Chillaccino's Excess Support [13]

[.Nu-13]

[center]When I saw the thread about Excess Community Tournament, I immediately made some stuff I'll be updating each day

[spoiler=Techo-Seal Buster]
[img]http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/2299/161805y.jpg[/img]
[i]Whend this card is Excess Summoned succesfully, you can remove from play 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard to add 1 Machine-Type monster from your Deck to your hand. Once per turn, you can send 1 monster Overlaid on this card to the Graveyard to return 3 Machine-Type monsters from your Graveyard to your Deck and draw 2 cards.[/i]
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[spoiler=Synthetic Nerve Virus]
[img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/804/161805.jpg[/img]
[i]During your End Phase, you can send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Synthetic Nerve Virus" from your Deck. If this card is Overlaid on an Excess Monster, that monster is treated as a DARK monster. As long as this card is Overlaid on an Excess Monster, all DARK monstre you control gain 600 ATK.[/i]
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[spoiler=Aurora Scramble]
[img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/804/161805.jpg[/img]
[i]Select 1 face-up Excess Monster you control. Send all monsters Overlaid on it to the Graveyard, and gain 1000 Life Points for each card sent.[/i]
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[spoiler=Undersea Baby Dragoon]
[img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/637/161805l.jpg[/img]
[i]When this card is Excess Summoned succesfully, you can select up to 2 Dragon-Type monsters in your Graveyard and Overlay them on this card. If this card is selected as an attack target, you can return 1 of monsters Overlaid on this card to your Deck to negate the attack and end the Battle Phase.[/i]
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[spoiler=Croc Ultima]
[img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/6710/161805o.jpg[/img]
[i]If this card would be Excess Summoned, the Tributes must be Reptile-Type. Neither player can Special Summon. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Reptile-Type monster from your Graveyard to return 1 card from the field to its owner's hand. If this card you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "Swarm Croc" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard.[/i]
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[spoiler=Swarm Croc]
[img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/804/161805.jpg[/img]
[i]Once per turn, you can discard 1 card and select 1 Reptile-Type monster in either player's Graveyard or that is removed from play and Special Summon it to your side of the field. It cannot declare an attack. If this card you control is sent to the Graveyard, you can add 1 Reptile-Type Excess Monster from your Deck to your hand.[/i]
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[spoiler=Blessing of Aurora]
[img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/6895/161805q.jpg[/img]
[i]Send 1 monster from your hand to the Graveyard. Special Summon 2 "Aurora Tokens". (Fairy-Type/LIGHT/ATK 0/DEF 0) The Level of "Aurora Token" is equal to the Level of sent monster. "Aurora Token" cannot be Tributed, except for an Excess Summon, or be used as a Synchro Material Monster. If "Aurora Token" is Tributed for an Excess Summon, it is Overlaid on that monster.[/i]
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[spoiler=Endymion Overlord]
[img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/804/161805.jpg[/img]
[i]If this card would be Excess Summoned, the Tributes must be Spellcaster-Type. When this card is Excess Summoned succesfully, you can add 1 Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. You cannot use it this turn. You can send 1 monster you control and 1 from your hand to the Graveyard to remove from play 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard. Once, while this card is face-up on the field, you can activate the effect of removed card as this card's effect. (You cannot remove another card if effect of other one still applies.)[/i]
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[spoiler=Dark Ritual of Evolution]
[img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/7214/161805f.jpg[/img]
[i]Add 1 Excess monster from your Deck to your hand. If you play it this turn, it cannot declare an attack this turn. If this face-down card you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can draw 1 card.[/i]
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[spoiler=Chain Frog]
[img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/804/161805.jpg[/img]
[i]If this card would be Excess Summoned, the Tributes must be "Frog" monsters. This card is treated as Level 2 monster while face-up on the field. Once per turn, you can select 1 "Frog" monster in your Graveyard and equip it to this card. This card gains 1000 ATK for each monster equipped with this effect. You can send this card to the Graveyard to draw cards equal to the number of equipped monsters.[/i]
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[spoiler=Sanctuary of Insanity]
[img]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/804/161805.jpg[/img]
[i]All Fiend-Type monsters gain 500 ATK. Once per turn, you can select 1 Fiend-Type monster in your hand or Graveyard and Overlay it on a Fiend-Type Excess Monster you control. If this card would be destroyed, you can send 1 monster Overlaid on a Fiend-Type Excess Monster you control instead.[/i]
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[spoiler=Technology Portal]
[img]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/1613/161805g.jpg[/img]
[i]When this card is activated, send 1 Machine-Type monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. Each time a Machine-Type Excess Monster is Excess Summoned, you can draw 1 card. Once per turn, you can select 1 monster Overlaid on a Machine-Type monster you control, and Special Summon it in face-up Defense Position. It cannot activate its effect this turn.[/i]
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[spoiler=Crystal Beast Agate Scorpion]
[img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/804/161805.jpg[/img]
[i]Once per turn, you can select 1 "Crstal Beast" monster in your Graveyard and place it face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card. If any of monsters Overlaid on this card are "Crystal Beast" monsters, this card gains the effects of thos cards. If this card is destroyed while it is in a Monster Card Zone, you can place it face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card, instead of sending it to the Graveyard. You can send this card from your Spell & Trap Card Zone to the Graveyard to add 1 "Crystal Beast" monster from your Deck to your hand.[/i]

[color="#FF0000"][b]Note: Forgot to add the Excess part[/b][/color]
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[spoiler=Excessive Drill]
[img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/7214/161805f.jpg[/img]
[i]Select 1 face-up Excess Monster you control. Appply 1 of the following effects, depending on the number of monsters Overlaid on that monster:
•1+: During this turn, During battle between the selected attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Damage to your opponent.
•2+: The selected monster gains 1000 ATK, until the End Phase
•3+: If the selected monster inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent this turn, draw 1 card.[/i]
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[Anbu-of-Sand]

A bit lazy, so I'll review the one with the shortest effect first.

[color=blue][b]Aurora Scramble[/b][/color]

[b]OCG / Common Sense:[/b]
OCG is flawless. No errors whatsoever.

[b]Effect / Usefulness:[/b]
The card is quite simple, letting you send all Overlaid Monsters on an Excess Monster you control to the Graveyard, giving you a sweet 1000 per card sent. Making it a Quick-Play makes it much better, and most likely is a staple in all Excess Decks for protection against FTK's / OTK's at the last minute.

[b]Originality / Balance:[/b]
HOWEVER, this card has the potential to be ridiculously overpowered. Saying you have a Level 8 Excess Monster you want to get out. Use 4 Level 2 monsters, and that monster now has 4 Overlaid Monsters on it. Use this, that's a +4000 Life Point gain for you. Quite the problem there, no? I'd remove the Quick-Play as a whole, or at the least put a limit on how much Life Points you can gain through this, most likely at 2000. Originality is meh. It's your average Life Point gainer, with the added addition of Excess Monsters.

[b]Ratings:[/b]
OCG / Common Sense: 2/2
Effect / Usefulness: 3/4
Originality / Balance: 2/4
[b]Overall: 7/10[/b]

[.Nu-13]

Thanks

But think, would you really give up protection for Life Points?

[Pepperyena]

Uh, I don't think Aurora Scramble's OCG is flawless. If it is, let me know.

What do you mean by "Send" them? Send them WHERE?

[.Nu-13]

Damn, I knew that it looks weird. Changed

[Pepperyena]

Okay, good. Otherwise all 3 of them are great, and I'm sorta excited for excess monsters. I think they'll have a black background or something.

[.Nu-13]

Wikia lists them as brown. Maybe it'll be their color? And can you go a bit in-depth in rates? Thanks in advance

[Anbu-of-Sand]

[color=blue][b]Techno-Seal Buster[/b][/color]

[b]OCG / Common Sense:[/b]
OCG is flawless. No errors whatsoever.

[b]Effect / Usefulness:[/b]
Excess Summon this (successfully), and with the simple cost of removing a Spell in your Graveyard from play, gets you a free Machine from your Deck to your hand. Simple, but I like it so far. Second effect is more Graveyard based, seeing at the cost of an Overlaid Monster, you can recycle 3 Machines back to your Deck and then draw 2 cards. You see, the useful part about this is, if you only have say, 2 Machines in your Graveyard, if the Overlaid Monster you sent was a Machine, well, you see my point

[b]Originality / Balance:[/b]
Eh, not the most original though. It's sort of a mini Pot of Avarice, along with your basic searching monster. Balance in my opinion, is very questionable. Although being Level 8, this gives you the opportunity to use this effect up to 4 times if you can Excess Summon this with 4 monsters, along with it being a target for Trade-In. But for a Level 8 and possibly a 'Boss' in some Decks, the stats aren't cutting it. Boost them up a tad bit perhaps? Otherwise, it's decent to me.

[b]Ratings:[/b]
OCG / Common Sense: 2/2
Effect / Usefulness: 3.4/4
Originality / Balance: 2.8/4
[b]Overall: 8.2/10[/b]

[color=blue][b]Synthetic Nerve Virus[/b][/color]

[b]OCG / Common Sense:[/b]
monstre = monster

[b]Effect / Usefulness:[/b]
The card for it's first effect, can swarm out more of itself (icwutudidthar) from the Deck at the cost of a sending a card from your hand to the Graveyard, however, you may only use this during the End Phase. The card also when Overlaid, treats the Excess Monster it's Overlaid onto as a DARK monster. Now this has it's ups and downs. Seeing there are DARK Support, and Anti-DARK Support. And as a final bonus, as long as this is Overlaid onto an Excess, all DARK monsters gain 600 ATK, which would make the Excess it's on 600 ATK stronger. Very, very useful for Excess DARK Decks and a few other Decks as well.

[b]Originality / Balance:[/b]
It's not the most original, but I like what you did with making the concept / effect of the card work well with the image / picture. Balance here is questionable for such a little monster, virus to be exact. I say this because a 600 ATK boost, and being able to spread more of this virus out onto the field can be a major threat to your opponent, even if it does happen in the End Phase. Using just 2 of these for a Level 4 Excess Summon makes the Excess Monster 1200 ATK stronger, along with any other DARK's you control. So I'd think of a bit re-tweaking on the cost and whatnot for a bit.

[b]Ratings:[/b]
OCG / Common Sense: 1.9/2
Effect / Usefulness: 3/4
Originality / Balance: 2.8/4
[b]Overall: 7.7/10[/b]

[Buttercup]

TSB: Ultimate Offering Gadgets seems like the only use. Even then, Fortress exists. Make it Machina, or something.
SNV: situational badness
AS: situational badness that minuses you








2/10 badness until Konami makes a Preparation of Rites for excess

[.Nu-13]

@ Anbu - thanks
@ Warjack - well, critique is critique...

[War Chess]

I loved them !
The effects are pretty balanced for their levels and, considering they are excess, they are awesome !
This excess spirit is catching upon us !
10/10
Also, nice atworks, specially the first !
A +REP 4 U !

[.Nu-13]

Thanks

Added 1 new card, will add remaining ones later

[War Chess]

[quote name='Chillaccino' timestamp='1292852193' post='4867289']
Thanks

Added 1 new card, will add remaining ones later
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I like the new one too. For its cost the effect is great.
Like an excess marshmallow but only when your opponent attacks it !
10/10

[Parting Shot]

Ignore Anbu's comments on OCG, they are incorrect.

The first and fourth monsters, like the spell used to be, are missing the where of the "send" and "return" effects, respectively. The second monster is missing an "a" between "as" and "DARK".

Meh support is meh.

[.Nu-13]

Whoa, lots of random typos

I'll fix them now...

[Buttercup]

chill, you're trolling so much that it's not even funny

what is dragon set filler even supposed to be played in

if the next card isn't at least average you're getting a neg

[.Nu-13]

Ok. I'm starting to be afraid

[Buttercup]

YOU SHOULD BE

I think I will try my awesome skillz at these excess chappies to either show you how it's done or fail miserably and get reps from war chess and co

[.Nu-13]

Added 3 new cards
*gulp*
I hope that they're good...

[-Lightray Daedalus-]

[s]I cant see the pic from the Reptile Excess guy...>_<[/s]
I can now

Anyway till that monster all the effects were pretty boring and not worth the trouble to Excess Summoning...however Swarm Croc returned my interest..

Just a little thing.

Make it WATER so it can fit the WATER Reptile theme..

then

OCG fix: select 1 Reptile-Type monster in either player's Graveyard or that is removed from play and Special Summon it.

[Buttercup]

CU: I can't see its stats, so there's little point in a rate.
SC: Worm support is ok, I guess. Too much text and no sangan-like trigger for its last effect makes me a sad panda tho.
BoA: SalvoDAD / Karakuri /LOLMORPHTRONICS support is nice.

[.Nu-13]

[quote name='Ser Warjacksworth' timestamp='1292881056' post='4868530']
CU: I can't see its stats, so there's little point in a rate.
SC: Worm support is ok, I guess. Too much text and no sangan-like trigger for its last effect makes me a sad panda tho.
BoA: SalvoDAD / Karakuri /LOLMORPHTRONICS support is nice.
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*phew*

I'll fix CU
Ok, I'll make SC Sangan-like
Why Morphs?

Added 2 new cards

[Buttercup]

morphs run valleys, I think?

EO: GK support, broke.

DRE: Magical Hats Excess yes

[.Nu-13]

How to balance EO?

[Buttercup]

I have just realised that Spy will be semied.

Hail the almighty prophet and give him all your points. :imperious:

You can't balance it, Spy is going to be broke with any generic Lv8.

WOW WHAT COOL CARDS THESE ARE MF COUGH

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/233265-excess/