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This is a set is based off a book I have been wrighting

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[Spoiler=lore]This card cannot be destroyed by battle.
Tribute this card from your side of the Field to Special Summon 1 "Blood Blader" card from your Hand or Graveyard[/Spoiler]
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[Spoiler=lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 "Sara" monster from your side of the Field. This card gains 100 ATK points for every Fire monster in the Graveyard.[/Spoiler]
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[Spoiler=lore]When this card is summoned place two spell counters. This card gains 500 ATK points for every spell counter on this card. Remove one spell counter from this card to destroy one card on the field.[/Spoiler]
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[Spoiler=lore]This card can only Special Summoned by sacrificing 1 "Blood Blader" card equipped with "A Reason For Rage" card. Pay half of your life points to send all cards in both players' hands and on the field to Graveyard. Inflict 300 points damage to opponent's Life Points for each card that is sent to the Graveyard by this effect.[/Spoiler]
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[Spoiler=lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 "Sara The Over Lord of Fire Reincarnate" monster from your side of the Field. This card gains 100 ATK points for every Fire monster in the Graveyard.[/Spoiler]
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[Spoiler=lore]This card can only be summoned by sacrificing one Max Gunner Over Lord of Darkness Reincarnate.
When this is summoned, summon one Shadow Minion monster card from your hand or deck.[/Spoiler]
[img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/2821/211583t.jpg[/img][Spoiler=lore]This card can only be summoned if there is a Max Gunner or Kage card on the field.
this card gains 500 ATK and DEF points for every monster card this card destroyed.
This card can copy the effect of any monster on the field or graveyard [/Spoiler]
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[img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/3320/211583b.jpg[/img][Spoiler=lore]This card can only be summoned if there is a Max Gunner or Kage card on the field.
As long as this card is on the field no monster lv.4 or lower can be summoned.
When this card is summoned destroy any monster lv.4 or lower.[/Spoiler]
[img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/2821/211583t.jpg[/img][Spoiler=lore]This card can only be summoned if there is a Max Gunner or Kage card on the field.
as long as this card is on the feild any Shadow minion card gains 500 ATK points[/Spoiler]
[img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/928/211583h.jpg[/img][Spoiler=lore]This card can only be summoned by sacrificing 3 dark attributed monsters.
This cards Atk is combined Atk of the tributed monsters plus 1000.
When this is summoned, summon one Shadow Minion monster card from your hand or deck.[/Spoiler]
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[img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/9163/211583w.jpg[/img][Spoiler=lore]This card can not be destroyed by spell or trap cards.
This card gains 500 ATK points for each monster it destroys.
Ones per turn summon 1 blood mInine card from your hand.
This card is treated as a "blood blader" card[/Spoiler]


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A lot of these are overpowered. Especially the ones with around 1800 ATK. 1800 is pretty much the threshold for cards to have good effects at. At 1800, they become a "beatstick", which is a monster that has a large ATK value and is used mostly for attacking, and they usually have a very difficult to use effect, or an effect that is both helpful and harmful at the same time.

Blood Blader Enraged Release is extremely overpowered, as is Sara, who could destroy 2 cards as soon as she comes onto the field. You should tone their effects down, and possibly give them some restrictions.

I like the concept of your cards, though, and I would keep working at making more.
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