rentaworrio Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 :lol: these r mi drags :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 Bad OCG, bad grammar, bad picture, overpowered. Better Luck next time ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 Good try but look at other cards and how to write effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 There's a LOT wrong with it, that's all I'm gonna say.Go study OCG and make a new one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rentaworrio Posted January 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 ok wats OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuh Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 Official Card Grammar XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 Just work on your grammar, and your card will be perfect! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 it's um.... ok but improve, ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 This card aint to great thats all i can say.Bad OCG, grammar, picture, name...Better luck next time.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rentaworrio Posted January 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 twas my first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 0/10I know it's your first, sry =/Ifyou ever want help however, feel free to pm me ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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