Heavens Guardian Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 <P>[img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/6116/330701o.jpg[/img]<BR><BR><BR><BR><BR><BR><BR><BR><BR><BR>This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 DARK monsters in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 card you control to take control of 1 monster your opponent controls until the End Phase. <BR><BR><BR></P> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squidward Tentacles Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 umm... shouldn't it be a dark attribute?but other than that, it's pretty good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted January 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 Good point i was making a other card and messed up let me fix it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YGOTASrules Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 Cool card, but i think there was a typo. specail:special Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 Big OCG fix needed: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 DARK monsters in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 card you control to take control of 1 monster your opponent controls until the End Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted January 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 Thanx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~>Grovyle<~ Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 specail=special end Phase=End Phase oppetents=opponent's controled=controlled orginal=original controler=controller quite a few typo's there. and there is also a few un-needed capitals there other than that, overall, good card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted January 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 thanx i alreadygot it fix just not lettng me edit the CaRd11 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~{Rochster}~ Posted January 2, 2011 Report Share Posted January 2, 2011 Another OCG fix (with a rating at th end!!!): This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card [b]cannot[/b] be Spec[b]ia[/b]l Summoned [b]except[/b] by [b]r[/b]emoving [b]f[/b]rom [b]p[/b]lay 3 [b]DARK[/b] monsters in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can [b]r[/b]emove 1 card [b]f[/b]rom play to take control of 1 of your oppetent[b]'[/b]s monster. That monster [b]c[/b]annot attack [b]your[/b] opponent directly. At the [b]E[/b]nd Phase [b]of the turn you activated this effect,[/b] return the [s]controlled[/s] monster to its [b]owner[/b]. The way it is: Many OCG mistakes and it's still FIRE, so this deserves a 3/10. With OCG fixes: A lot better. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azphreal Posted January 3, 2011 Report Share Posted January 3, 2011 Rochster, the second sentence on yours "This card cannot be Special Summoned except" isn't what he had. "This card can only be Special Summoned by" is also proper OCG, and is what he had originally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~{Rochster}~ Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 Maple is a girl... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tourmaline Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 Firstly, you didn't specify where you remove a card from play from. My field, my hand, my Graveyard, the top of my Deck? No matter, it's almost too powerful. The effect, though, isn't powerful enough to be scolded for. The only thing I can see this card's effect abusing is using this card's effect to remove from play your own MST, Dust Tornado (Anything of speed 2, basically) and using the selected card's effect to basically take control of an opponent's monster for free. That's it. Using this card with a SS2 card basically calls this card Change of Heart with the added effect of whatever you're getting rid of. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only e Special Summoned by selecting 3 DARK monsters in your Graveyard and removing them from play. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 card you control to take control of 1 monster your opponent controls until your End Phase. The selected monster cannot attack your opponent directly. Whaddya' think of that OCG? Also, this card is overpowered, after I think about it. It's almost always going to end up with you giving up a useless spell or trap you control to get an opponent's monster and use it for yourself, or attack directly with this for game, sometimes. I can also see you using this and SSing Glow-Up or something to changerhis card's effect to "You can use 1 monster your opponent controls to Synchro Summon 1 monster from your Extra Deck." I'm probably exaggerating, but I'm thinking of innovative ways to use this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted January 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 Fixed card but some random lettering is on wierd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tourmaline Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 What? Now the selected monster can even attack directly? Overpowered. This card would be banned or limited. Limited at the most lenient level. Now, if your opponent only has one monster on their field, you take it and attack for game, half the time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Corgi Posted January 4, 2011 Report Share Posted January 4, 2011 Well, It's not original, nor interesting. But could be good in a duel. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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