Re-programming [Trap]

[ayy lmao]

Warning, I haven't made cards in a while so my OCG may be a bit rusty.

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[spoiler=Lore]When your opponent attacks you directly, activate this card. If the attacking monster has more than 2500 ATK points then activate the following effect:

- Equip this card to the attacking monster. Whenever that monster attacks, it loses 100 ATK points. After 15 turns of this card been activated, destroy the monster this card is equipped to. Then, put this card at the bottom of your Deck and shuffle your Deck. Then draw a card.

I the attacking monster has less than 2500 ATK points, activate the following effect:

- Swap the attacking monsters DEF points with its ATK points. Whenever the opponent attacks with that monster, the monsters current ATK points are inflicted as damage to your opponents Life Points.[/spoiler]

[War Chess]

The only change i would make is change from equip to continous. Equip traps do not exist.
9.5/10
Creativity beats minor errors.

[ayy lmao]

Yeah, I was kinda hazed on which one to choose. And like I said, haven't made cards for ages so I forgot.

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

[quote name='Unorthodox Simplicity' timestamp='1291926666' post='4840136']
When your opponent attacks you directly, activate this card. Activate the effect corresponding with the attacking monsters ATK: :
- 2500 ATK or higher: Equip this card to the attacking monster. Whenever that monster attacks, it loses 100 ATK points. During the 15th End Phase after this cards activation, destroy the equipped monster. Add this card to your Deck and shuffle your Deck. Then draw 1 card.
- Less than 2500 ATK: Swap the attacking monsters DEF with its ATK. Whenever your opponent attacks with that monster, the monsters current ATK points are inflicted as damage to your opponents Life Points.
[/quote]

Some OCG changes for you. Should make the text a bit more legible.

The first effect is really... ineffective. 'I only lose 2400 life points instead of 2500, yay!' And 15 turns is a looooooooooooooong time to wait.

[ayy lmao]

I chose 15 turns because no doubt the enemy would't attack and it has nothing to do with life points. I may change it to 6 turns and 'If your opponent doesn't attack on a turn your opponent loses 200 life points and the monsters ATK points is reduced by 100 points.' and also 'Whenever that monster attacks, it loses 100 ATK points and your opponent loses 100 Life Points'.

I should of kept making cards if I knew it would turn out not as good as before. Anyway, thanks for constructive criticism, it helps the flow.