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I know this card has to have the ocg improved so please help!

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Lore: This card cannot be special summoned or set. This card can only be normal summoned by tributing all cards on your side of the field. When this card is destroyed by battle destroy all cards on the field and inflict the total amount of the atk of all cards on the field as battle damage to both players.
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[quote name='Acecardman22' timestamp='1290474269' post='4804185']
special summoned= Special Summoned

tributing= Tributing



battle= Battle



atk= ATK

I think thats it. Just some minor capitalization errors. Once you make a few more cards, it'll start to sink in.
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Oh tank you for helping me!
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As it is at the moment, it is able to be Normal Summoned by tributing all cards on your side of the field, not specifying if there is a minimum amount. This does mean all I need is one monster for a 2800 beat stick that has a major destruction effect when it is destroyed. Add a minimum amount of cards :)

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Also, it's impossible to "Tribute" a Spell or Trap Card. It should say you Tribute all monsters you control and send all Spell and Trap Cards on your side of the field to the Graveyard. And since Spells and Traps don't have ATK, you should say "The combined ATK of all monsters destroyed by this effect" or something along those lines.

It's a pretty cool card, though it seems overpowered. Try taking the advice of the guy above me.
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