kyokorebit Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 [center][img]http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m313/kyokorebit/teufel.jpg[/img] [img]http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m313/kyokorebit/teufel2.jpg[/img] [img]http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m313/kyokorebit/boss.jpg[/img][/center] You may think Great Teufel is a bit random, but no, he forces Flip Summon. [color="#8B0000"][b] Update (28/12/2010)[/b][/color] [center][img]http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m313/kyokorebit/gaufre.jpg[/img] [img]http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m313/kyokorebit/sentry2.jpg[/img] [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Great Milenko Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 From what I saw, you've got a pretty nice archetype going on here. Please make more. I give them 9/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Organized Chaos Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 wow these are nice cards, especially from a level 1 member, well done. love the pics, effects,templates,concept and boss monster. you have to show me how to do those templates 10/10 + 1 rep well done indeed I think face-down cards is the proper ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ayy lmao Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 You know, when you use other people's images of [i]this[/i] site you should give credit to them. OCG is fine, not much creativity. Balanced. 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 [quote name='Unorthodox Simplicity' timestamp='1293124167' post='4876967'] You know, when you use other people's images of [i]this[/i] site you should give credit to them. [/quote] Credit is not required. He doesn't have to. Very good, very good. Guardian is Royal Decree +1. You can get card 3 out first turn to lock opponent's summoning, then activate Anti-Spell Fragrance during their turn, then summon card 2 and your opponent is now in full lockdown. They cant Summon, use Traps or Spells. I like it >> Also could you PM me the template for your cards :3? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 Archetype / Card Review(s) underway. But before I edit this with one, I love the Template. It looks exactly like a real card. +Rep for that.[color=blue][b]Gemini Teufal[/b][/color] [b]OCG / Common Sense:[/b] OCG seems flawless, but doesn't sound right. Mainly where it says 'looks'. [b]Effect / Usefulness:[/b] The effect is quite simple, sending this from the hand to the Graveyard lets you select and then reveal 2 cards on your opponent's side of the field. Now this has it's ups an downs, for this means effects can be activated at this time. For example, if you select / end up flipping Ryko, Lightsworn Hunter, your opponent would be able to use it's effect for milling 3 and popping 1. So perhaps add a bit saying flip effects do not activate during this time? Usefulness is pretty good, seeing it is a Level 2 Tuner as well, making it searchable through various things. [b]Originality / Balance:[/b] It's not the most original effect, but it's something that I believe Konami hasn't made a card out of yet. The card in my opinion, although is just a Tuner, for some odd reason, just seems underpowered to me. Just because of that tiny risk of giving your opponent's possible +1's. [b]Ratings:[/b] OCG / Common Sense: 1.8/2 Effect / Usefulness: 3/4 Originality / Balance: 3/4 [b]Overall: 7.8/10[/b][color=blue][b]Guardian Teufal[/b][/color] [b]OCG / Common Sense:[/b] OCG is flawless. No errors whatsoever. [b]Effect / Usefulness:[/b] The card has a mini lockdown strategy built inside it's effect, letting you stop your opponent from activating Set cards, except by another card effect. Even though you can only use this once per turn, this could gradually shut down most of your opponent's Set cards, making them lack space to play more certain cards, and seeing this is an 1800 beater, this makes it quite useful, along with quite the threat as well. [b]Originality / Balance:[/b] A bit more original then the above card to be honest, but balance in my opinion once again, is questionable. The card in my opinion, is balanced, but has some unneeded parts. For example, I don't think the part of giving your opponent a chance to activate one of their locked Set cards through a card effect, but then again, this makes them waste cards that they would normally use against you, against them. [b]Ratings:[/b] OCG / Common Sense: 2/2 Effect / Usefulness: 3/4 Originality / Balance: 3/4 [b]Overall: 8/10[/b][color=blue][b]Great Teufel[/b][/color] [b]OCG / Common Sense:[/b] OCG is flawless. No errors whatsoever. [b]Effect / Usefulness:[/b] I'm assuming this is the boss. The boss cannot be Special Summoned, but allows you to Tribute Summon it with only 1 Teufel as a Tribute. And like you said, shutting down the ability to Normal or Special Summon completely, leads only Flip Summon and the upcoming Excess Summon left, but this will benefit you much more, for this makes your opponent force Set their monsters, leading them in your hands. Making it a decent beater is pretty nice as well. [b]Originality / Balance:[/b] To be honest, the Gemini one was more original. For a boss, assuming it is a boss, the reviewer is hoping most of the time for a card that completely 'wows' them, and this on the other hand, seems to be your average Lockdown sort of card. The card is of course balanced, for you get hit by it's Lockdown effect as well, which means you'll have to Set up your field wisely before getting this out. [b]Ratings:[/b] OCG / Common Sense: 2/2 Effect / Usefulness: 3.6/4 Originality / Balance: 2/4 [b]Overall: 7.6/10[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ayy lmao Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 [quote name='♥Łövëły Ċ.Ċ♥' timestamp='1293127073' post='4877088'] Credit is not required. He doesn't have to. [/quote] I was living in the past, I re-read the Realistic Card Rules about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyokorebit Posted December 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2010 Thanks you guys for the replies, especially Anbu-of-Sand for the awesome review! Instant +rep. The review help me understand a bit more in card design. Also 2 new cards added. I have changed the template to make it looks less bright (as a guy from another thread suggested). Hope you guys like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Richard Steve Posted December 28, 2010 Report Share Posted December 28, 2010 I like the idea. Pics are just awesome even if they are not the first being used here. Give you a 9.5/10. And hey, huh, I gave you another rep and a 5 stars post, would you PM me with your template? I just love it!!! As of the OCG, I'm an analyser for the new STOR Set, but I am so obsessed with the template [finally something that looks like "realistic"], that I just don't care about some [or none] errors. Cheers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyokorebit Posted March 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 Shameless self-bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 Yo Anbu-of-Sand !!! Great Teufel Effect / Usefulness: I'm assuming this is the boss. The boss cannot be Special Summoned, but allows you to Tribute Summon it with only 1 Teufel as a Tribute. And like you said, shutting down the ability to Normal or Special Summon completely, leads only Flip Summon and the upcoming Excess Summon left, but this will benefit you much more, for this makes your opponent force Set their monsters, leading them in your hands. Making it a decent beater is pretty nice as well. [B]shutting down the ability to Normal or Special Summon completely, leads only Flip Summon and the upcoming Excess Summon left[/B] [B]you for got to say sychro and fusion and ritual[/B] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkben Posted March 14, 2011 Report Share Posted March 14, 2011 Syncrho, fusion and ritual are all special summons, as is the exceed summon I believe very nice archetype going on there, very nice art too one question, on one of the cards it says the face down card cannot be flipped face up except for a card effect, so what happens when you attack it? also more cards with flip effects would be good, especially when using great teufel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyokorebit Posted March 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2011 [quote=darkben]Syncrho, fusion and ritual are all special summons, as is the exceed summon I believe very nice archetype going on there, very nice art too one question, on one of the cards it says the face down card cannot be flipped face up except for a card effect, so what happens when you attack it? also more cards with flip effects would be good, especially when using great teufel [/quote] I think the monster will get destroyed without flipping face-up like Six Sam - Irou lol =) I have many ideas for this archetype, but it seems like Hp Doom discontinued to make this style of artworks so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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