Digimon Cards

[Icecubezz]

[img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/1617/89265.jpg[/img] AGUMON

[img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/7486/89265i.jpg[/img] GARYMON

[img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/7486/89265i.jpg[/img] METALGARYMON

[img]http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/3214/89265y.jpg[/img] METALGARURUMON
This monster can be only normal summon without WARGREYMON on your field. This card can be only special summon with WARGREYMON on your field. (Two Choices) This monster cannot be destroyed by monster's effect and magic and trap cards.

[img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/1617/89265.jpg[/img] WARGARYMON
This monster can be only normal summon without tributing METALGREYMON & without tributing 2 monsters. This monster can be only special summon by tributing METALGREYMON. (2 Choices)
This monster cannot be destroyed by monster's effect and magic and trap cards.

[img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/7486/89265i.jpg[/img] OMNIMON
WARGREYMON (Non-Tuner) & METALGARURUMON (Tuner)
This monster can be only Ritual Summon & Synchro Summon by tributing WARGREYMON & METALGARURUMON on your field only. Ritual Card DNA DIGIVOLUTION can summon this monster only.
This monster cannot be destroyed by monster's effect and magic and trap cards.

[img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/1617/89265.jpg[/img] IMPERIALDRAMON
This monster can be only normal summon without OMNIMON on your field & without tributing 2 monsters. This monster can be only special summon with OMNIMON on your field.
This monster cannot be destroyed by monster's effect and magic and trap cards.

[img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/1617/89265.jpg[/img] IMPERIALDRAMON FIGHTER MODE

[img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/1617/89265.jpg[/img] IMPERIALDRAMON PALADIN MODE

[img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/975/89265u.jpg[/img] DNA DIGIVOLUTION

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

I'll say it, these are not good. Why you put their name under their type, i don't understand. It would have been understandable if you put Digimon, but this?

Effects are boring. All your doing is giving them an attack boost, start Agumon with a much weaker effect and build it up as you "Digivolve"

Apart from Metalgururumon's terrible OCG, it's a 4 star with 4000 attack. That is not right at all. Wargreymon's OCG is just as bad.

Ritual monsters require ritual cards, I have yet to see a ritual synchro monster, but this one doesn't work. Also, I would have made it a fusion rather than synchro...

The rest pretty much follow suit.

[Icecubezz]

[quote name='Metagross386' timestamp='1289938709' post='4789434']
I'll say it, these are not good. Why you put their name under their type, i don't understand. It would have been understandable if you put Digimon, but this?

Effects are boring. All your doing is giving them an attack boost, start Agumon with a much weaker effect and build it up as you "Digivolve"

Apart from Metalgururumon's terrible OCG, it's a 4 star with 4000 attack. That is not right at all. Wargreymon's OCG is just as bad.

Ritual monsters require ritual cards, I have yet to see a ritual synchro monster, but this one doesn't work. Also, I would have made it a fusion rather than synchro...

The rest pretty much follow suit.
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I think it is possible to summon a ritual synchro monster with a ritual card like Omnimon and those monsters cannot be destroyed by monster's effect and magic and trap cards.

[Shinwa]

Yeah but first you really need to fix your OCG . PLEAES look at an official, real Ritual Card and just edit some lines >.> ... Dont try to do an own "version" ...

What sense make types like "Agumon" o.o ? Are there gonna come more "Agumons" so that he cannot be Reptile or Dinosaur ? I mean, you cannot attach some effect on him since no dinosaur field card or something works on him.. he is the ONLY "Agumon" out there

[Icecubezz]

[quote name='Shinwa' timestamp='1289940392' post='4789526']
Yeah but first you really need to fix your OCG . PLEAES look at an official, real Ritual Card and just edit some lines >.> ... Dont try to do an own "version" ...

What sense make types like "Agumon" o.o ? Are there gonna come more "Agumons" so that he cannot be Reptile or Dinosaur ? I mean, you cannot attach some effect on him since no dinosaur field card or something works on him.. he is the ONLY "Agumon" out there
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Can you tell your opinion with advice and tips about those cards? Thank you in advance.

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

[quote name='Icecubezz' timestamp='1289940123' post='4789501']
I think it is possible to summon a ritual synchro monster with a ritual card like Omnimon and those monsters cannot be destroyed by monster's effect and magic and trap cards.
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Yes, it would be possible, but I think fusion suits Omnimon a lot more, plus the wording you used doesn't work very well.

As for your monsters, what I was saying is that Wargreymon is the same as Agumon but with more attack. What I was saying would translate to...

Agumon: This card cannot be targetted by Spells, Traps or monster effects.

Greymon: This card cannot be destroyed by Spells, Traps or monster effects.

Metalgreymon: This card cannot be removed from the field by the effects of your opponent's Spells, Traps or monster effects.

Wargreymon: This card is unaffected by your opponent's Spells, Traps or monster effects.

See how their effects get stronger as they "Digivolve"? That and an attack boost would be much better, and mabey not as big of an attack boost that you already have. Mabey by 700 each level.

[Starly_64]

- Pictures could be better (interesting backgrounds, and DNA Digivolution is just Tai standing there)
- Use real Main Types instead of just adding their names again, eg. Reptile-Type, Machine-Type, Beast-type
- Have more creative effects. All of these crds just have the same ability of being unaffected by cards. This is not imaginative or strategic at all, and for the most part, the effect is OP'd.
- Do not use the DIVINE Attribute. Users here barely ever use this Attribute, because it's just another way of saying that their cards are cheap.
- There are lots of OCG errors, for example:
normal/special summon= Normal/Special Summon
- When referring to a card name, don't capitalize the name. Just place it inbetween quotation marks:
WARGREYMON= "WarGreymon".
- Omnimon's Synchro-Material monsters should be listed like this:
"MetalGarurumon" + "WarGreymon"
- I think you don't understand how Synchro and Ritual Monsters work. Synchros cannot be Ritual Summoned, and vice versa. If anything, Omnimon's effect should just be:
"A Synchro Summon of this card can only be conducted with the above Synchro Material Monsters."
-"DNA Digivolution" is redundant. The Synchro Summon can be conducted without the use of the Spell Card because it is in their own effects.

[spoiler= Here is a quick example]
[img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/4664/61037.jpg[/img]
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I'm sorry, but this Set needs improvements. 3/10. If you need any help, you can PM me for advice.

[Icecubezz]

[quote name='Starly_64' timestamp='1289941499' post='4789595']
- Pictures could be better (interesting backgrounds, and DNA Digivolution is just Tai standing there)
- Use real Main Types instead of just adding their names again, eg. Reptile-Type, Machine-Type, Beast-type
- Have more creative effects. All of these crds just have the same ability of being unaffected by cards. This is not imaginative or strategic at all, and for the most part, the effect is OP'd.
- Do not use the DIVINE Attribute. Users here barely ever use this Attribute, because it's just another way of saying that their cards are cheap.
- There are lots of OCG errors, for example:
normal/special summon= Normal/Special Summon
- When referring to a card name, don't capitalize the name. Just place it inbetween quotation marks:
WARGREYMON= "WarGreymon".
- Omnimon's Synchro-Material monsters should be listed like this:
"MetalGarurumon" + "WarGreymon"
- I think you don't understand how Synchro and Ritual Monsters work. Synchros cannot be Ritual Summoned, and vice versa. If anything, Omnimon's effect should just be:
"A Synchro Summon of this card can only be conducted with the above Synchro Material Monsters."
-"DNA Digivolution" is redundant. The Synchro Summon can be conducted without the use of the Spell Card because it is in their own effects.

[spoiler= Here is a quick example]
[img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/4664/61037.jpg[/img]
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I'm sorry, but this Set needs improvements. 3/10. If you need any help, you can PM me for advice.
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I can't read the effects. The fonts are too small.

How my cards are overpowered?

[~British Soul~]

not a very good set at all. metalgarurumon is too OP'd 4000 ATK for a level 4. Avoid fake types where ever possible, try to avoid using divine attribute, i can see some OCG errors here (e.g use Normal Summoned, instead of normal summon). All the imperialdramon cards are ridiculously OP'd 5000+ ATK monsters that can only be destroyed by battle, and they're divine attribute too WTF? i'd give this set a 2.5/10 - you could do better, but i understand if this is your first attempt at using the card maker

NOTE - with tuner monsters (yours being metalgarurumon) we do not see tuner/effect on the real cards, it's fine as type/tuner

[Icecubezz]

[quote name='$super**$star**$silver$' timestamp='1289943856' post='4789686']
not a very good set at all. metalgarurumon is too OP'd 4000 ATK for a level 4. Avoid fake types where ever possible, try to avoid using divine attribute, i can see some OCG errors here (e.g use Normal Summoned, instead of normal summon). All the imperialdramon cards are ridiculously OP'd 5000+ ATK monsters that can only be destroyed by battle, and they're divine attribute too WTF? i'd give this set a 2.5/10 - you could do better, but i understand if this is your first attempt at using the card maker

NOTE - with tuner monsters (yours being metalgarurumon) we do not see tuner/effect on the real cards, it's fine as type/tuner
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I understand but it is hard to special summon the IMPERIALDRAMON PALADIN MODE.

[~British Soul~]

i think with the first imperialdramon it's first effect should be - This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by Tributing 2 monsters whilst Omnimon is face-up on your side of the field. it makes a little more sense there

[Icecubezz]

[quote name='$super**$star**$silver$' timestamp='1289944520' post='4789721']
i think with the first imperialdramon it's first effect should be - This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by Tributing 2 monsters whilst Omnimon is face-up on your side of the field. it makes a little more sense there
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I think it is a bad idea to change to your first effect because what if Omnimon went to graveyard and Imperialdramon can be Normal Summon without tributing 2 monsters or Special Summon with Omnimon on your field.

Either way, Imperialdramon can be Normal Summon without tributing 2 monsters.