♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted November 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 Added spoilers.[quote name='Cyber ΩΜΣGΔ' timestamp='1290833341' post='4812715'] Flameman is pretty good, just get rid of the "Randomly" in his Spell effect, since you are the one selecting it, and you prolly dunno what the card is unless it is revealed or something. Also, the last effect should also let you bring out Destiny or Evil Heroes, but that's just my thinking. 8.7765/10 without revision. 9.3084/10 with. I like these new Elemental Heroes a lot. You should make a Fusion for Flameman and Foresto called "Elemental Hero Forest Fire" or "Elemental Hero The Torch" or something. [/quote] Oh and I would make a Fusion Card of those too, but there is know picture of them combined. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
forteller Posted November 27, 2010 Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 I like all of them except sparkman seems super op to me 1 tribute 2400 (thats monarch so thats cool) destory 1 spell or trap everyturn plus burn effect??? i say choose 1 or the other not both. And the last monster has some OCG errors Once per turn, draw 1 card. When this card destroys a monster that your opponent controls, you can draw 2 cards, then send 1 card to the Graveyard[b](From Where??)[/b]. When this card would be destroyed, you can draw 1 card and send it to the Graveyard to negate the destruction of this card. When this card is destroyed by battle, your opponent draws 2 cards. This card is pretty cool and could really speed up heroes plus with sky scraper its a 2700 monster with this effect you could easily be drawing 4 cards every turn maybe you should turn it down a bit. Maybe op due to drawing power. The last effect may balance it but im not sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted November 27, 2010 Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 Am I the only one who sees Warchester as broken? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted November 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 Thanks forteller for the criticism, and Imma leave Sparkman how he is, cause to me his good that way. And for Warchester, From where the card came from, is 1 of the 2 you drew, so you keep one and discard the other.[quote name='Zandaa Roaisu' timestamp='1290871775' post='4813311'] Am I the only one who sees Warchester as broken? [/quote] And you might be right, but will see who else complains about it before i go to fixing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buttercup Posted November 27, 2010 Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 1800 generic floater noooooooooooo. Fix Warchester, srsly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted November 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 Okay then guys, I'll try to fix Warchester.Edited Warchester a little bit, is he broken or overpowered now? And added Rockatron, enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted November 27, 2010 Report Share Posted November 27, 2010 Rockatron is pretty broken as well, seeing that it'll be a 2500 DEF monster even if it attacks or doesn't and it can only be get rid of either by a monster/spell effects that destroy etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted November 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 There I changed up his effect a little bit as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted November 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 I still want to know who voted nuh-uh lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted November 28, 2010 Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 [quote name='♣Master♣' timestamp='1290907629' post='4814704'] There I changed up his effect a little bit as well. [/quote] The card is still the same as it was before. And FYI, will you stop double posting? It's against the rules to do so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted November 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 Well i still don't see it as broken, so it's good that way. And iaght i'll stop' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dharc Posted November 28, 2010 Report Share Posted November 28, 2010 This card cannot be [b]Normal Summoned[/b] or [b]Set[/b]. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 1 "Elemental Hero" [b]and 1 "Evil Hero"[/b] you control. When this card is [b]Special Summoned successfully[/b], destroy 1 Level 6 or lower monster that your opponent controls, [b]and halve this card's ATK until the End Phase[/b]. Once per turn, [b]excluding the turn this card is Special Summoned[/b], you can remove [b]2 cards in your Graveyard from play[/b] to destroy 1 [b]card[/b] that your opponent controls. This card cannot attack on the turn this effect was [b]activated[/b]. ATK=2900 DEF=2000 Bold=Fixed While this may not be what you were going for originally, I think this would be better for him, as he can still attack, but with only 1450 ATK (I thought he needed a boost, as I also changed the summon requirements). Plus, what if your opponent has no monsters, but you suspect they may have Mirror Force or know they have Scrap-Iron? Just attack anyway? Bad plan. You always go for Spell and Trap removal if you can. Overall I like this card, even without my fixes. Could easily function in an Anti-Meta or Hero deck, as Heroes are good at finding niches in decks. Also, the name is a little bland. How about "Elemental Hero Telikos" (Neos being greek for "new," while telikos means "final," reflecting his nature as being the opposite of Neos)? I give it an 8.7605/10 w/o fixes, and 9.06/10 with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted November 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2010 Why thanks Cyber Omega, this really helps me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Embittered Moon Posted November 29, 2010 Report Share Posted November 29, 2010 looks awesome, but i cant see the pics because my computer is screwed. will rate them later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted November 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2010 Well thanks Brooklan Rage, you've always been a great support and friend on YCM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkzombimaster400 Posted November 29, 2010 Report Share Posted November 29, 2010 great effects, awesome pics, 10/10 my friend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted November 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2010 Thanks mate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragonhunterdante Posted November 29, 2010 Report Share Posted November 29, 2010 i gotta learn with you!! awesome work!!!!please post more of these!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted November 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2010 Why thanks for being excited about my cards, it makes me feel good and if you need help just ask. And i will be doing soon as i go on and find good pictures first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted November 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2010 New Fusion Monster added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted November 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2010 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted November 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 New card added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted November 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 Bump for the night' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Cheese Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 Wow I love the effect 9.9/10 I dont see who would say Nuh-uh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prototype Posted November 30, 2010 Report Share Posted November 30, 2010 preety nice but theres already a mystic baby dragon yugioh card. http://selectstartgames.files.wordpress.com/2009/06/prototype_042508_7263.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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