Probably OP, but whatev's.

[Embittered Moon]

[spoiler=original card][img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/8043/208217.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=lore]When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, move one Fiend-Type monster from your deck to your hand. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon one Fiend-Type monster with 1900 ATK or less from your hand. When this card is Removed From Play, Destroy all monsters on the field.[/spoiler] [/spoiler]

[spoiler=EDITED]
[img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/8043/208217.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=lore]When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, move one Fiend-Type monster from your deck to your hand. Once per turn, you can pay 1200 Life Points to Special Summon one Fiend-Type monster with 1900 ATK or less from your hand. When this card is Removed From Play, Destroy all monsters on the field.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

LATEST VERSION:
[img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/8043/208217.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=lore]When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, add 1 Fiend-Type monster from your deck to your hand. Once per turn, you can pay 1200 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Fiend-Type monster with 1900 ATK or less from your hand. When this card is removed from play, destroy all set monsters on the field.[/spoiler]

[Fierté]

No caps on -
From
Play
Destroy

Mispelled -
Guardian

Original, yet overpowered.
I can tell it's not using the official card grammar, after 10 years of Yu-Gi-Oh! but can't really point out the errors as i'm a new member.

[Embittered Moon]

Thanks. That is why the title is "Its probably overpowered." Will update soon.

[u]EDIT:[/u]

0__o i spelled those correctly

[jack kenna]

not bad will re judge when you post new card

ok thats better 7/10 good work mate keep em comein add me if you want will have a 1v1 some time i think we are pritty close anyway good card

[judedudemude]

add one more star and i say it blanaced but that my advice take or leave it
(my advice is LONELY !!! because no one ever takes it)

lol

[Embittered Moon]

i iz bumpin

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

Yes, you're right. It is overpowered. And this is the proper OCG:
"When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, add 1 Fiend-Type monster from your deck to your hand. Once per turn, you can pay 1200 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Fiend-Type monster with 1900 ATK or less from your hand. When this [face-up] card is removed from pay, destroy all monsters on the field."

The addition I put in would make the card more balanced, and make it so you can't just splash it in a Chaos or other removal deck and wipe the field.

[Embittered Moon]

Thank you. I made so it would only nuke the face-down defense position monsters on the field. Balanced enough now?

[Embittered Moon]

bumpin again.

[Embittered Moon]

Bump :iconlaplz:

[♠>:Stick-Man:<♠]

Correct OCG fix:

When this card is Successfully Tribute Summoned, add 1 Fiend-Type monster to your hand from your Deck. Once per turn, you can pay 1200 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Fiend-Type monster with 1900 ATK or lower from your hand. When this card is removed from play, destroy all monsters on the field.

There's your OCG fix.

Now I like it's effect, original but classic. Its effective. And the pictures good to. 10'

[Embittered Moon]

thanks.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

First verison is better. The increase in LP pay was insignificant and quite unnecessary. 1000 is perfectly fine. 1200 is a waste. Anyways~ Stygian Street Patrol is infinitly better >> It summons better monsters whenever you need it (except on opponents turns obv). Last effect is random. Gives it bad flow =/. Both versions are pretty much an UP Sangan / SSP.

[gαтє¢яαѕнєя]

It's interesting. It doesn't seem overpowered, and it doesn't seem underpowered either. You've found a nice balance between what you get with the effect, and how much you can do with it.

At the same time, it's not very exciting. I mean yeah, it's a neat effect, I suppose, but it doesn't seem very creative. It reminds me (in a way) of that Spell Card that allows you to Special Summon a Normal Monster, Level 4. It can be useful in specific situations, but it's not exactly worth running aside from that.

The picture fits the card well, which is a nice touch!

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

=/ Also that fact it needs a tribute is a downgrade as well. Stygian Street is Level 4 and can Summon a monster with 2000 ATK and it's easily searchable being DARK and low leveled.

[Embittered Moon]

Thanks.

[War Chess]

The latest version is OK, the others are OP, but you corrected it so its OK.
10/10