Guest JoshIcy Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 2 new cards added... one of them i didnt even bother do check the ocg, and likely wont fix it. and the second is a fairly basic card.... just something to help Machines along again... less of a spare, more of a nessecity..[align=center][/align] ive had imm-004 for a few days now and planned to work on the ocg, but thought...nah im lazy... ooh well enjoy and rate the new batch plz? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 The grammar is off, but a VERY cool effect ^_^ It's like a double edged sword. wow8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 yeah i wasnt sure about the name for the card so i typed up a random name.... boom i got master chaser, and i knew the first card of a pack has to be unique so i made something that cliqued.... sadly the effect is very hard to write so i did the best i could Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 But yeah, its a very well thought out effect, I love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Not good Grammar Bad OCG Nice picture tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 i have a feeling this is gonna be cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 haha thanks cybernetic dragon... and dj hyper critical as always ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Not bad card, OCG is off but the effetc is really nice.And brilliant picture 10/10But the card itself i rate 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 I like both the picture, and the effect!All you need to improve on is the grammar, and it'll look great! Good job! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theallpowerfulme Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 Does this sound about right for the OCG of the effect:"While this card remains face-up on your side of the field, when you pay Life Points to keep a card you control on the field you may also inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half the Life Points you paid." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 new card added. Ancient Gear- Apocalyptic Ryte to clear up anything that isnt said in the new version of the top post:his effect was decided based on the actual character... when i get him recolord he will fit here more, until then enjoy his strange effect..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 9/10 cool pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 *bump* city of impending doom is finished after about a half day of checking ocg errors etc.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(!Death!Reborn!) Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 There's some errors in your new cardsbut great pics though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 ooh... ummm sorry if each card comes like a day each, i work really hard on the cards and plan to have at least 50-100 cards in this set before i move it... enjoy ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 To be quite honest, it's kind of sad that you spent so long checking for errors, and the seventh word is completely wrong grammar-wise... Also kind of funny. One might call it ironic, but I would probably be unable to agree, having never seen your work... If you post the effects to the cards, I can update the OCG and grammar, and then rate them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 To be quite honest' date=' it's kind of sad that you spent so long checking for errors, and the seventh word is completely wrong grammar-wise... Also kind of funny. One might call it ironic, but I would probably be unable to agree, having never seen your work... If you post the effects to the cards, I can update the OCG and grammar, and then rate them.[/quote'] not litteraly... about 30min total maybe... but i waited all day etc for the corrections.... if i were to spend a whole day making 1 card id be insane... actual time i spent working on the card: 20-30 minutestimeframe it took to finish: about 1day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 ooh sorry for the double post... but i think you can after 12hrs... in anycase *Bump* new cards added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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