omega prinny Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 [img]http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/8233/317875.jpg[/img] review and give critism/comments plz (if there is anything to give). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 I didn't even read the card because the first line told me you need the fix your OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 [quote name='war chess' timestamp='1290602452' post='4806959'] I didn't even read the card because the first line told me you need the fix your OCG. [/quote] Well that's constructive, and fair, and spam since you didn't offer an OCG fix. Unpleasanteries aside; the card with edited OCG for you Soul Diverge [b]O[/b]nce per turn, place 1 'Soul Counter' on a [b]face-up[/b] monster on your opponent's side of the field [b](max 1)[/b]. As long as this is on the field, monsters with 'Soul Counters' on them cannot attack. When this card is destroyed by a Spell or Trap Card, destroy all monsters with 'Soul Counters'. This card needs a cost, most likely Life Points but maybe Tribute or discard. Think the last effect is pushing it over the top, I would recommend replacing the last sentence with 'If this card is removed from the field, remove all 'Soul Counters' on the field.' But not a bad card certainly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1SDAN Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Correct OCG up there Great card, I'd either keep the last effect and have a cost of 1500, or remove the last effect and have a cost of 1000. But that's just my opinion... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daggonthing Posted November 24, 2010 Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 [quote name='1SDAN' timestamp='1290615638' post='4807185'] ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Correct OCG up there Great card, I'd either keep the last effect and have a cost of 1500, or remove the last effect and have a cost of 1000. But that's just my opinion... [/quote] Yeah I agree. Anywhere from a cost of 1500-2000 life pts would be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
omega prinny Posted December 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 alright done, anything else? i am also thinking of making this into a deck ( or at least a bunch of cards ). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 [quote name='omega prinny' timestamp='1293082311' post='4875750'] alright done, anything else? i am also thinking of making this into a deck ( or at least a bunch of cards ). [/quote] Capitalize words in title. And don't necrobump a topic that's been dead for a month. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
omega prinny Posted December 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2010 sorry i was away for a while and didn't have time to check on topic, i have been itching to bump it for a while Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted December 27, 2010 Report Share Posted December 27, 2010 [quote name='Matt Bahamut' timestamp='1293096263' post='4876056'] And don't necrobump a topic that's been dead for a month. [/quote] I'm surprised that people still haven't realized that you can bump, and yes even necrobump, your own topics when you want to, but you cannot bump other peoples topics, let alone necrobump them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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