Chromatics [new set]

[TJP12409]

I want to create a card series called Chromatics, with each card following a basic color wheel in accordance to each other. This is my first card series and I am new to the forums. YES IM A N00B, DEAL WITH IT.
(anything in parenthesis not on card, @ is 1 level star)

MONSTER CARDS:
R Chromatic (red): 1800/0 {Fire}
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G Chromatic (green): 1500/1300 {Wind}
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B Chromatic (blue): 0/2000 {Water}
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C Chromatic (cyan): 1200/2600 {Water}
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Can be Special Summoned by tributing "G Chromatic" and "B Chromatic". If Special summoned by this effect, "C Chromatic" gains 600 ATK

M Chromatic (magena): 1800/1800 {Wind}
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Can be Special Summoned by tributing "R Chromatic" and "B Chromatic". If Special summoned by this effect, "M Chromatic" gains 200 ATK and DEF

Y Chromatic (yellow): 2400/1200 {Fire}
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Can be Special Summoned by tributing "G Chromatic" and "R Chromatic". If Special summoned by this effect, "Y Chromatic" gains 200 ATK and 600 DEF

WHITE Chromatic: 3000/2000 {Light}
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[Fusion] "R Chromatic"+"G Chromatic"+"B Chromatic"
Does not require Polymerization to be summoned, you may tribute a "R", "G", or "B Chromatic" from your hand or field to activate one of these effects:
- Destroy one card in your opponent's hand randomly
OR
- Deal 800 points of direct damage to your opponent's Life Points

KEY Chromatic (black): 3600/2800 {Dark}
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[Fusion] "C Chromatic"+"M Chromatic"+"Y Chromatic"
Does not require Polymerization to be summoned, you may tribute a "C", "M", or "Y Chromatic" from your hand or field to activate one of these effects:
- Destroy one card on your opponent's field
OR
- Deal 1000 points of direct damage to your opponent's Life Points

Chromatic Color Eater: 2000/2000 {Earth}
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If any monster with "Chromatic" in it's name is destroyed, This monster gains 300 ATK and DEF

Chromatic Soldier: 1800/1800 {Earth}
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If the monster used to tribute summon this monster has Chromatic in it's name, instead of sending it to the graveyard, equip it to this monster as an equip spell card. Chromatic soldier gains ATK equal to half the ATK of the equipped monster.

Chromatic Bomb: 1000/1000 {Earth}
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If attacked while in face down defense position, equip it to the attacking monster. During your next Standby Phase, destroy the monster "Chromatic Bomb" is equipped to and deal Direct damage equal to the destroyed monster's level x200.

Feedback would be great, I have yet to make support cards for these so Ideas would be appreciated

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

First of all, I would like to welcome you to the site, and especially to the Written Cards Section. This is the most underused card submission section of them all, and for that matter probably one of the most underrated. I don't see how having a picture makes your card any more special, except that it looks more like a real one...

Anyways, let me give you some pointers on your cards:
- If you make a Normal Monster, please give it a description. This is the written cards section, so if you're going to make a card you should at least write out everything you need for it. A short description like in regular Normal Monsters works out fine. You could even use this to help us determine the use or look of your cards.
- Try to keep monsters around the average ATK power for their Level, and if a monster is harder to get out, give it a better effect, or more ATK/DEF! If it's easier to bring out, make it weaker, or more restricted in its uses.
- When you make a whole bunch of cards, it's a good idea to put them in a spoiler, so the page isn't stretched so much and things look much neater.

I think your cards ideas are very good. They're just not very strong monsters, you know? For instance, Chromatic Soldier is a level 5 with only 1600 ATK? Sure, he gets a good boost when he was Summoned by a Tribute of certain monsters, but because the monsters are specific his effect isn't really that tough. I hope this helps you!

[TJP12409]

[quote name='slayer_supreme' timestamp='1290747076' post='4810754']
First of all, I would like to welcome you to the site, and especially to the Written Cards Section. This is the most underused card submission section of them all, and for that matter probably one of the most underrated. I don't see how having a picture makes your card any more special, except that it looks more like a real one...

Anyways, let me give you some pointers on your cards:
- If you make a Normal Monster, please give it a description. This is the written cards section, so if you're going to make a card you should at least write out everything you need for it. A short description like in regular Normal Monsters works out fine. You could even use this to help us determine the use or look of your cards.
- Try to keep monsters around the average ATK power for their Level, and if a monster is harder to get out, give it a better effect, or more ATK/DEF! If it's easier to bring out, make it weaker, or more restricted in its uses.
- When you make a whole bunch of cards, it's a good idea to put them in a spoiler, so the page isn't stretched so much and things look much neater.

I think your cards ideas are very good. They're just not very strong monsters, you know? For instance, Chromatic Soldier is a level 5 with only 1600 ATK? Sure, he gets a good boost when he was Summoned by a Tribute of certain monsters, but because the monsters are specific his effect isn't really that tough. I hope this helps you!
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Thanks for the welcome and thanks for the Ideas, I'll edit the article ASAP