Makor Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 [spoiler=Intro dialogue w/ card specifications, uses, etc.] [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3372/yugi.jpg[/img] [b]Yugi[/b] Hey, old man! You got any new cards for me? [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4360/grandpav.jpg[/img] [b]Grandpa[/b] Yesh, Yugi, as a matter of fact I do. It's called the Magical Rainbow Vortex. [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3372/yugi.jpg[/img] [b]Yugi[/b] What does it do? [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4360/grandpav.jpg[/img] [b]Grandpa[/b] Well, if you are about to lose a duel to some douchebag that bypassed your monsters with some sneaky spell card and reduced your life points to zero, you can implant your soul in a card on your side of the field to save yourself. You only lose when that monster is destroyed. [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3372/yugi.jpg[/img] [b]Yugi[/b] Well, can you still play the duel as normal? [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4360/grandpav.jpg[/img] [b]Grandpa[/b] Pretty much---you just want to protect that monster as much as possible. [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3372/yugi.jpg[/img] [b]Yugi[/b] What does the soul-implanting process involve? [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4360/grandpav.jpg[/img] [b]Grandpa[/b] Well, that part's quite nasty. The rainbow vortex sucks in your card and your soul and makes a soul smoothie! ... And yes, it's even more painful that it sounds. [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3372/yugi.jpg[/img] [b]Yugi[/b] All the same, it's a pretty powerful card. What's the catch? [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4360/grandpav.jpg[/img] [b]Grandpa[/b] The catch is that it can be hard to use. You have to have it set on the field as it's a trap card, and you have to have a monster on the field. This might sound simple enough, but quite often when you are about to lose your opponent has destroyed your monsters and is attacking your life points directly, and no monsters on the field equals no activation. Also, you must remember that this is a normal trap---spell speed 2. If your opponent plays a counter trap, it's over---unless, of course, you have something else up your sleeve. [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3372/yugi.jpg[/img] [b]Yugi[/b] Thanks, Grandpa. This card is pretty swell. [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4360/grandpav.jpg[/img] [b]Grandpa[/b] You're welcome, Yugi---just don't use it too often. The rainbow waves have certain side effects. [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3372/yugi.jpg[/img] [b]Yugi[/b] What side effects? [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4360/grandpav.jpg[/img] [b]Grandpa[/b] *Walks away* [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3372/yugi.jpg[/img] [b]Yugi[/b] Hey! Grandpa! What side effects?! *Runs after Grandpa* [/spoiler] [spoiler=Magical Rainbow Vortex] [img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/4782/340722z.jpg[/img] Lore: This card may only be activated when you would lose a duel and you have at least one monster on your side of the field. You do not lose the duel. Choose one monster on your side of the field, if that monster is destroyed or removed from play, you lose the duel. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makor Posted January 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 Comment, please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 Wow what an unusual but amazing effect, minor OCG errors though. 9' Very interesting effect though, never seen it before, and great conversation between gramps and Yugi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makor Posted January 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 [quote name='♣Master♣' timestamp='1294621859' post='4924177'] Wow what an unusual but amazing effect, minor OCG errors though. 9' Very interesting effect though, never seen it before, and great conversation between gramps and Yugi [/quote] Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 Yeh np. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 The side effect is that it makes you look like Espa Roba...it's good, but wait! My brokesense is going crazy! There must be a Self-Destruct Button in the area... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daigusto Sphreez Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 Loved the dialogue + the inspired effect! I wouldn't say it was OP, but in certain situations it would be a literal lifesaver! A few OCG errors, presentation could be slightly better. But a really cool effect. 9/10 (1 extra point for dialogue ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 Well, it's an interesting idea, but it's quite hard to pull off and extremely situational. I mean, what are the odds that you'll have a monster that can actually help you out when you lose? However, there are cards like this that have been used in the anime, such as Relay Soul (http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Relay_Soul) that I would much rather use... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daigusto Sphreez Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 Wow, nice card ^ never knew that existed.. I would use that instead also.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makor Posted January 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 [quote name='Zextra' timestamp='1294627067' post='4924393'] Well, it's an interesting idea, but it's quite hard to pull off and extremely situational. I mean, what are the odds that you'll have a monster that can actually help you out when you lose? However, there are cards like this that have been used in the anime, such as Relay Soul (http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Relay_Soul) that I would much rather use... [/quote] That card is quite broken, though. BTW, what episode is it from---i've never seen it before? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 [quote name='Makor' timestamp='1294551911' post='4922091'] [spoiler=Intro dialogue w/ card specifications, uses, etc.] [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3372/yugi.jpg[/img] [b]Yugi[/b] Hey, old man! You got any new cards for me? [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4360/grandpav.jpg[/img] [b]Grandpa[/b] Yesh, Yugi, as a matter of fact I do. It's called the Magical Rainbow Vortex. [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3372/yugi.jpg[/img] [b]Yugi[/b] What does it do? [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4360/grandpav.jpg[/img] [b]Grandpa[/b] Well, if you are about to lose a duel to some douchebag that bypassed your monsters with some sneaky spell card and reduced your life points to zero, you can implant your soul in a card on your side of the field to save yourself. You only lose when that monster is destroyed. [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3372/yugi.jpg[/img] [b]Yugi[/b] Well, can you still play the duel as normal? [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4360/grandpav.jpg[/img] [b]Grandpa[/b] Pretty much---you just want to protect that monster as much as possible. [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3372/yugi.jpg[/img] [b]Yugi[/b] What does the soul-implanting process involve? [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4360/grandpav.jpg[/img] [b]Grandpa[/b] Well, that part's quite nasty. The rainbow vortex sucks in your card and your soul and makes a soul smoothie! ... And yes, it's even more painful that it sounds. [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3372/yugi.jpg[/img] [b]Yugi[/b] All the same, it's a pretty powerful card. What's the catch? [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4360/grandpav.jpg[/img] [b]Grandpa[/b] The catch is that it can be hard to use. You have to have it set on the field as it's a trap card, and you have to have a monster on the field. This might sound simple enough, but quite often when you are about to lose your opponent has destroyed your monsters and is attacking your life points directly, and no monsters on the field equals no activation. Also, you must remember that this is a normal trap---spell speed 2. If your opponent plays a counter trap, it's over---unless, of course, you have something else up your sleeve. [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3372/yugi.jpg[/img] [b]Yugi[/b] Thanks, Grandpa. This card is pretty swell. [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4360/grandpav.jpg[/img] [b]Grandpa[/b] You're welcome, Yugi---just don't use it too often. The rainbow waves have certain side effects. [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3372/yugi.jpg[/img] [b]Yugi[/b] What side effects? [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4360/grandpav.jpg[/img] [b]Grandpa[/b] *Walks away* [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3372/yugi.jpg[/img] [b]Yugi[/b] Hey! Grandpa! What side effects?! *Runs after Grandpa* [/spoiler] [/quote] +Rep however this is card is completely UPed... so does Relay Soul... is so easy to remove a monster from the field nowadays! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makor Posted January 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1294653058' post='4925073'] this should be in the pop[ culture unless he puts a realitstic card with a realistic effect but it does sound intresting at least [/quote] the card is underneath the dialogue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 okay then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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