Delayed Damage Card

[Reinforce]

This is my first attempt at a realistic card.

[img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/9494/328990.jpg[/img]

Lore
You can only activate this card during the damage step when you are about to take battle damage. Halve that damage and, when this card is destroyed, you take damage equal to the amount of damage negated. This card is destroyed during your second standby phase after activation.

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[The Sleeping Dude]

OCG fix:
You can only activate this card during the Damage Step, when you are about to take Battle Damage. Halve the Battle Damage you are about to take. When this card is destroyed, you take damage equal to the amount of damage negated. This card is destroyed during your second Standby Phase after activation.

ok the effect is good but not orginal. anyways ocg is bad but not very bad that i can't understand it. this part is the part i don't understand "[b]you take damage equal to the amount of damage negated[/b]" whats with this effect? i can't fix its ocg becuase i can't understand why is there negated there.

8/10 with newby bonus
EDIT:
Suggested Effect:
Activate only during Damage Calculation. Halve all the Battle Damage you take. When this card is destroyed, take damage equal to the ATK of monster your opponent controls. This card is destroyed during your second Standby Phase after activation.

[Jcmoney]

[quote name='ks2ill34' timestamp='1293006724' post='4873117']
You can only activate this card during the damage step when you are about to take battle damage. Halve that damage and, when this card is destroyed, you take damage equal to the amount of damage negated. This card is destroyed during your second standby phase after activation.
OCG fix:
You can only activate this card during the Damage Step, when you are about to take Battle Damage. Halve that damage. When this card is destroyed, you take damage equal to the amount of damage negated. This card is destroyed during your second Standby Phase after activation.

ok the effect is good but not orginal. anyways ocg is bad but not very bad that i can't understand it. this part is the part i don't understand "[b]you take damage equal to the amount of damage negated[/b]" whats with this effect? i can't fix its ocg becuase i can't understand why is there negated there.

8/10 with newby bonus
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I am an expert at producing and reading bad OCG *looks at OCG*
So basically that card halves the battle damage, then when that card is destroyed the other half is inflicted onto you. Sorta like premature burial but with damage not monsters.

[The Sleeping Dude]

then it should be
You can only activate this card during the Damage Step, when you are about to take Battle Damage. Halve that damage. When this card is destroyed, you take damage equal to the amount of damage you halved this way. This card is destroyed during your second Standby Phase after activation.

lol its not a great card whats the point halving the damage if it will be backfired to you oh and my suggested effect is more understandable

[Reinforce]

Here is my revised card with your OCG fixing.

[img]http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/9053/328990c.jpg[/img]

Lore
You can only activate this card during the Damage Step, when you are about to take Battle Damage. Halve that damage. When this card is destroyed, you take damage equal to the amount of damage you halved this way. This card is destroyed during your second Standby Phase after activation.

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You can also combo this card with cards like giant trunade that return it to your hand to avoid the effect damage or add it to a removed from play deck to stop the effect damage from taking place.

[TheComposer]

It can be used per say, you could end the game next turn with a combo, but you can stop your opponent from destroying you long enough to set it up and win. Situational, so it's not that playable, but can be useful in stalling. 7.5/10

[The Sleeping Dude]

actually the combo i thought about this card is this card and barrel behind the door
since it will take your opponent two turns to get this card destroyed and by that time the sum of the first half and second half then barrel equals a small percent of immediate OTK.

[Neither]

It could be useable in Burn and Stall. The Lore needs work though, but the effect looks nice.