Ikov Posted November 25, 2010 Report Share Posted November 25, 2010 I made (and am still making) a set of cards that are all anti-zombie. They focus on cards that will make the opponent's monsters Zombie-type and then cards that have special effects that are specific against zombies. It is mostly an RP deck and is probably not practical in an actual duel. Please rate and/or provide criticism to help me improve . [spoiler=Z Survivor Monsters][img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/4750/318420.jpg[/img] [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/4750/318420.jpg[/img] [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/7228/318420f.jpg[/img] [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/6527/318420x.jpg[/img] [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/4750/318420.jpg[/img] [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/5736/318420l.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Trap Cards][img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/1939/318420e.jpg[/img] [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/4541/318420k.jpg[/img] [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/5486/318420c.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Magic Cards][img]http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/8802/318420w.jpg[/img] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/4750/318420.jpg[/img] [img]http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/4750/318420.jpg[/img] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/6982/318420n.jpg[/img] [img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/8802/318420w.jpg[/img] [img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/4750/318420.jpg[/img] [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/4750/318420.jpg[/img] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/8021/318420b.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Still adding to it. Just need to come up with some new ideas! *Added Z-Survivor Ikov Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dendalus Posted November 25, 2010 Report Share Posted November 25, 2010 I really like your Idea here dude. The only realy big problem I see is that the pipe bomb is over powered. I mean its a mirror force but only when a zombie attacks i get that but still its should be more involved with your cards like when a zombie type monster declares a attack on a level 4 or lower monster you control with z-survivor in its name negate the attack then destroy all face up attack position monsters you opponent control. Also the art work is kinda blah but that sometimes cant be helped but i want to see the rest of this set when its complete. If these were real I could see it being run in a deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ikov Posted November 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2010 thnx, yeah i get what you mean about the pipe bomb, i'll make some corrections, as far as art work, i've been scouting around deviant art and photobucket but neither seem to produce spectacular results lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted November 25, 2010 Report Share Posted November 25, 2010 Your idea is awesome, ireally like it. Find pictures at Deviantart.com of zombie killers, there are some pretty good ones so you can make more cards The effects are short but effective against Zombie Monsters, some minor OCG erros but i don't mind those, 9' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ikov Posted November 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2010 Thanks man, but I'm a strange breed of perfectionist so if you wouldn't mind identifying the OCG errors I would appreciate it =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted November 25, 2010 Report Share Posted November 25, 2010 Put down the lore for each card and I'll fix all the OCG errors for all the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted November 25, 2010 Report Share Posted November 25, 2010 great idea, i really like it 9/10 *looks in wikia* with the field spell there is already a card with the same name, but i'm sure that isn't a problem with changing the name http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Dark_City Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ikov Posted November 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2010 aha! didn't realize Dark City already existed, easy change tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ikov Posted November 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tenneko Kazeno Posted November 26, 2010 Report Share Posted November 26, 2010 Nice set, keep up the good work. Your monsters are mostly good but your Spells and traps need alot of changes ocg wise. I spent 20 minutes writing up fixes to them, only to have the site glich and delete what I wrote. In general this is a great idea, but I would like to see some higher lvl monsters. Oh, and don't worry about the corrections I'm putting down. Most of them are just nitpicking with wording or just my personal suggestions so you can learn to look for these things yourself, thus allowing you to make better cards. Also, something us old timers tend to forget to tell the newbes is the use of spoilers. [ spoiler= A name ] your cards [ /spoiler ] just remove the spaces. [spoiler=A name] your cards [/spoiler] Gabe This monster gains 1000 Atk and Def when it battles a Zombie-type monster, during the Damage Calculation step only. Erin This monster cannot be destroyed by Battle with a Zombie-type monster. I would also add a secondary effect like If this card is attacked by a Zombie-Type monster, add 1 Z-Survivor card from your Deck to your Hand. Alexa If this monster destroys a Zombie-type monster by Battle, it can attack once again. Gwendol Each time this monster destroys a Zombie-type monster by Battle, increase the Atk of this monster by 300. Zombie Stomping If a Z-Survivor monster you control Battles a Zombie-Type monster with Atk 500 or more higher than your monster, increase your monster by 1000 Atk until the end of the Battle phase. During the End phase, destroy all cards equipped to your monster. Spreading the Infection This should be a Continuous Spell card Only activate this card if your Opponent controls 1 or more Zombie-Type monsters. All monsters on your Opponent's side of the Field are treated as Zombie-Type. Deadly Corrupting Virus this one was a little harder to set up Quick play version Select 1 monster on your Opponent's side of the Field. That monster is treated as a Zombie-Type monster and loses 500 Atk and Def until the End phase of this Turn. Equip Version The equipped monster is treated as a Zombie-Type. During each Standby phase, the equipped monster loses 100 Atk and Def. Quarantined City If a Z-Survivor monster you control would be destroyed, you may discard 1 card from your hand and it is not destroyed. Battle calculations are applied normally. Anti-Zombie Gear Its fine Anti-Horde Pipe bomb just change ATK-position to attack position Erratic Aggression this should be a quick play because the effect would end at the end of your turn, or you can state that the effect ends at the end of your Opponent's next turn. Not That Door Activate this card only while there is a face-up "Safe House" card on your side of the field. Destroy it and increase the original ATK of your monsters by 300. Safe House Activate only when you control 1 or more Z-Survivor monsters. No monsters can declare an attack until the end of your Opponents third Turn after activation. Alfred I like him Cocktail appears fine Level of Awareness also appears to be fine All in all you did a great job on these cards and I cannot wait to see more. 9/10 for originality and a good start on a great set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ikov Posted November 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2010 =) thanks, i'll definitely work on those corrections, and those spoilers would make it easier, i had no idea how to make those Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tenneko Kazeno Posted November 26, 2010 Report Share Posted November 26, 2010 Nice changes, especially Safe House. It came out alot better than my suggestion for it. Anyway, Ikov is very nice and without any ocg errors that I can see. There is one error I missed on Quarantine City. It is small, just change Battle Calculation to Damage Calculation and all is good. I'm sorry for missing that the first time. Well, I wish you luck on future ideas. Maybe you should try making some monsters for them to beat up on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ikov Posted November 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2010 ok, i think i'm pretty much finished with this set anyway, tho i appreciate all the help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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