Dark Angels

[Barian Warlord]

Dark Angel Alimara
Lv 4 / Light / Fairy / Effect
ATK 1900 / DEF 500
This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster. This card can attack twice per turn when the owner of this card has either 6 or 0 cards. When the owner of this card has either 5 or 1 card in there hand and this card attacks an opponent's monster who's defense is lower than this card's attack deal the difference as damage to your opponents life points.

Dark Angel Axe
Lv 3 / Fire / Fairy / Effect
ATK ? / DEF ?
This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster. This cards gains 400 ATK and DEF for every card in its owners hand. Once per turn, the owner of this card can show 1 trap card in their hand to have this card permanently gain 500 ATK. This card is unaffected by the opponent's Trap card effects.

Dark Angel Saber
Lv 2 / Wind / Fairy / Effect
ATK ? / DEF ?
This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster. This cards gains 300 ATK and DEF for every card in its owners hand. Once per turn, the owner of this card can show 1 Spell card in their hand to have this card permanently gain 500 ATK. This card is unaffected by the opponent's Spell card effects.

Dark Angel Spear
Lv 1 / Water / Fairy / Effect
ATK ? / DEF ?
This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster. This cards gains 200 ATK and DEF for every card in its owners hand. Once per turn, the owner of this card can show 1 Monster card in their hand to have this card permanently gain 500 ATK. This card is unaffected by the opponent's Monster card effects.

Dark Angel Calestria
Lv 2 / Water / Fairy / Effect / Tuner
ATK 900 / DEF 1000
This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster. While you have more cards in your hand then your opponent this card gains 1000 ATK. While your opponent has more cards in their hand then you do this card gains 900 DEF.

Dark Angel Kettel
Lv 4 / Dark / Fairy / Effect / Tuner
ATK 1900 / DEF 1000
This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster. This card's level is equal to the number of cards in it's owner's hand

Dark Angel Lilith
Lv 4 / Dark / Fairy / Effect / Tuner
ATK 1700 / DEF 2000
This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster. If the owner of this card has no cards in there hand this card cannot be effected by the effects of your opponents Spell, Trap, or Monster cards. If the owner of this card has 6 cards in there hand this card gains 1000 ATK.

Dark Angel Sakuro
Lv 3 / Wind / Fairy / Effect / Tuner
ATK 1600 / DEF 300
This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster. You can Negate this Cards destruction by sending 1 Card in your Hand to the Graveyard.

Dark Angel Umbriel
Lv 1 / Light / Fairy / Effect / Tuner
ATK 500 / DEF 500
This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster. This card cannot be destroyed by battle.

Dark Angel Dragoon
Lv 4 / Light / Fairy / Effect
ATK 1800 / DEF 1700
This card is also treated as Fiend-Type Monster. Once per turn, while this card is Face Up on the Field deal damage to your Opponent's life points equal to the number of cards in your Hand x 300.

Dark Angel Flair
Lv 3 / Fire / Fairy / Effect
ATK 1500 / DEF 1500
This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster. When this card is summoned if the owner of this card has no cards in there hand double the ATK and DEF of this card.

Dark Angel Ganrisel
Lv 6 / Dark / Fairy / Effect
ATK 2400 / DEF 2300
This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster. When this card is Normal Summoned, Special Summon 1 monster with "Dark Angel" in its name from your deck that is the same Level as the number of cards in your Hand. When this card is Special Summoned, Special Summon 1 monster with "Dark Angel" in its name from your Graveyard that is the same Level as the number of cards in your Hand.

Dark Angel Gekin
Lv 4 / Wind / Fairy / Effect
ATK 1000 / DEF 1000
This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster. This card can attack for every card in its owners hand(this effect cannot be used for more than 1 direct attack.)

Dark Angel Lemek
Lv 4 / Light / Fairy / Effect
ATK ? / DEF ?
This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster. This cards ATK and DEF is equal to the number of cards in its owners hand X 500.

Dark Angel Zero
Lv 4 / Dark / Fairy / Effect
ATK 1900 / DEF 100
This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster. While there are no cards in your Hand your opponent cannot add cards from their Deck to their Hand.



Extra Deck
Dark Angel Aster
Lv 8 / Dark / Fairy / Effect / Synchro
ATK 3000 / DEF 2500
1 Fairy-Type tuner Monster + 1 or more non-tuner monsters
This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster. This card is treated as a Normal Monster.

Dark Angel Chaos
Lv 4 / Light / Fairy / Effect / Synchro
ATK 1900 / DEF 800
1 Fairy-Type tuner Monster + 1 or more non-tuner Monsters
This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster, and also as a Dark Monster. When this Monster is Summoned, Special Summon as many monsters from your Graveyard with "Dark Angel" in their Name as cards in your Hand. This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for the Level of all monsters Special Summoned by this cards effect. Monsters Summoned by this cards effect cannot attack the turn they are Summoned.

Dark Angel Telemet
Lv 6 / Dark / Fairy / Effect / Synchro
ATK 2300 / DEF 2600
1 Fairy-Type Monster + 1 or more non-tuner monsters
This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster. The owner of this card can discard every card in there hand to have this card gain 500 ATK for every card discarded.

Dark Angel Xenmus
Lv 7 / Dark / Fairy / Effect / Synchro
ATK 2700 / DEF 2600
1 Fairy-Type Monster + 1 or more non-tuner monsters
This card is also treated as a Fiend-Type Monster. When a Spell or Trap Card is activated, or the effect of an Effect Monster is activated, the owner of this card can discard a card from their hand and that activation is negated.

[Barian Warlord]

bump

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

First off, I would like to say thank you for posting, but I'm also sorry to inform you that people don't usually read large posts like this in the Written Cards section. If you do make them, though, it's suggested that you put the Monsters in a spoilers, as well as the Spells and Traps in their own spoilers too. Anyways, onto my review of the cards.

Dark Angel Alimara - 6 or 0 cards... in their hand? Seems like it could be overpowered. Especially when used in tandem with Infernities. Also, a tip for Written cards: Say "Inflict piercing damage" instead of "When the ATK of this attacking monster is higher than the DEF...". Almost everyone will know what you're talking about, and it saves you a lot of time and space.

Dark Angel Axe - "Every card in your hand" would be the proper terminology, as it's implied that its effect applies to its owner. Could perhaps be overpowered, but I'm not sure. Also, increases in ATK are implied to be "permanent".

Dark Angel Saber - Pretty much the same as before.

Dark Angel Spear - Much weaker than the others in terms of effect and ATK, so I'm not sure it would really see that much use if it were real.

Dark Angel Calestria - Interesting effect. Rewards you for not overextending your hand, which is always a good thing.

Dark Angel Kettel - Strange. Seems like it might be difficult to use it, seeing as you have to have a specific number of cards in your hand.

Dark Angel Lilith - Seems like it shouldn't be a Tuner, since it's good monster on its own.

Dark Angel Sakuro - Same as above, except this seems like it could be more powerful. Maybe a bit too powerful.

Dark Angel Umbriel - Usually Tuners that can't be destroyed by battle have a downside effect to them, or have to be face-up to use the effect.

Dark Angel Dragoon - Implied it has to be face-up. In my opinion, too strong of an effect for its stats.

Dark Angel Flair - I can see this being used with Infernities, or even a deck of its own for OTKs...

Dark Angel Ganrisel - Seems balanced and like a good card.

Dark Angel Gekin - OCG is strange. Might be better as "This monster can declare a number of attacks during your Battle Phase up to the number of cards in your hand. This card can only declare 1 direct attack each turn."

Dark Angel Lemek - Sort of like a powered up Enraged Muka Muka who's not searchable.

Dark Angel Zero - I see heavy abuse potential, since drawing during the Draw Phase is also "adding cards to your hand".


Extra Deck
Dark Angel Aster - Not much to say here.

Dark Angel Chaos - "a DARK Fiend-Type monster" would make more sense. Too powerful, especially seeing as it's a level 4 mostly-generic.

Dark Angel Telemet - An alright card.

Dark Angel Xenmus - I think you worded it wrong, since as-is this means that it just stops the activation. I would say to negate the card's effect until the End Phase, and only be able to activate it once per turn.

Overall, it's a cool idea, though some of the cards you made have high potential for being overpowered.

[Barian Warlord]

The original plan wa to stop drawing but i can see how that would be bad so I'll probably change it some.

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

All you would have to do is keep putting a card on the field after your hand hit 0 and your opponent would never be able to draw.

[Barian Warlord]

And about Chaos, I've found that its really hard to get a level 4 synchro out so I didn't think it would be so bad.

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

You have two level 1 tuners and a level 2, and you also have additional level 3's and 2's. They're not all that hard to get, considering this. Plus, you could dedicate an entire deck around trying to get out level 4's and others around that level.

[Barian Warlord]

hmm, I can see your point I'll try changing it,I might change it so its the combined level of the summoned cards is the number of cards in your hand and it gains attack by the number summoned.

And Xenmus locks up the opponents Spell and Trap card zones, I looked into that effect and that's how the wording works.

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

Negating the activation of a card's effect doesn't destroy the card, nor negate its effect... I don't think negation can stand on its own without being "...until...." or "...and...". If a card is never activated then it was treated as never having been played.

[Barian Warlord]

moved this here,
http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/231407-dark-angels/