--------------- Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 *Bangs fist on table ; begins chanting* CHAPTER TWO! CHAPTER TWO! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted January 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 I'm working on it. The title is: *Obligatory and useless drumroll* Chapter 2 - Hell, Someone Actually Runs Raviel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 [quote name='=Evangelion=' timestamp='1294144812' post='4910962'] I'm working on it. The title is: *Obligatory and useless drumroll* Chapter 2 - Hell, Someone Actually Runs Raviel [/quote] o so now ur goin 2 beat teh sacred beestz ur just makign a maree stoo bcas teh sacred beests r 2 powrful 4 n ordinery pursun 2 beet n ur doin it bcas of sum stuf im makign up abt ur secks lief kthxbai Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted January 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2011 yea raviels so cool it has 4000 atk can beat blueees Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted January 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 bumpad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astro Dude Posted January 7, 2011 Report Share Posted January 7, 2011 So far so good. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted January 8, 2011 Report Share Posted January 8, 2011 Read the first chapter, and I really like the fan fic. You needz a second main character though that runs Chaos, just for me ;) And estimation when Chapter 2's coming out? I found Chapter 1 slightly short, so I really, really want some more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninjarainbowcloud6! Posted January 8, 2011 Report Share Posted January 8, 2011 this is great can't wait for chapter 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brinolovania Posted January 8, 2011 Report Share Posted January 8, 2011 [quote name='=Evangelion=' timestamp='1293884820' post='4902790'] Probably soon, but not until the 8th unless my mom goes out of the house to shopping (you know what I mean). [/quote] I desperately hope this will happen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lewk Posted January 8, 2011 Report Share Posted January 8, 2011 [b]YOU WILL MAKE A CHAPTER TWO AND POST IT TODAY, FOR YOU SIR ARE A GOD.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A1v1n1 Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 WHERE TEH 2ND CHAPTERRRRRRRR TT________TT U LATEEEEEEEEE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 [quote name='StraightEdge07' timestamp='1294074337' post='4909003'] Nice fan fic, i like how you're including new cards [/quote] Don't all those cards exist...? Anyways, as not to spam, I can't wait until chapter 2, this was a really cool story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkest Hour Posted January 12, 2011 Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 “Ah,” I grinned. “You’re so dead." You have entertained me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted January 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 Thanks. The 2nd Chapter is added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lewk Posted January 16, 2011 Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 [quote name='=Evangelion=' timestamp='1293599773' post='4891915'] I looked at the rest of my hand. It sucked. It sucked so much there was nothing more I can do for the turn, and – HEY I HAVE 3 EQUIPS IN MY HAND LOLOLOLOL [/quote] Sig'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brinolovania Posted January 16, 2011 Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 ...Most pro chapter ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted January 16, 2011 Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 no but raviel is a god so u cant control it AWSUM CHAPTER Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkest Hour Posted January 16, 2011 Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 It seems I have angered Evangelion. > Not sure If serious Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brinolovania Posted January 16, 2011 Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 Wait...you made a mistake, Evan! The anime guy should have attacked Tomato with Chaos King, and attacked for game with RAVIEL TEH AWESOME!!!11!!!1!!!one!!1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyber force cosmic Posted January 16, 2011 Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 interesting idea, but where exactly is the plot heading to? Currently I cant really tell what is going on. Also, i don't suppose you could take a look at my fan fi, I sort of need some feed back for it, as I have mainly been putting it on fan fi web and I currently have yet to gain advice from others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supreme Gamesmaster Posted January 16, 2011 Report Share Posted January 16, 2011 YES I'm seriously considering recommending this to TVTropes. Put it on ff.net or something. I love it. If I may suggest something -- try and give it a fairly serious plot in addition to making it a parody. If we can still love the characters and root for them mid-adventure like now, this could become an Internet [i]classic[/i]. Whatever you do, don't drop this -- I LOVE IT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='cyber force cosmic' timestamp='1295207887' post='4938926'] interesting idea, but where exactly is the plot heading to? Currently I cant really tell what is going on. [/quote] [quote name='Supreme Gamesmaster' timestamp='1295214577' post='4939201'] If I may suggest something -- try and give it a fairly serious plot in addition to making it a parody. If we can still love the characters and root for them mid-adventure like now, this could become an Internet [i]classic[/i]. Whatever you do, don't drop this -- I LOVE IT. [/quote] I think it's most definately heading towards a plot that I think makes more sense than [s]GX[/s] most things around here. [quote name='cyber force cosmic' timestamp='1295207887' post='4938926'] Also, i don't suppose you could take a look at my fan fi, I sort of need some feed back for it, as I have mainly been putting it on fan fi web and I currently have yet to gain advice from others. [/quote] Send me the url, I'm the laziest guy ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyber force cosmic Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='=Evangelion=' timestamp='1295257395' post='4940376'] Send me the url, I'm the laziest guy ever. [/quote] heres the link to the one posted on fan-fi. I recently added chapter 4, i do recall that chpt 1 on fan fi is slightly different to the one on here, but its not too different. Ihave already got 1 reply on the first chapter here but i would need some others in order to point this fan fi in the right direction. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='cyber force cosmic' timestamp='1295257800' post='4940384'] heres the link to the one posted on fan-fi. I recently added chapter 4, i do recall that chpt 1 on fan fi is slightly different to the one on here, but its not too different. Ihave already got 1 reply on the first chapter here but i would need some others in order to point this fan fi in the right direction. [/quote] i cant c Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyber force cosmic Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='=Evangelion=' timestamp='1295267687' post='4940460'] i cant c [/quote] WOOPS, forgot the link. I think. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6610914/1/Legend_Of_The_Banishers here is the link to it. Sorry about that, just put it up this morning and was in a bit of a rush. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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