Cthulhu Set Continued

[Organized Chaos]

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Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 cards you control. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon 1 "Thousand Young Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 1000/DEF 1000). This card gains 200 ATK for each "Thousand Young Token" on the field. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 "Thousand Young Token" you control to destroy 2 cards on the field. Each time you activate this effect, place 1 Suffering counter on this card. When this card has 3 Suffering counters on it, you cannot activate Spell cards. When this card is destroyed by battle, you gain 500 Life Points for each "Thousand Young Token" you control. When this card is destroyed by a card effect, draw cards for each Suffering counter on this card.
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bump

come on people ,i didnt post this 4 fun

[youri012]

Seems good to me, but it's a little long effect, 8.5/10 if you can shorten the effect 9/10

[Organized Chaos]

if its long , then how could i shorten it ??