img] [i][b]This card's battle position cannot be changed except by card effect. If this card attacks an opponent's monster, and this card's ATK is higher than the DEF of your opponents monster, inflict difference damage to your opponent's Life points. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by battle or by card effect, you and your opponent must discard your hands. If this card attacks an opponent's monster, you must skip your next turn. Also, if this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, the controller of this card must pay 100 Life Points for every turn that this card is on the field.[/b][/i] Haven't made a card in a year so, I hope you like. [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheFantasy Posted November 14, 2010 Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 Awesome. Pic is great. Effect and OCG is realy good. 9,5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted November 14, 2010 Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 "Also, if this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, the controller of this card must pay 100 Life Points for every turn that this card is on the field."? That effect is meaningless. 100 Life Points is nothing. The card is very interesting, and in some ways it is overpowered but in others it is not... I'm not sure if it's "balanced", though. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Starrk Posted November 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 [quote name='slayer_supreme' timestamp='1289764667' post='4784815'] "Also, if this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, the controller of this card must pay 100 Life Points for every turn that this card is on the field."? That effect is meaningless. 100 Life Points is nothing. The card is very interesting, and in some ways it is overpowered but in others it is not... I'm not sure if it's "balanced", though. 8/10 [/quote] I could just put it to 500 LP. How exactly isit OP'ed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted November 14, 2010 Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 [quote name='Coyote Starrk' timestamp='1289764179' post='4784789'] [center] [img]http://img574.imageshack.us/img574/6734/271435.jpg[/img] [i][b]This card's battle position cannot be changed except by card effect. If this card attacks an opponent's monster, and this card's ATK is higher than the DEF of your opponents monster, inflict difference damage to your opponent's Life points. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by battle or by card effect, you and your opponent must discard your hands. If this card attacks an opponent's monster, you must skip your next turn. Also, if this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, the controller of this card must pay 100 Life Points for every turn that this card is on the field.[/b][/i] Haven't made a card in a year so, I hope you like. [/center] [/quote] Well, like I said I would, I shall now rate. The effect imo seems a little...random. It just doesn't have flow to me, like it's just of assorted effects mixed into one card. However, that's my opinion. Anyway, some of the OCG is off, but it isn't too bad. A few mistakes I'll point out. My take on OCG: This card cannot change its battle position, except by card effect. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, both players must discard their hands. When this card attacks an opponent's monster, skip your next turn. When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, the controller of this card must pay 100 Life Points for every turn that this card is on the field. As it is, I'll rate 7/10 Decent idea and not bad for a comeback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Starrk Posted November 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 [quote name='FTW (For The Wynn)' timestamp='1289764947' post='4784832'] Well, like I said I would, I shall now rate. The effect imo seems a little...random. It just doesn't have flow to me, like it's just of assorted effects mixed into one card. However, that's my opinion. Anyway, some of the OCG is off, but it isn't too bad. A few mistakes I'll point out. My take on OCG: This card cannot change its battle position, except by card effect. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, both players must discard their hands. When this card attacks an opponent's monster, skip your next turn. When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, the controller of this card must pay 100 Life Points for every turn that this card is on the field. As it is, I'll rate 7/10 Decent idea and not bad for a comeback. [/quote] Ahh yes. Still is the effect problems with me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted November 14, 2010 Report Share Posted November 14, 2010 [quote name='Coyote Starrk' timestamp='1289765096' post='4784844'] Ahh yes. Still is the effect problems with me. [/quote] It's understandable though, you haven't made a card in over a year. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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