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Slifer Legal Version!


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You must Tribute 3 monsters to Normal Summon this card (you cannot Set this card). The Normal Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Normal Summoned, Spells, Traps, and Effect Monster effects cannot be activated. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Spells, Traps or Effect Monsters. When this card is Special Summoned, it is sent to the Graveyard at the End Phase. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x1000. Once per turn, when your opponent Normal Summons a monster, you can reduce that monster's ATK and DEF by 1000 until the End Phase. If a monster's ATK or DEF become 0 by this effect, it is destroyed.

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:( why can't it just say that its ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x 1000? Though I love how you nerfed his -2000 effect. I will laugh if they come out with this card and he has this effect. 10/10.

EDIT: I suddenly feel the need to make my own Slifer The Sky Dragon. O_O...
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You must Tribute 3 monsters to Normal Summon this card (you cannot Set this card). The Normal Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Normal Summoned, Spells, Traps, and Effect Monster effects cannot be activated. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Spells, Traps or Effect Monsters. If this card is Special Summoned, it is sent to the Graveyard during the End Phase. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x1000. Once per turn,[b] during either player's Main Phase[/b], you may decrease the ATK of an opponent's monster by [b]2[/b]000. If a monster's ATK is reduced to 0 by this effect, it is destroyed, and if this effect is activated, this card cannot declare an attack during your next Battle Phase.

OCG fix to fit with Obelisk, with an added bonus of what I think would make the effect better.
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I think its better like this, makes it almost identical to the original card, plus the pic should be done in a difernt style like the Ra and Obolisk that are already out.

You must Tribute 3 monsters to Normal Summon this card (you cannot Set this card). The Normal Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Normal Summoned, Spells, Traps, and Effect Monster effects cannot be activated. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Spells, Traps or Effect Monsters. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x1000. When your opponent Special Summons a Monster decrease the ATK or DEF, (whichever position the monster is Summoned in) of an opponent's monster by 2000. If a monster's ATK or DEF is reduced to 0 by this effect, it is destroyed.


its like what you did but i made some changes, and of course it should be divine look at the other 2.
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[quote name='Trimage' timestamp='1291790509' post='4837492']
I think its better like this, makes it almost identical to the original card, plus the pic should be done in a difernt style like the Ra and Obolisk that are already out.

You must Tribute 3 monsters to Normal Summon this card (you cannot Set this card). The Normal Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Normal Summoned, Spells, Traps, and Effect Monster effects cannot be activated. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Spells, Traps or Effect Monsters. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x1000. When your opponent Special Summons a Monster decrease the ATK or DEF, (whichever position the monster is Summoned in) of an opponent's monster by 2000. If a monster's ATK or DEF is reduced to 0 by this effect, it is destroyed.


its like what you did but i made some changes, and of course it should be divine look at the other 2.
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I wouldve changed that last effect to "Once per turn, when your opponent Normal Summons a monster, you can reduce that monster's ATK and DEF by 1000. If a monster's ATK or DEF become 0 by this effect, it is destroyed.

ya also forgot to add the sent back to graveyard when Special Summoned.
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[quote name='krazyxgamer' timestamp='1291856344' post='4838990']
you know, there already is going to be a Legal version of Slifer, and it's going to basically have the effect from the show lol...
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But until it does... ^_^

Only thing I dont like about the image is that it has Elemental Hero Neos in it. Other than that, nice job man!!

PS: for the sake of not invoking the wrath of the gods, You probably should make it a DIVINE Divine-Beast-Type monster

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You must Tribute 3 monsters to Normal Summon this card (you cannot Set this card). The Normal Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Normal Summoned, Spells, Traps, and Effect Monster effects cannot be activated. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Spells, Traps or Effect Monsters. When this card is Special Summoned, it is sent to the Graveyard at the End Phase. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of cards in your hand x1000. Once per turn, when your opponent Normal Summons a monster, you can reduce that monster's ATK and DEF by 1000 [b]until the End Phase[/b]. If a monster's ATK or DEF become 0 by this effect, it is destroyed.

My suggestion: add the above.
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Excellent. Just excellent. Way to go to legalise Slifer in a manner that doesn't make him incredibly op'd- I love the effect and the trueness to the original card, as well as the fantastic new image you have chosen for him. A well-deserved 10/10 (and that's something you don't often see from me, so well done!).
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