nobody9999 Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 Our story begins when young Duelist Nick runs to his home to tell of some big news. Nick: Mom! Dad! Mom & Dad: What is it? Nick: There's a Duel Monsters Tournament today! I wanna enter! Mom: Fine, but be home by 6. Nick: Thanks! So Nick ran to the Tournament Site.And soon enough, he ran into an old friend. Nick: James? James: Nick? Nick: You're here, too! James: Yep, the prelims are starting. Announcer: Ladies and Gentlemen, please make your way to one of the 10 doors to start our test! The two friends went into a door, and met their challenger. Lyn: Hi, my name is Lyn. I'm your opponet. Nick: Okay, Let's go! [Duel] Nick: I start! I'll summon, "Fatty Cat"!ATK/ 1500 DEF/ 1300and one card face-down. Lyn: My turn!(Well, If I Attack, that face-down could be a trap)Hmph! I summon, "Katana Woman"!ATK/ 1500 DEF/ 1600and I play this card, "Katana Squadron"Which lets me Summon a new monster! Nick: (Heh, you try that. My Trap will stop it) Lyn: Now go, "Katana Striker"!ATK/ 1800 DEF/ 300And I end my turn. Nick:Now I play the Field Spell, "Fatty Cat Kitchen"Which boosts my Fatty Cat's Attack Points by 200! Lyn: So, what are you planning? Nick: Fusion.I play "Polymerization" to fuse Fatty Cat and T.J, to form.. Lyn: ? Nick: "Dash Cat"!ATK/ 2000 DEF/ 1800And when m "Dash Cat" is Summoned, I can Inflict 2000 Points of Direct Dmage! Lyn: What..?Aghhh! Meanwhile, James was also Dueling. James: Now then, " Rage Swordsman", finish him!That was so easy. Stevie: But, how did I lose? James: Sigh. You lost because you forgot to switch your "Gear Golem the Moving Fortress" to Defense mode. Stevie: Oh, well, you win I guess. Here's your Bronze Pass. James: I wonder how Nick is doing. Episode two:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=24956 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 yet you say mines short and stuff :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nobody9999 Posted January 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 but it was short. What do you think of it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 id say a little on the 3/10 dont you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 It's kinda short. Don't you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nobody9999 Posted January 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 Gee, great.I try to make a good fanfic and people are negative about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 lets go back at what you said about mines :( Know I feel sad... 4/10 for being short. :( :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nobody9999 Posted January 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 It's really not that short. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 ill help you out a little make the duel a little bit longer like people talking or dueling like 15 times then you can do the thingy that says next episode:fusion clash Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nobody9999 Posted January 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 I made it a Little Longer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 yay 3.1/10 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nobody9999 Posted January 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 :( Great. That's why I have the different episodes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted January 29, 2008 Report Share Posted January 29, 2008 i was talking about the first episode i havent see'n the second Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingdom hearts man95 Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm you cant use poly and field spells in your opponents turn.sorry but cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex Kemper Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 I couldn't really follow what was going on in the duel. The one guy went second and yet he did not attack the other guys monster? Sorry dude, and the length for it was less than impressive. Could've had a few more paragraphs. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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