Venom Posted December 7, 2010 Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 [img]http://img574.imageshack.us/img574/1209/230251i.jpg[/img] You must Tribute 3 monsters to Normal Summon this card (you cannot Set this card). The Normal Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Normal Summoned, Spells, Traps, and Effect Monster effects cannot be activated. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Spells, Traps or Effect Monsters. When this card is Special Summoned, it is sent to the Graveyard at the End Phase. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x1000. Once per turn, when your opponent Normal Summons a monster, you can reduce that monster's ATK and DEF by 1000 until the End Phase. If a monster's ATK or DEF become 0 by this effect, it is destroyed. Rate and Comment please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted December 7, 2010 Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 Counters are never equipped, they are [size="5"] on this card[/size] The rest is OK by me. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venom Posted December 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 Oops xD, fix'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted December 7, 2010 Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 Better ! Now it is a 10 ! ! ! (By me, because i'm kind, other members can still not like it but I do ! ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MystirMeme Posted December 7, 2010 Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 why can't it just say that its ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x 1000? Though I love how you nerfed his -2000 effect. I will laugh if they come out with this card and he has this effect. 10/10. EDIT: I suddenly feel the need to make my own Slifer The Sky Dragon. O_O... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted December 7, 2010 Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 Good idea to simplify the effect Dragon Master Zero ! I think -2000 ATK and DEF is too OP, -1000 is okay ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venom Posted December 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 Card edited. Also, I felt the need to do Obelisk and Ra, but it seems they have a legal version already xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Starrk Posted December 7, 2010 Report Share Posted December 7, 2010 Although it is against the rules of Realistic Cards, it should be a divine monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted December 8, 2010 Report Share Posted December 8, 2010 You must Tribute 3 monsters to Normal Summon this card (you cannot Set this card). The Normal Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Normal Summoned, Spells, Traps, and Effect Monster effects cannot be activated. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Spells, Traps or Effect Monsters. If this card is Special Summoned, it is sent to the Graveyard during the End Phase. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x1000. Once per turn,[b] during either player's Main Phase[/b], you may decrease the ATK of an opponent's monster by [b]2[/b]000. If a monster's ATK is reduced to 0 by this effect, it is destroyed, and if this effect is activated, this card cannot declare an attack during your next Battle Phase. OCG fix to fit with Obelisk, with an added bonus of what I think would make the effect better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barian Warlord Posted December 8, 2010 Report Share Posted December 8, 2010 I think its better like this, makes it almost identical to the original card, plus the pic should be done in a difernt style like the Ra and Obolisk that are already out. You must Tribute 3 monsters to Normal Summon this card (you cannot Set this card). The Normal Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Normal Summoned, Spells, Traps, and Effect Monster effects cannot be activated. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Spells, Traps or Effect Monsters. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x1000. When your opponent Special Summons a Monster decrease the ATK or DEF, (whichever position the monster is Summoned in) of an opponent's monster by 2000. If a monster's ATK or DEF is reduced to 0 by this effect, it is destroyed. its like what you did but i made some changes, and of course it should be divine look at the other 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MystirMeme Posted December 8, 2010 Report Share Posted December 8, 2010 [quote name='Trimage' timestamp='1291790509' post='4837492'] I think its better like this, makes it almost identical to the original card, plus the pic should be done in a difernt style like the Ra and Obolisk that are already out. You must Tribute 3 monsters to Normal Summon this card (you cannot Set this card). The Normal Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Normal Summoned, Spells, Traps, and Effect Monster effects cannot be activated. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Spells, Traps or Effect Monsters. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x1000. When your opponent Special Summons a Monster decrease the ATK or DEF, (whichever position the monster is Summoned in) of an opponent's monster by 2000. If a monster's ATK or DEF is reduced to 0 by this effect, it is destroyed. its like what you did but i made some changes, and of course it should be divine look at the other 2. [/quote] I wouldve changed that last effect to "Once per turn, when your opponent Normal Summons a monster, you can reduce that monster's ATK and DEF by 1000. If a monster's ATK or DEF become 0 by this effect, it is destroyed. ya also forgot to add the sent back to graveyard when Special Summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venom Posted December 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2010 Thank you all 4 your rates and comments! , I fix'd the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted December 8, 2010 Report Share Posted December 8, 2010 Nice Venom. I can imagine the legal version being just like this! Nothing that I can say that hasn't already been said So i'll leave you with a well deserved 10/10 (My first 10 given on this site) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venom Posted December 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2010 Thx! Last change to the card: new pic. Enjoy =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jacy Posted December 8, 2010 Report Share Posted December 8, 2010 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krazyxgamer Posted December 9, 2010 Report Share Posted December 9, 2010 you know, there already is going to be a Legal version of Slifer, and it's going to basically have the effect from the show lol... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MystirMeme Posted December 9, 2010 Report Share Posted December 9, 2010 [quote name='krazyxgamer' timestamp='1291856344' post='4838990'] you know, there already is going to be a Legal version of Slifer, and it's going to basically have the effect from the show lol... [/quote] But until it does... Only thing I dont like about the image is that it has Elemental Hero Neos in it. Other than that, nice job man!! PS: for the sake of not invoking the wrath of the gods, You probably should make it a DIVINE Divine-Beast-Type monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venom Posted December 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2010 But that would be against Realistic Card ruling, but since this card is a special one... Ill change his Type to Divine :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MystirMeme Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 [quote name='Venom' timestamp='1291877536' post='4839504'] But that would be against Realistic Card ruling, but since this card is a special one... Ill change his Type to Divine :3 [/quote] Naw man. Obelisk and Ra are both DIVINE Divine-Beast. Better make this guy the same. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Richard Steve Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 You forgot something. God cards have level 10 and not level 12. Even the Playable ones (Obelisk and Ra). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 You must Tribute 3 monsters to Normal Summon this card (you cannot Set this card). The Normal Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Normal Summoned, Spells, Traps, and Effect Monster effects cannot be activated. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Spells, Traps or Effect Monsters. When this card is Special Summoned, it is sent to the Graveyard at the End Phase. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x1000. Once per turn, when your opponent Normal Summons a monster, you can reduce that monster's ATK and DEF by 1000 [b]until the End Phase[/b]. If a monster's ATK or DEF become 0 by this effect, it is destroyed. My suggestion: add the above. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Doransk Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 Excellent. Just excellent. Way to go to legalise Slifer in a manner that doesn't make him incredibly op'd- I love the effect and the trueness to the original card, as well as the fantastic new image you have chosen for him. A well-deserved 10/10 (and that's something you don't often see from me, so well done!). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venom Posted December 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 Thx! I will fix the card as soon as I have time. Card Lore and Level fix'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sebihp2007 Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 I can see a Neos (Yugioh GX final duel? ) Yeah, nice card.. not really sure they're gonna release it with 1000 ATK power per card in hand (adding another win condition to Exodia Decks, lol), but there we go .. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted December 13, 2010 Report Share Posted December 13, 2010 its a nice nerfed Slifer -8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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