BoxAndShrimp Posted November 23, 2010 Report Share Posted November 23, 2010 [img]http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/1790/319021.jpg[/img] [img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/1995/319021m.jpg[/img] [img]http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/1790/319021.jpg[/img] [img]http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/1790/319021.jpg[/img] [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/3603/319021h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/1790/319021.jpg[/img] [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/1790/319021.jpg[/img] [img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/1790/319021.jpg[/img] [img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/150/319021j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/4585/319021i.jpg[/img] [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/1790/319021.jpg[/img] [img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/1790/319021.jpg[/img] [img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/4585/319021i.jpg[/img] [img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/6500/319021u.jpg[/img] [img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/1790/319021.jpg[/img] [img]http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/7130/319021d.jpg[/img] [img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/983/319021s.jpg[/img] [img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/7130/319021d.jpg[/img] [img]http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/2223/319021np.jpg[/img] [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/1790/319021.jpg[/img] Feedback is much appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tourmaline Posted November 23, 2010 Report Share Posted November 23, 2010 Full Fair Blast is broken as Hell, firstly. Actually, a lot of these card effects have already been done... Such as Ribbon Breaker, for example. You need to get rid of one Angel Warrior you control, while Sakuretsu Armor is the same thing, without any cost. Double Vision is basically Respect Play, as well. Fairy Warrior Twilance reminds me of Psychic Lifetrancer, but with a burn effect, as well. For now, I'm giving 6/10. This archetype has potential, I believe. I'm not being any kinder because you're new, either. What I do like is that your OCG is actually decent. Plus, you don't use images with a monster, and no background. Many new people tend to make that error. For your first set, it is well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoxAndShrimp Posted November 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2010 thanks for the feedback, i will take that into consideration with my future cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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