My Realistic Cards

[Trenox]

Ok so i am just new to this but i thought of a couple of good ideas for Cards. but i have to no does Yugioh! actually take a look at what people make on here by any chance?

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You can activate this card when your opponent declares an attack. Remove the attacking monster from play for the next 3 turns. The monster removed does not count toward the 5 card monster zone.
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This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of Spell or Trap card(s).Once per turn if your opponent controls a face-down defense monster you may force that monster to change battle positions into face up attack position. This monster equipped with this card gains 500 ATK and DEF.
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This card can only be special summoned by the ritual spell card "Greek Fire". This card is unaffected by the effects of trap cards. For each zombie monster in your graveyard increase the ATK of this card by 100 pts.
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In the Abyss this creature strikes those who enter it's realm unwelcomed.
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During your opponents turn if this card is attacked by a monster your opponent controls pay 400 life points to remove this monster from play until the end of the turn. If you choose to use this effect this monster still counts toward the 5 card monster zone.
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This card is used to Ritual Summon "Achilles Undead". You must also offer monsters from the field or you hand whose total Level Stars equal the Level Stars of "Achilles Undead.
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One Dragon Tuner Monster + One Dragon Monster
This Card Cannot be targeted by spell or trap card(s). Once per duel you may pay 2500 life pts and discard a card from your hand that is a monster to destroy and remove all the cards on the field except this one.
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This card can be special summoned if you have no other monster cards on your side the field. When this card is summoned sucessfully inflict 1000 points of direct damage to your opponents life points. This monster can double its ATK during the Battle Phase if you discard one card from your hand.
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You must pay 1000 life points when you activate this card. Special Summon as many "Mythical Piranhas" from you respective deck, hand and graveyard in face-up attack or face-down defense position. Any "Mythical Piranhas" summoned in face-up attack position can attack your opponents life points directly.
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Activate this card when an opponent declares a direct attack on your life points. This card may be used as a substitute for all of your opponents declared attacks this turn.
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When this card is activated only Fiend, Zombie, and Spellcaster Type monsters can attack twice during the battle phase. The ATK and DEF of all these type of cards are increased by 400 Points.
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Control of this card cannot be switched. Also if this card attacks a face-down defense position monster with an effect, negate that effect. This includes flip effects.

[~British Soul~]

please. no attachments

[daggonthing]

Green Eyes Crystal Dragon: That's pretty good. I would just change the wording/effect to "Once per duel, you may pay 2500 life pts and discard a monster card from your hand to destroy all [u]monsters[/u] on the field and in your opponent's hand except this card." Destroying all cards on the field and in your opponent's hand is honestly too good of an effect, even if you can only use it once per duel.

Achilles Undead: With this card's ability, it should only have at the most 2100 attack. With his stats the way they are, all you need to do is stick him in a zombie deck and he can easily become just as powerful as a "Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon."

The Shadow Realm: This card is fine.

[Smesh]

Attachments are not allowed.

When you are done making your card, save it, and then click on the card. A link will form below it. Copy and paste the WHOLE link, including the [img] tags, and post the link on your first post by clicking "edit" on your first post.

[Trenox]

Ok will do srry about the attachments still working on the way to post so u can see them

[forteller]

one=1
summon=Summon
battle phase=Battle Phase

[forteller]

i was only letting you know not trying to be mean im the nicest guy you will find on this site so take advantage of me
and ill be more than willing to answer any question you have about the site(if i dont know the answer i defiantly know someone who does)
or if you need any help im here just inbox me

[Trenox]

[quote name='Smesh' timestamp='1290623075' post='4807305']
Attachments are not allowed.

When you are done making your card, save it, and then click on the card. A link will form below it. Copy and paste the WHOLE link, including the [img] tags, and post the link on your first post by clicking "edit" on your first post.
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OK so how do i get rid of attachments?

[quote name='forteller' timestamp='1290650146' post='4808401']
i was only letting you know not trying to be mean im the nicest guy you will find on this site so take advantage of me
and ill be more than willing to answer any question you have about the site(if i dont know the answer i defiantly know someone who does)
or if you need any help im here just inbox me
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Hey thanks man for adding me naw i wasnt being sensitive or anything but they arnt perfect cards yet im still working on them lol including the spelling etc. the Set is called Into The Abyss

[forteller]

dont worry about the attachments dude just DONT do it again ok
because no one i asked knew how to fix it 0_0

[Trenox]

[quote name='forteller' timestamp='1290651024' post='4808437']
dont worry about the attachments dude just DONT do it again ok
because no one i asked knew how to fix it 0_0
[/quote]

lol YES i figured it out soon ill be more pro about this lol but yea what do u think? those are the basic cards like synchro, monster, monster effect, ritual card, field card, etc. what do u think?

[Jack of All Spades]

Not bad, I must say you've caught up so quickly.
Some OCG (On Card Grammar) mistakes, but your new. You'll pick up on it as you go along.
The pictures seem scrambled between anime and reality. Like it.
7.6/10 Good work and welcome to the forum.

[forteller]

Consider the fixes i already mentioned above.
then if you actually play yugioh and you know some card effects that r similar to the cards you have made go look at them online somewhere to see the wording (that takes practice)
The Card are random lol but that ok
the last sentence in the first card isnt need and all those words dont need to be capitalized

From 1 friend to another just to let you know for starters its better to post 1 card at a time and wait to see if people comment when you post many caRDS AT once people tend not to read them unless they know you or ur popular around here so next time try your hardest on one card and post it

People will tend to ignore your card if it isnt close to the right wording

btw if you see people saying OCG that mean Official Card Game but they r only referring to the wording of the card

[Trenox]

[quote name='forteller' timestamp='1290651870' post='4808470']
Consider the fixes i already mentioned above.
then if you actually play yugioh and you know some card effects that r similar to the cards you have made go look at them online somewhere to see the wording (that takes practice)
The Card are random lol but that ok
the last sentence in the first card isnt need and all those words dont need to be capitalized

From 1 friend to another just to let you know for starters its better to post 1 card at a time and wait to see if people comment when you post many caRDS AT once people tend not to read them unless they know you or ur popular around here so next time try your hardest on one card and post it

People will tend to ignore your card if it isnt close to the right wording

btw if you see people saying OCG that mean Official Card Game but they r only referring to the wording of the card
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I do play Yugioh ( had to refer to a lot of the spelling etc. im def wokring on it but ur completely right. how does posting just one card at a time work? what like makes people wanna look at just one and not all of them?

[forteller]

people r more likely to leave comment if there r just 1 or two cards rather than 10 it just works like that until you get better at this just dont most so many cards together becuz u wont get the card by card reviews you will need in order to improve.

Here is one of my early post http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/225880-the-undefeatable-monster-broken/
its just one card and i said in the post what my thoughts were when i made the card (thats not necessary) people will more than likely leave a comment on a post like this becuz its just one card and people will even corrodible your OCG more often if you post less cards which can help you learn it faster.