Rise Mephistos

[Ignis avis]

[img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/562/230256b.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore]This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 level 5 or higher Fiend-type monsters in your Graveyard from play. Once per turn you can remove 1 card in your Graveyard from play to activate 1 of the following effects: and based on its type apply the proper effect: ● Monster: Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. ● Spell: Destroy 1 Face-up monster on the Field. ● Trap: Return 1 Card on either players field to their hand.[/spoiler]

Constructive Criticism welcome.

[Catman25]

The summoning conditions make it quite easy to summon this card. Along w/the burn and card destruction/return, it seems a bit op'ed.

[Ignis avis]

Could you explain how to make it not OP?

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

2 things: "Ha Des" is the "Ruler of the Underworld". Therefore the concept of this card is already in use. Also, you stole the Summoning conditions of Dark Necrofear.

This card does seem pretty overpowered, seeing as it can do a multitude of effects, all of which can be considered good in their own respect. And plus it has 3000 ATK/2700 DEF, and a relatively simple summoning condition.

[CNo.101 S.H. Death Knight]

it actually too easy to summon knowing that there hundreds of Fiend type monster to make a deck of it unless though you make its summoning a challenge by adding level requirement to those 3 monsters to be removed from play. Like example remove 3 Level 5 Fiend Type monsters from play then it be less op'ed

[♠>:Stick-Man:<♠]

I like these kinda effects but I'm too lazy to make one for one of my cards lol. Well great card, picture is sweet, I hardly see in OCG errors, and what a very destructive card Destruction cards are the best! I would use this in my "Underworld" Set. 10'

[Ignis avis]

@ slayer_supreme. I did not steal the summoning conditions of dark necrofear. They might be the same, but I chose it because I was making his effects tie into removing cards from the graveyard. I also chose the name for that reason. The underworld would be considered the removed from play area as it's farther destroyed than just sent to the graveyard.

@Scheath&Thanatos I'll take the suggestion on the level requirements.

@ master. Thanks for the 10.

[Jack of All Spades]

Too bad you couldn't get the bullet points in there, or this would've been a 10/10 card.
9.8/10: All you need to do is get the bullet points in; everything else is great.

[Ignis avis]

I actually have the bullet points in the maker, the card doesn't show them though.

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

[quote name='Ignis avis' timestamp='1290820611' post='4812293']
@ slayer_supreme. I did not steal the summoning conditions of dark necrofear. They might be the same, but I chose it because I was making his effects tie into removing cards from the graveyard. I also chose the name for that reason. The underworld would be considered the removed from play area as it's farther destroyed than just sent to the graveyard.
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The Different Dimension is the place where monsters are removed from play. And the underworld, as already stated, is in control of by Ha Des. The storyline also goes that he keeps struggling against the King of the Dark Abyss (or whatever its name is) for superiority. And it still has the same Summoning condition, and I would suggest changing it to be more original.

[Ignis avis]

There are mutliple cards with the same, or similar summoning condition of removing such and such cards from play. I know about the DD, and don't really care. I really don't care about storyline either, and just because there are 2 people fighting for the underworld doesn't mean that there can't be a third, although that wasn't my intention. I'm sorry if I sound like an ***, but I'd rather make a good card that isn't OPd, and has good OCG than worry about how it relates to other cards storywise.

Edit: Changed the name to Champion of the underworld instead of Lord of the underworld.