Suicune17 Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 For all Naruto Fans This my Pain Cards. These cards are connected to each other so read before reply. I'll be happy to be criticized by experts. [img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/1750/184131.jpg[/img] When this is activated, "The Attendance: Six Paths of Pain" card will be summoned from the field. While this card is on the field, the user's LP is inflicted by 50 per Path on the field and all cards you have except beast-type monsters and Pain cards will be unable to be played. An 8000 points will be divided for each Pain's ATK. And can be changed once per turn. Pain's DEF is equal to its ATK. The only way to destroy this card is to be discarded by the user. If this card is destroyed, so does the Pain cards. [img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/4884/184131t.jpg[/img] Can only be used in the field if the "Rinnegan" card is activated. All Pain monster will be Special Summoned on the field. Deva, Naraka, and Human Path can be summoned on the magic/trap field. When activated, all Pains are unable to attack and is immune to magic, trap, and effects until the next turn of the user. The 8000 point counter of the "Rinnegan" card is halved when this card is destroyed and the point must be redistributed. All Pain can defend Deva from an attack. [img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/1750/184131.jpg[/img] He can Special Summon a beast-type monster to the field. Pain can also use his summoning techniques to shield himself while attacked but the defending monster's DEF will be decreased by half until the end of the defense. [img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/4884/184131t.jpg[/img] This card can attack multiple opponents on the field however, Pain's ATK will be divided by half when adding another target. Pain's ATK will be back to normal after the attack. Pain can attack the opponent directly by sacrificing his ATK. Only 1/4 of Pain's ATK goes directly. Pain regain's 1/4 of ATK after each end of turns. [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/6840/184131u.jpg[/img] When targeted by an attack, magic, trap or effect, the card is negated and destroyed. Using this immobilize Pain til the end of the turn. Pain can also destroy all monster on the field only when Pain's ATK is 8000. Using this will immobilize Pain for 3 turns. [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/1750/184131.jpg[/img] Pain can sacrifice 100LP to tap a monster on the opponent's field and immobilize both Pain and the monster. After 3 turns the monster is destroyed. [img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/1750/184131.jpg[/img] The user sacrifices 1000LP to choose a card from the opponent's hand. The user asks the opponent if it is a monster, magic, or trap. The user can cancel the effect and 1000LP tribute or continue asking. If continued and is telling the truth, the opponent can't use that card by 2 turns. If it is a lie, the user recieves 1500LP. This card can also revive a Path to the field after 2 turns. Naraka is immobile while reviving [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/1750/184131.jpg[/img] While on the Defense Position, Preta can block all magic, trap, and effect of the opponent. Each blocked card increases the user's LP by 200. The user is inflicted by the gap of Preta's DEF to the ATK of the opponent's monster multiplied by 2 if it is destroyed by it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El-Rrey Posted January 9, 2011 Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 You need to work on the OCG! Also, if you could use better arts, it would be better too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suicune17 Posted January 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2011 Does the effects needs balancing or should I just improve my card grammar? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Мερhilεs Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 [color="#800080"][b][center]You should definately improve your card grammar. Seeing as these cards have applicable effects, why are they not Effect Monsters? Divine-Types and Attributes should be avoided, but meh. The pictures are slightly stretched too. Just pointing that out...[/center][/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suicune17 Posted January 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 In the anime, Pain doesn,t have any category over the Types on the Yugioh. Pain's attribute doesn't include all except Divine. Since Pain doesn't use any elemental techniques and considering himself with godly powers because of the Rinnegan he poses. In the anime, Rinnegan is originally possessed by the Sage of the Six Paths which said to be the creator of all ninjutsu and created the Moon. Rinnegan also gives the user to control over all things in his surroundings. Those are attributes of Divine powers. Maybe he can be included in the Dark attribute since he is clouded with false beliefs and pain from the death of his loved ones. Are these cards are overpowered? Does it lacks risk on their abilities? or I should lessen the risks? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow the Hedgehog fan#1 Posted January 10, 2011 Report Share Posted January 10, 2011 [quote name='Suicune17' timestamp='1294661275' post='4925142'] In the anime, Pain doesn,t have any category over the Types on the Yugioh. Pain's attribute doesn't include all except Divine. Since Pain doesn't use any elemental techniques and considering himself with godly powers because of the Rinnegan he poses. In the anime, Rinnegan is originally possessed by the Sage of the Six Paths which said to be the creator of all ninjutsu and created the Moon. Rinnegan also gives the user to control over all things in his surroundings. Those are attributes of Divine powers. Maybe he can be included in the Dark attribute since he is clouded with false beliefs and pain from the death of his loved ones. Are these cards are overpowered? Does it lacks risk on their abilities? or I should lessen the risks? [/quote] what about earth? most ninjas whould. i mean most of the real ninjas have tthat element.in yugiohare they effects? normal cant have effects. be cause the only three divine cards are the e. gods that have effects. i might get one. the winged dragon of ra! sweet hu? im geting it in SJ. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suicune17 Posted January 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2011 I don't think so. Each ninja has its own primary Elemental Affinity. Since it is for the ninja to work on the affinity or just focus on improving their Kekkei Genkai. If it is Uchiha Itachi, I would choose Dark or Dream. Since Mangekyou Sharringgan has that attribute. I'll give Pain Dream Affinity or Dark. Still, the Divine attribute suits Pain very well. Wow, I wish I'd get Ra too. The lessen effects of Ra still are imbalanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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